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Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Hooray! I don't have to beat Edward with this chair after all? THANK GOD! (sets chair on floor, sits in it and leans back) Now....where to begin with my lenghty review??
*Ok, I'm gonna admit to something crazy here. I kept the pregnancy tests from both of my kids...it's with all their baby stuff. I guess that is gross but I am a sentimental slob....so I loved that Alice did that for Bella...although 4 may be a tiny bit over the top! But that is Alice!! lol
*Loved the girls dancing to the music...that was fun! I got a case of the giggles when Bella slammed her phone into the wall as hard as she could and Alice got all pissy. I really love the interaction between the 3 girls.
*LOVED Bella and Edward's confrontation. He was a jerk at first...but once it swtiched to his POV, his actions made sense. And I made a decision to allow him to live after all. (lol)
*The dr appt was my fave part of the chapter, of course. Edward was so cute and unsure of himself. And I love how the nurse knew who to call back by what Bella said....heehee. So sweet how he got all gooey over seeing "his spot" during the ultrasound. GAH!
*Their dinner afterwards was relaxed and easy. They have a LOT to figure out. I'm glad he didn't tell Bella about the appt with Mike Newton. I'm so wanting them to work things out. Just stay married a little longer guys....
*Love how you ended the chapter with them getting ready to confront Esme. That is going to be wild! She is going to be ecstatic I'll bet!
I loved Edward's line about if the car still smelled like Bella after she got out, that he would be buying it. Too funny!!! You are so rockin my world with this story, Jengirl! MWAH!!! :o)
Author's Response: Edward is quite relieved you put the chair down! You're not the only crazy one. I have mine too. I bet I can even trump your crazy with the fact that I have the clamp that was on their umbilical cords. Yeah, I'm sentimental, too. We are of the same, sister!
Love love love everything in your review! A lot of ppl liked the car smelling like Bella part. I've heard that more than onced. Thanks for taking the time to review, you know you didn't have to!
Much love chicka,
Jen
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
MORE PLEASE! LOL.
Author's Response: I'm gonna try to send it to beta tonight. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
That was some funny shit!! And Angela oh my who would seriously just throw themselves at someone like that after they are aparently not interested! He has finally said some of his feelings out loud and now he should see what Bella has to say about them. Am I the only one that thinks that it is cute that he put her phone number in his phone as wifey???
Author's Response: No, you weren't the only one to think that at all. Although, a lot of ppl missed that he was the one who did it. I guess that's the advantage to reading it in one sitting. I'm so glad you found it funny! Angela as the ho, who would've thunk it?
Reviewer: Orchidsrnaughty (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
omg!!!! this story is rocking awesome!!!! lol....it puts me in mind of two songs.....carrie underwood's "I Don't Even Know My Last Name", and katy perry's "Waking Up in Vegas" they both seem to fit your story.......can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
Author's Response: Agreed on the songs. Katy Perry is my ringtone. Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like it and are excited about it!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP!
That's me fan girl hyperventilating. HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!
They're together. They need to fall in love!
AHHH!!!
*bounces up and down*
NEXT CHAPTER PLLLLEAAASEEEEEEE?
Author's Response: LMAO! You're funny! Take deep breaths!
The next chapter should be going to beta tonight. Shouldn't be too long!
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
LOVED IT!!!!!! Thank you for giving us the chappie in whole and not breaking it up.....I really loved the aprt when the nurse said to Edward the god like man who looks like he is having a nervous breakdown....LOL!! That was just too freaking hilarous.....hahaha....I am glad that they were able to go together to the doctor's office together and they seen and heard the baby together....I am so looking forward to see what Esme's reaction and how the go about telling her the news....
Author's Response: Thanks so much babe! I was so happy with this chapter. Now, we're getting into the stuff that I love. I'm gonna try to draw his time in Seattle out as long as I can!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I'm so glad Edward freaked out and got on that plane to follow Esme. At least they're talking again. This was wonderful and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's such a relief to have them on the same side of the country!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Ahhh he is getting into her head the same as she is to him!! And their friends are just trying to get them to see what is happening to them and what kind of mistake they are making by not giving this a chance!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 Communication
HaHa I am loving that Esme is bothering the boys to try to get information out of them. I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner because that should prove to be quite entertaining. B and E seem to be getting along better now too!
Author's Response: Just wanted to apologize for misspelling reading. Just getting used to the qwerty keyboard on my phone. Not illiterate. Lol!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings
I am glad that Jake is awake and his sisters actions are really stupid on her part. Yes she had to pick up Jake's broken heart after they broke up but did she ever think that it was just as much Jake's fault as Bella's that they broke up? And here is Jerkward again!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're readibg! I love ppl who read it and review as they go. I get to experience it all over again. Jake held my heart through this part. Not usually a jake fan, but I loved him a little bit after writing him the way I wanted him. Thanks again!
Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Awwww he went to the doctors appointment with her!
Sweet :)
LOVE this story, really cheers me up.
-Hannah
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. I think we all needed a little fluff!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia
He is regretting being an ass to Bella but is trying to push his feelings to the side. I don't think that is going to work if his friends and hers for that matter have anything to say about it.
Author's Response: Lots of intervening coming soon!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
FANTASTIC!!!
I love how the story is going so far, and I have no doubts that this story will reach the 1000 review milestone soon! Possibly even with this or the next chapter!
I love Edward and Bella, and how Edward was thinking about the sweet couple.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I can't believe the response to this thing! I started it just hoping to have a small audience. It has blown me away. 1000 is beyond me. I have to hurry up and post the next chapter so I can reward the 1000th reviewer! Thanks so much for all of your kind words. They only add to my motivation!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Name the bar? Hmmmm.....well I believe I remember it mentioned in earlier chapters that bands/musicians play there so my suggestion is.....drumroll........"Ultrasound". ;-) (what can I say--I was inspired by your latest chapter!)
Oh, and on a technical note.....actually this early in a pregnancy a trans-vaginal ultrasound would have been performed and the heartbeat and fetus would've been quite visible. (This is based on my own experience at 7 weeks) It truly is amazing and quite a sight. *sigh* That baby just started highschool!
Author's Response: I haven't checked yet, but if you haven't go post your recomendation for the bar name on the forum. I'm gonna choose from there and that's a GREAT one. Your probably right about the ultrasound being done that way and I considered that but wasn't comfortable w edward being present for that just yet. And I really wanted him there. Sigh that your baby is in high school. My oldest is in 3rd grade. They just grow too fast! Thanks so much for your input!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past
Oh God who was standing behind them??? It was probally one of Jake's sisters!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
This story is so great!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I love it!! Great chapter they were so cute. I love how much Edward feels for Bella. I can't wait for future chapters.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! There will be two more chapters before he goes back. I can't resist dragging it out. My lord, I drug the separation out for like 12 chapters! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
It's not nice to tease! I can't believe you stopped there! This chapter was perfect. I love how she let him go to the doctor with her even though she was unsure about his sudden appearance. The whole scene at the doc's office just made me sigh and love your Edward more. It gave me serious warm and fuzzies! That being said I hope you plan to update ASAP Because I MUST know how the conversation with Esme goes. And when do we get to see Carlisle's reaction? Can you tell I'm a little impatient? Make me happy and UPDATE already!!!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I just knew my beta would kill me if I went any further! 15000 words nearly did that anyway! I plan to send the chapter to my beta tonight. Hopefully it won't take too long! We've gotta get to Esme! Carlisle will be addressed soon.
Thanks so much!
Jen
Reviewer: MizUnderstood (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
OMG!!!!! this was good, i just want them to kiss and make up already!!!!!!! also i want to see how crazy esme is gonna go.....can't wait!!!!
Author's Response: Stay tuned for some lip action in chapter 16! You're gonna love it!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
glad to see these two talk and to start working a few things out,its like winning the lottery without buyong a ticket
Author's Response: Lol! Love the analogy!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
glad to see these two talk and to start working a few things out,its like winning the lottery without buyong a ticket
Author's Response: LMAO! Love the analogy!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers
Why do I think that they are going to run into problems with getting the annulment done and over with so that Edward can go on with his life? I am really liking the story but I am not liking Edward's atitude right now.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Awww... LOVED the scene at the doctor's! Can't wait for the talk with Esme!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really loved writing it!
Reviewer: Ryley Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
I just started reading this storyand Im addicted!!! please update soon!!!! :)
Author's Response: So glad you found it! Thanks for letting me know what you think!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
LOL I spent most of the day reading this story all the way I'm falling in love with it I hope you update soon
Author's Response: I'm so glad you took the time to read it and thanks for letting me know what you think!
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