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Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Great so far..really dying to know what's going on in Bella's head though!
Author's Response: It's all coming. Next chap is BPOV!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
"I want you to be mine. Forever. Starting now."....LOVE IT!
I hate Angela..she needs to die. I do like the things that Esme said to her , though..I'm glad she knew what Angela did at the dinner.
I love that Edward saw the truth of their feelings in the DVD. Love his fantasy about he, Bella and their baby....
I am so worried and anxious about how he will fix things (hopefully) with Bella.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: I think we need a kill Angela blinkie on the thread! You won't be seeing much of her anymore. I'm tired of writing her attacking our Edward.
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: catloves18 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
omg i love this....long time reader, first time reviewer. I'm totally absorbed by this....great work :)
Author's Response: i'm so glad you reviewed! thanks so much for reading it. i understand the absorbed comment. i'm the same way with the reviews. they make me smile!
Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Please never apologize for a long chapter! That was excellent.
My only question is why Bella wouldn't respond to his text. She doesn't have to show any emotion or pregnancy in a text, so why no response at all?
Great story & chapter.
Author's Response: chapter 15 will reveal what bella was up to. her head is all wobbly obbly over the pregnancy. as always, thanks for reviewing. much love:)
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
That's not right, I'm sitting at work (supposed to be working) but I saw there was new chapter and just when it's getting good, you end it...arrrrrrrrgh! Come on I'm bored and too tired to work, give me another chapter!!!
I have to say that Emmett and Edward are wimps, LOL! Neither of them could get the balls to ask Bella or Rose if they were pregnant.
Author's Response: i'm so sorry. i was originally gonna stop it at like eight thousand but just couldn't. after i hit 12 thousand i knew i had to. thanks for the review and i agree about j and em:)
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
AAAHHHH! I'm vibrating in my seat here! Ooooh, I so can't wait for the next chapter, I am just in looove with this story! I did a happy dance when I saw this update, love it!
Author's Response: i did a happy dance when i saw your review! love the vibrating! i'll try to get the next chap out as fast as i can.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Great chapter. Esme is going to Seattle. Edward is going to be a daddy. Thank goodness for Mirror, Mirror position. Got so cared away forget to shield. Bella does owe him the knowledge. With 5 tests positive it is obvious that she's pregnant, Edward has a right to know about the baby. Even if she still wants the annulment that fact has to brought out into the open. Being pregnant will defintely postpone the proceedings. Esme going to be a grandmother, she will be so excited, escatic actually. It was mean of Alice not to tell Jasper which friend. Whether it's Rose or Bella, both Em and Edward deserve to be kept informed. Since the stories of Bella not being seen much by Em and Jazz, and having flu like symptoms the obvious answer is Bella is pregnant. Edward should have a duplicate of the DVD made and send to Bella just like the bracelet. But since his mother is on her way to Seattle, Edward will be flying out on the next flight. So looking forward to face to face Bella and Edward time. The spark/connection will be obviously seen between them, especially in front of mom's watchful eye. She'll see her son really does have feelings for Bella. He has tried to deny it, but he knows it. Wonder if delay with Mike was mom's doing, so that it gave Edward more time to think before signing the papers. Mom knows Edward wouldn't go into the office alone with Angela there alone, so would be safe he wouldn't sign until later. Esme is pretty smart cookie. Knows her son inside and out. Edward really gave himself away with the bracelet saying "MINE." Way to go Mom (Esme.)
Author's Response: Wow, great review! I love hearing all your thoughts. The reason I didn't have Alice tell which friend is because I wanted Edward to hear it from Bella. Esme is my hero right now.
Thanks for taking the time to write that review. It's great!
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Sorry, sweetie! The previous review should have been on chapters 1-14!!
Waiting!!
Author's Response: No prob!
Hurrying!
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
I am lovin' this story, darlin'! I especcially like the image Edward had of a very preggers Bella with his arms around her rubbing her tummy! Awesome!Can hardly wait for the next chapter!
I must confess that I used to be just a reader and lurkerer, but since I've started posting my own fic, I realize how important they are to the writer. I hereby promise to review each chapter of each story I read!
Again, Lovin' this one !!
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
GIVE IT!
Author's Response: LMAO! love the short and to the point. i'm working on it.
Reviewer: CS3 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
SO INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! LOVE THEM LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed it. thanks so much! the long chapters seem to be a hit. thats good because i am quite wordy.
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
OOOhhhhh! This is going to be good. I am glad that Esme is taking things into her own hands. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: esme may not necessarily be intending to meddle. she did promise edward. chapter 15 will reveal all. thanks so much:)
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
I love this story. Bless Esme for going to Seattle, he never would have gone otherwise. Look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: i'm so glad you're enjoying it. next chap is the face to face to face. edward bella esme. its gonna be fun!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
WOW! I love this story.It's so well written.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
This fic is one of my absolute favourites and it keeps getting better. I was practically on the edge of my seat reading this chapter and I can barely contain my excitement that Edward and Bella are finally going to meet again. They need to both understand that the connection is real and that it's still there for both of them. They surely also need to address the possibility that they may become parents! And will this affect the annulment? I thought that a marriage could only be annulled for a limited number of reasons, the main one being non-consumation .... and clearly there was a surfeit of consumating going on! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it and review each time. I really apreesh!
I'm working on the face to face. I think you will like it. Edward is a changing!
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: Tinuviel (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers
Hey, just started reading and this story is just sooo hilarious!! But Edward is a real ass, but I hope that's going to change in the future chapters?!
Oh and to answer your question in the authors note; I'm from Germany! :-D
Thank you for posting this story and making my day in the office a lot more fun,
Sarah!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
I sure hope Esme's going to Seattle to talk some sense into a probably histerical Bella. Shame on her for meddling! LMAO Someone has to Stupidward won't man up, at least not yet! ;) Great job!
Author's Response: Esme is my hero. Just keep in mind: she is loyal to her family and she promised Edward she wouldn't meddle. Of course, if technically, Bella is family. Sorry, thinking out loud. Hope I didn't confuse you.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
LOVE,
JEn
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Thanks for giving us such a long chapter. Although reading it this morning made me late for work :)
Author's Response: Oops, my apologies to your boss!
Reviewer: kimmysunshine (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
wow our bella bear is pregnant !!!! *happy dance* emmett is ust brill !! laughed my socks off :)
huggs, kimmy xoxo
Author's Response: *happy dancing with you*
I'm so excited! I do love Emmett!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Thank you for updating! I think i am obsessed!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: twilly (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
I cannot wait for the E/B face to face. I'm giddy just thinking about it.
Is 775 how many reviews yoou need to update?
Author's Response: I surpassed 775 and it surprised the hell out of me! I'm all finished with the next chap, so it should be up soon!
Thanks,
Jen
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
That was awesome. I love the boys sweating bullets. And Esme do a little medling, HMMM! can't wait to see what she finds out.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the boys, too! They are so fun to write!
***hugs***
Jen
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
Please update soon!!! Pretty please?
Author's Response: The next chap went to be beta'd this morn. Shouldn't be too long!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: looneyL (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
i love this story and am checking for updates all the time please review again soon!
LB
Author's Response: Thank you! There's a great teaser on the thread. Go check it out!
**hugs**
Jen
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