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Reviewer: rolozano (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Found the story tonight and can go to sleep 'til i finish!!!! i like it very much!!! waiting for more!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you found it and started reading!  Thanks so much.  I'm working diligently on the next chapter.  Shouldn't be too much longer.

Much Love,

Jen

Reviewer: forevrnbdcolors (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Please hurry!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it!  Thanks so much for the nudge!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

WIFEY CALLING that was hillarius who put that on his phone those two need to do twenty questions to see how much they have in common.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, twenty questions, huh?  I'm sure that'd be a very interesting conversation.  May just have to work that in.

If you look back at chapter 4, Edward makes the comment that he is programming wifey's number into his phone.  It was him who put it in like that.

Thank you for your comments!

Jen

Reviewer: mrebeccan (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

I'm fucking finally back. God, a week without internet and a week in Budapest with my class = one fucking annoyed me, who is unable to read her stories.
Well onto the point.

Once again I was absolutely baffled! It's like, whenever I get an alert telling me that you've updated, I think; So what, it can't get any better than it already is, but dammit! YES IT CAN!

You just rock! I don't even know how to tell you how much I love this story.

Hope people didn't attack you too much while I was away, and if they did, I hope Elizabeth wore that Ninja Suit.

XOXO



Author's Response:

It's good to have you back!  I always look for your review.  You crack me up and make me feel like a rockstar.  Thanks for that, you are completely too kind!  I didn't get any grief at all on the whole Bella not being there thing, so thank God for that.  I was stressing about it and read the first few reviews with my hand over my face peeking through fingers.

Thanks a ton babe!

Jen

Reviewer: jackley-love (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

LOVE ITTTTT

I love when anyone says wifey... YOU ARE AUTOMATICALLY IN MY GOOD BOOKS!  (Jackson calls Ashley wifey it is sooo sweet!)

I love the way the story is turning out, and I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working my ass off getting the next chapter ready. I hope to have it to you next week. There's a teaser on the thread if your interested. Much love- Jen

Reviewer: FalconFeathers (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHA I'm not exactly certain if thats a laugh of a scream of excitment



Author's Response: hearing that it made you laugh makes my day. thats the best compliment. thanks so much!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Oh Emmett, Emmett, Emmett. You just got to love him, his foot and his mouth! Loved the birthday party, it ended a lot better than I thought it would. So glad they're going to talk now, can't wait!



Author's Response:

Yeah poor Emmett.  He does have a problem with keeping his mouth shut.  So glad you liked it!

Thanks so much,

Jen

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

OMG OMG  I was as giddy as a school girl!  I am so excited Edwards not going all get this over with already hes having second thoughts.  Which is normally before th wedding but post gives it a better base to be judged on!  SQUEE  Loved the chap and I can't wait for the next!!!

Post again soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I always love your reviews.  They make me smile!

Love to you,

Jen

Reviewer: illnevertell (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers

Great job so far! This is really different from most of the stories I have read. This Edward is a bit of an ass but its a nice change of pace from the Mr. perfect he is usually written as. Im looking forward to seeing how he evolves in this situation.   Jaimie

BTW  I'm from Va Beach, virginia



Author's Response:

Hey Jaimie-

Thank you!  I'm so glad you are reading and enjoying it.  Edward is a bit of an ass, but he'll be coming around!  Thanks for taking the time to review!

Jen

Reviewer: forevrnbdcolors (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Amazing, Amazing, Amazing!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightbrunette23 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

LOVED THE CHAPTER.  I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR CARLSISLE'S THOUGHTS.  UPDATE SOON!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Things are progressing so lots of things and feelings will be coming out soon!

Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

LOVE LOVE LOVE  as long as it is a happily ever after

 



Author's Response:

It will be HEA!  I promise!

Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

No, Angela!  Bad!  Bad Angela!  No molesting Edward under the table!  What would Ben think?

Seriously, that was hilarious.  Seems Edward and Bella have gotten things a bit backwards, no?  I love, repeat LOVE, reading about Carlisle and Emmett interacting.  Funniest thing ever.  I can just imagine Carlisle going in for the kill all suave and polite, Emmett freaking out as he realizes he needs to shut up but can't, Edward trying to get him to shut up without drawing attention to himself and Jasper just sitting back and laughing.

Most excellent.  I can't wait for ch. 13, and not just because of your little hint in your reply to my review of ch. 8.  You've got a wicked sense of humor and I love it :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I know.  I just couldn't resist using Angela.  She's always portrayed as the sweet, innocent one.  I originally wrote the chap without her, then I added her in and it has gotten a great response.  She'll be back.

I'm so glad you thought it was funny.  That's the greatest compliment.  I just can't love on Emmett enough.  And Jasper, pffff!  Love him!

I'm working on 13, mostly editing now.  The hint I gave you may not make it in that chapter, because I got so wordy with the phone call.  It's coming though.  I'm so ready to get there!

Thanks so so much!

Jen

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Very funny family fun night.  Your Edward is clever and funny.  Keep up the great writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate you taking the time to say those nice things!

Mucho love to you!

Jen

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

I really love this story. Great job. I loved the 'Wifey Calling' caller I.D/ Jasper must of done that, I think.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  In Chapter 4, Edward makes the comment "I programmed wifey's number into my phone."  I just played off of that, so it was him who did it.

Thanks for reviewing!

Jen

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

i like how she is listed lol!



Author's Response:

Me, too!  Thanks!

Reviewer: joelmelissam (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

PLEASE hurry with an update. Loving this.



Author's Response:

I will try!  I'm working on editing it now!  I will submit it this week, and given there are no problems it should go up!

Thanks so much!

Jen

Reviewer: Alanna (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

XD "Wifey Calling"! Hilarious!

Angela was a good addition to this chapter, I'm so used to Angela being this perfect, nice character, so it was interesting (and funny) to have her be like this.

I hope that if they do stay married they'll have a second ceremony and let Esme plan it. That'd be really sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Angela went over well!  A second ceremony will definitly happen!  They are gonna deserve it after all the shit I'm putting them through!

Reviewer: Leanan Sidhe (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

love it!!! can't wait for the next chapter...i'm dying over here! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm all over it!

Reviewer: Twichild369 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

love this story! Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

I love the humorius way you are writing this story, had to laugh hard when emmett pulled the Voodoo card. can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I love to hear that you thought it was funny!  That's the best compliment!

Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Loooooove it! =D Finally an update , I was impatient all the past weeks. Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Sorry for the delay.  I fail at grammar and punctuation sometimes!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

crazy angela had me cracking up! I can't wait to hear how Bella takes the dinner. I am ready for some Edward/Bella interaction! :)



Author's Response:

E/B interaction coming in the next chapter!  Thanks so much.  Angela was a hit!

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

This story never fails to crack me up.  Edward's general discomfort over the whole Bella business is funny enough, but the interaction with Angela was hysterical.  And at last they are actually gonna speak!  (And who the hell programmed Bella's number as "Wifey calling"? LMFAO!!!)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  Angela has gotten a huge reaction out of everyone.  I have to admit, I'm a little tickled with that.  Chapter 4 had Edward sitting on the couch and making the comment that he was programming wifey's number in to his phone.  After she slammed it at him and left.  So it was him.

Thanks so much!

Jen

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

LOVE IT..Love that Alice and Rose defended Bella... LOVE that Esme is encouraging Edward to not just dismiss he and Bella's connection...and marriage... So glad Angela is gone! What a bitch!!!

"Wifey calling" LOL!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm gonna try to get a teaser on the forum today so check it out! 

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