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Reviewer: bennyjo (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Really like your story, even if Edward is a assward most of the time. Please! Please! Please! update as soon as possible. Thank You.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!
Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
That was a great chapter. EPOV was great. I am so glad that he has real feelings for Bella - I just hope he can tell her soon.
Bella picturing the three of them as a family leaves me hopeful that they will find a way to be together like they both want to be.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoy writing EPOV, so I'm tickled that you like how it comes across! There is a lot of discussion coming up in the next chapter! Which is EPOV, too. I'm excited for it!
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
When's the next chapter? When is it? BTW, I just want you to know that I REALLY appreciate long chapter where lots of things go on like this one. I hate waiting forever to find out what happens next. So thanks so much for this wonderful chapter! :-)
I thought it was funny that they both each ordered pad thai. Thai food, like most Asian food, is meant to be eaten family style, which means that usually several dishes are ordered at once and shared among all. It's just funny to me how Americans eat Asian food. I know, it's weird.
Author's Response: Next chapter should be coming soon. I hope to iron out the wrinkles and send it to beta tonight. The next chapters won't be quite as long, so I'll apologize in advance! This chapter was huge, because it covered a lot, had both pov's, and it was the most important to me. I needed to get it right.
I probably dropped the ball on the pad thai. I don't actually eat Asian food, so I had no idea. I just googled around, found out what was popular and good in the Seattle area, and went with it. I probably should've researched some more. Apologies for that, too.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Keep it coming!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
So good, I'm so glad that Edward is softening a little. Love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I think Edward needs to "clean-up" his phone now that he is going to be a Daddy! Curious as to how they'll compromise on the long-distance thing. I would really like to see Bella make it to NY and tell Angela off in the most superior waay possible. REally make her feel like shit that Edward is married and an expectant father(not that she knew)! I guess I am confessing to being in a vicious mood today, so if that does not work in the story, I get it :D
Author's Response: LOL! I kinda like the idea of a Angela/Bella face-off. We'll have to see about that!
Vicious moods often display superior ideas! Thanks for sharing!
Jen
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Good thing you didn't split up the chapter! I can't wait for the next update I don't think i can sanely wait for the next one I'm hooked
I Can't wait to see how Esme reacts to the news and how Edward reacts to his mother- and how Bella reacts too.
The whole OB scene with the heartbeat and the hand holding was super sweet. These two need to get their heads out of their asses and hook up alaready and move to New York to be together :)
Please post the next chapter ...PLLLLEEEEAAAASEEEEE !!!!
Author's Response: I think I would've been in BIG trouble if I had split it! I couldn't, in good conscience, do it! It was an important chapter and I wanted you guys to feel the full effect!
Next chap is Esme discussion. I just love her, and can't wait to reveal it. It's written, so it shouldn't be too long!
I'm so glad you liked the doctor's office scene. I really loved writing that. I think heads will be coming out of asses very soon.
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Wow I so not envy them two having to face Esme and Alice all in one sitting. They should wear combat suits, can't wait to read the next chapter and how those two love bird fair until they come clean with each other, and go for the happy ending that I hope you are writing????
Author's Response: No worries, it will be HEA! I've got a few more things up my sleeve, but we'll get there!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Jen
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I'm so glad that you didn't split up the chapter! It seems like forever since the last update (can you tell I'm hopelessly hooked?)
Can't wait to see how Edward reacts to his mother- and how Bella reacts too.
Wonder if Edward is going to be able to "man up" and share his feelings with Bella. Wonder if Bella is going to be able to tell Edward her feelings too...
It's going to be fun reading to see who cracks first. My guess? Well, let's just say the annulment is going to be dead in the water.
Author's Response: I just couldn't split it. Much to the dismay of my beta, but I felt it was more effective as a whole. So glad you're addicted.
Next chap is the discussion with Esme. It's already written, I'm just waiting for all the feedback on this one. I'll try to not hold out too long!
Things are gonna get fluffy for a bit, so yes, I think some "manning up" will be happening.
A talk about the discussion is coming soon. Don't forget Edward has an appt with Newton on Thursday. This chap was Wednesday...
Reviewer: twitipat (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Love it! So glad they are talking and not fighting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Great Chapter!!!! I'm glad Bella let Edward go to the OB with her and share that with her. I CAN NOT wait to see Esme's reaction. I totally LOVE this Esme, she rocks. Between her and Alice, it should be quite a three ring circus. UPDATE soon por favor!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Bella will not be pulling that "push him out of her and the baby's life" thing. I can't write that, because a) I suck at writing angst, and b) I don't agree with that and think he deserves to be involved.
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
You know we love to reveiw this was a great chapter ,Alice going overboard as usual ,Edward getting school for cussing at his mom the two of them finaly starting to work together ,the text messages between them and Esme was hilarius. I loved the doctors OFFice scene girl you rocked this chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're reviewing! It motivates me so much! I really appreciate the kind words! Reviewers ROCK! I just play along!
**hugs**
Jen
Reviewer: nlw (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I just started reading this story last week and I absolutely love it! And this chapter was so sweet. Poor Edward trying so hard to be a jerk and he just couldn't pull it off. I can't wait to see him fumble around talking to Esme. LOL.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you found it! And more excited that you love it! You came along just in time to get to the fluffy stuff. More lemons coming soon! Next up is the discussion with Esme and a little more face to face convo with Edward and Bella!
Reviewer: Iamnotobssessed (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Can't wait to see how Esme will react. Please update soon and this was a great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chap is written and ready to go. The reviews motivate me to get it up quickly!
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
That was just amazing!!!!! I hope they work things out! Great great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!
Reviewer: epm0001 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Please, Please, Please post it today. PLEASE. This is sooooo good. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: LOL! It won't be today, but I promise it won't be too long!
Reviewer: cag4288 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
pleeeease update soon!!!
Author's Response: Chapter 16 is ready to go! I just have to get it beta'd. Should be soon!
Reviewer: lilyoftheval5 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
Quite awesome.
Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: micilyne (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I love this story line.
I hope they get together eventually.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I think you'll be happy with the ending.
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Woo hoo!!!! What a nice ending for the chapter. I am so glad he went to the doctor with her. I hope that this meeting goes well and they get to know each other. Love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing this chapter. This is the stuff I've been excited to get to!
Reviewer: lola424 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
YEAH!!! Tha cat is out of the bag!! Lvoe it so much!! Currently one of my fave fics!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I'm so glad you like it. I'm excited about where it's going!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one and Esme!
Author's Response: I know. I really wanted to get the Esme conversation in this chapter, but obviously it just got too long. It's coming up next though. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Great chapter. I love how Edward is handling the situation.
Author's Response: Oh, me too. I just couldn't do the whole freak out and leave her thing. I needed some good times.
Glad you liked it, too. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I needed that. We've had to wait soooo long. I'm glad the next chapter is ready. Post soon please! Are they gonna make their way back to one another (some more lemons) before the 9 months are up or will the awkward the whole time? Edward needs to man up and just asault her month, she won't be able to resist.
Author's Response: I really needed that too! I have been waiting to write this stuff. Things are gonna be good for them for a bit. I'm in dire need of some fluff, and yes there will be a lemon or two...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Yeah! He knows! They seem like they want to work it out.
Author's Response: I think you're right...
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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