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Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I feel so greedy, with this chapter being fuckawesome long and all, but please put up the next chapter soon!!! Like this weekend? Or this afternoon? Hahaha...sorry, I'm just excited, feel free to take your time.
I'm so proud of Bella for inviting Edward to the appointment instead of just running out the door without an explanation! I would've been so mad at the ultrasound tech if she would've made me think I was having twins. It would've been really funny if E and B pretended that they were really excited for twins and then the tech would've have to tell them it was just one baby.
Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! It really shouldn't be too much longer on the next chapter!
I considered doing the twin scare, then decided there was enough stress going on without it. I think Edward might've fainted!
Thank you for reading and reviewing,
Jen
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
As always, a great piece of work!! Gonna post another teaser???
Author's Response: Thanks babe! Yes, I will be posting another teaser! I'm trying to figure out a few things that need to be covered in the chapter. As soon as I get the wrinkles out, I'll put something up. Hopefully, this weekend!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: sugar mama (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
oh no, where is NEXT, please write some more....
how long is the flight from one side of USA to the other, these folks treat it like jumping on a bus! ha ha ha
Author's Response: I know, right! I promise not to wait too long on the next chapter! The reviews for this one have been awesome, and I can't wait to get more! It's my addiction. I'll feed yours if you feed mine! You guys came through, and so will I!
I think the flight thing has a lot to do with the expendable amount of money the Cullens have! It's a 6 1/2 hour flight, but the time changes so they would have gained three hours getting there. There could very well be some mistakes in the time frame, so just don't do the math. LOL! We'll just all pretend it works out.
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: chloeswan (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
i really love this story! i like that they are finally talking... i really wanna know if it turns out ok!!
love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
oh my, I LOVED the long chapter! I am so addicted to this story! I can't wait for more interaction :) MORE PLEASE!!! Feed my addiction (I really don't want to clean house) LOL
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so very much! I'm addicted to the reviews, so since you fed my addiction, I'll return the favor! I'll do my best to get the next chapter up soon!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
i really like this story, just found it today. i love the meddling from everyone.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to read it! There's so much out there, and for you to choose mine flatters me!
Thanks so much!
Jen
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
So, I came across your fic today while browsing. I'm so glad I began reading it! It is so enjoyable and now I'm left at a point where I'm wondering where their relationship is headed. How are they going to handle this? They are on opposite sides of the country! YIKES! Looking forward to the next chapter like you wouldn't believe! Now I'm going to check out the thread and see what's there!
Kat
Author's Response: Hey Kat-
Thanks so much for choosing to read mine! I'm so glad you like it! You wouldn't believe the problems it poses having them on opposite sides of the country! It's ridiculous! They are gonna have a few hurdles to jump to make it work, that's for sure. Glad you're checking out the thread. Keep an eye out, I'll be posting a teaser for the next chapter over there soon!
**hugs**
Jen
Reviewer: lbterral (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I was so glad to have both POV"S in this chapter!! Great chapter Jen and I cannot wait to see Esme's reaction when they tell her!!
Lori
Author's Response: Hey Lori-
Thank you so much! I hadn't done two pov's in one chapter, so I was a little nervous about it! I'm so glad you liked it; I thought it was effective. I really wanted the full effect on this one. It was important to me. It seems to have gone over very well!
Esme is up next!
Jen
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
oh totally love love love this chapter it was so awesome! love it love it. I can't wait for more story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Oooh! Edward finally mans up, sorta. Bella with the ups and downs...and now add Esme in the mix! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Yes, Edward took it better than expected. I wanted their connection to overpower everything else!
Next chapter coming soon!
Jen
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I'm glad that they are actually talking to eachother. I can't wait to see how esme's reaction.
Author's Response: Discussion with Esme is coming up next!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
can't wait for esme's reaction!
Author's Response: Oh, you're not the only one! Everyone is excited about that!
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers
great story!!!!!! i'm from a little town in the country called Harvest in Alabama
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
That went way better than expected. There is nothing scarier than the unplanned wait for that stupid strip to turn pink.
Author's Response: Nothing scarier at all!
Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
ok time for Edward to step up his game!
Author's Response: Agreed!
Reviewer: TheDSP (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
God, pregnant emotions lol
First Bella decides Edward is a horrible person just because he got grumpy on the phone, as if she never gets grumpy herself when someone is trying to back her into something she isn't comfortable with.
Then Bella is enraged at Edward for not telling her he remembered them not using a comdom once. What good would that have done? lol It was a little too late for a morning after pill.
And then She fucking flipps out of him when he is not 100% prepared for her to be pregnant. As if she herself was all fucking excited when she found out. I think I remember her yelling and screaming and throwing things when she find out. And she has had a couple of days to get used to the idea. But she acts as if just because Edward is a little freaked out, that that means he is some dead beat who doesn't want to be there. He's only human. It seems to me like Edward settled with the idea of a baby FAR quicker than Bella did. He had 5 minutes to get with the program, where as she had days.
Her mood swings are killer, lol.
It was a great chapter though. I'm glad Edward stood up to her a little. He could of done more... gotten mad at her for not returning his calls and texts after their mini-fight, gotten mad at her for treating him like shit after she told him she was pregnant. But something is better than nothing I guess ;)
Author's Response: I don't really have a defense for Bella. I really want to defend her, but everything you said is true. I give credit to Rose for bringing up the fact that maybe Edward didn't think the mirror memory was real. That seemed to pull Bella back down from the anger of that. Also, her flipping out is just a defense mechanism. It's habit for her, but she quickly corrects it and opens up to the idea of him a little by telling him about the doctor's appt.
This won't be a story where Bella pushes him away or acts as if she has complete control over the child. She knows that he is the father and it's his right to participate.
I was just really ready to have them get along a little. Maybe that's why Edward didn't stand up to her as much as he should've. I wanted the connection to overpower the anger.
Thanks so much for all of your thoughts,
Jen
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
awesome!!!!! next chapter please....lol
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's written, I've just gotta get it beta'd. I'll try not to hold on to it too long!
Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
LOVE IT!!! Great long update!!! Keep em coming!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Love it!! So glad she told him and that things are going well....they do need to talk about other things...after they deal with the immediate..
Love this story and can't wait for more...please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! They will be discussing some other things in the next chapter. I'm so glad you love it!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Great chapter... Bella is very lucky to have Rose and Alice, they are great friends... I am so excited for Esme to meet Bella... I hadn't realized 5 1/2 weeks had already passed...
Sexiest Line Ever:
"If her scent lingered when she was gone, I would be purchasing this car."
Author's Response: Funny, you are the 2nd reviewer to comment how much they liked that line. Edward is HAWT when he's all torn up over Bella. I love writing it, and I'm so glad you liked it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Jen
Reviewer: Thinkingofyou (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I loved that he is taking responsiblity. Go Edward! Esme is funny. I would love to have a mother-in-law like her.
Author's Response: You'll get more Esme in the next chapter. They will be telling her.
Reviewer: Hurricame1 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I have to admit I was cracking up when Alice bought the Twizzlers and complained that Bella was stressing her out. I can totally see he character doing that. I needed the laugh the whole family has been sick all week with fevers, coughs, colds, etc.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I'm so glad it lightened your day. I hope your family gets well soon! Boo on the sickness!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: kejce (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I laughed so hard when Bella chewed his butt out. I fully expected him to say something like, "It's your hormones talking," while Bella was yelling at him and her to just go off on him further.
I really like how things went after Bella asked him if he wanted to go to her appointment with her. I'm wondering if she would be open to moving to NY. There's just so much they are not saying to one another, but I suppose sometimes that's how relationships go.
I really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to seeing what you have in store next.
Kris
Author's Response: Hey Kris-
I'm so glad you liked the chapter. I hope it came off as I intended. I wanted, no wait, I needed to have some fluff in there for a bit. I think they need that too!
Next chapter will have some more discussion between E and B.
Thanks so much-
Jen
Reviewer: Hurricame1 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I have to admit I was cracking up when Alice bought the Twizzlers and complained that Bella was stressing her out. I can totally see he character doing that. I needed the laugh the whole family has been sick all week with fevers, coughs, colds, etc.
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Yay! Update happy dance! Thank you for the nice, long chapter! Loved having both pov's. Very curious as to how this will all work out! :-)
Now they get to face both Alice and Esme as they descend upon them. I envision chaos over the ultrasound pics resulting in a very dizzy Bella who ultimately pukes up all her pad thai! (or not) :-)
Author's Response: I'm doing the review happy dance! I love reading all of your thoughts on it!
Next up is Alice and Esme, I really hope you like it!
Jen
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