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Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Haha, Twizzlers make everything better.

How could they not know what Nutella is?  It's awesome!!



Author's Response:

Twizzlers do make everything better!  I believe the energy required to chew on one relieves much stress!  LOL!  It's like an extra long chewy cigarette!

LOVE Nutella!

Thanks so much,

Jen

Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?

Yes, Edward!  Go to her!

No, Angela!  Bad!  squirts her with water

Way to go, Esme!  Woohoo!

Hope all those made sense :)

Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror

Ha!  I knew it way back in chapter 9!  She's knocked up!  How will playboy-ward handle being daddy-ward?

Those didn't mesh as smoothly as I was hoping, but you get the idea...

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Woohoo hmm Alice and Esme both with baby giddyness!!!  OMG

Reviewer: Mera Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

YES!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I love the line, "Isabella said you would be easy to find.  She said you would be the God-like man who looked like he was about to have a nervous breakdown.” it was so hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapter!

-Mera Cullen



Author's Response: I've heard more than once that line was loved. It made me giggle to write it! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: sol cullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

So they are goin to have a baby together !!!!!!!!!!!! I hope they realise that they belong together , I really like your history is awesome :D I can't wait to see what Esme is goin to said , that will be fun to read ! I don't think that the graddads taked so well but I will have to wait and see .

Great chapter !!! sorry about my inglish but is not my lenguage i am from argentina but i really want to review your history!!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response: Wow! It is the oddest thing to me to have someone in argentina reading my story. Thanks so very much. Your english is fine! I really appreciate you taking the time to review!

Reviewer: marissaLOVE (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

awww im so glad they kinda made up(:

i cant wait for bella to be further along

please update soon

 



Author's Response: Me too! I was sick of them being so far away from one another!

Reviewer: sweetpea212003 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

This is my favorite story! It makes me so happy to see an update. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

loving it, but they have to stop being sooo f@#$ing crazy about each other. cant wait for the updates.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Update should be soon!

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

I'm glad that Edward and Bella finally see each other!!! I thought he was going to totally freak and make the situation a lot more stressful, but it was good to see him grow a pair and act like a man and actually be there for Bella while she was at a doctor's appt. I know they are a long way from a HEA, but I like this step. Although I do think that Edward needs to do something really nice for his mom, he had no right to be so disrespectful.



Author's Response: He does seem to be doing a lot of assuming when it comes to esme. I'll have to be sure to add in him doing something great for her.

Reviewer: twilightbrunette23 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

One of the best chapters yet.  Please let him kiss her before he leaves!!



Author's Response: Next chap will make you happy!

Reviewer: evabell (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

MORE MORE MORE :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Your excitement makes me smile!

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Super chapter. Was really worried that they would continue arguing and being angry. So glad they've started communicating and finally actually seeing each other! Long may their spark continue!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  At least for a few more chapters there will be some heat!  Unfortunately, we have to get Edward back to the bar and NY.  Of course, then we can always fall back on those delicious texts.  LOL!  Stay tuned!

Jen

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Great chapter!  What a way to find out, but glad he was OK with it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

I'm happy that's finally out and in the open! Can't wait to see what happens with these to! Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Ok seriously when are we updating?? cause I am dying here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're funny!  It'll be a few days.  Thanks so much for being so excited about it.  Love that you went to the thread, too!

Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Another great chapter.  Keep 'em coming (double meaning intended!).



Author's Response:

Keep reading babe!  I'm taking that double meaning to the bank!

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

SO I loved it!!!!!!!!!

But you need to post soon I can't wait to see Esme and Bella together



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cleodevere (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Oh my goodness!  I haven't been reading a lot of Twilight fics lately - was losing interest a little bit but now, I'm completely immersed again!  i love your story!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much!  I'm so flattered!  I hope you'll keep reading and let me know what you think about it.  I love to read all of the reactions and suggestions, so anything you have, just send it my way!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

They so want each other it's not even funny!  Can't wait to hear about their discussion with Esme.  Carlisle is already worried, this should just about put him over the edge.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that connection has definitly overpowered!  I was so ready to get to this stuff!  Discussion with Esme coming up, and Carlisle will definitly be addressed before too long.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Oh man... I thought that Bella was going to rip his throat out! And now she not only has to meet Esme but tell her that she is going to be a Grandma!!



Author's Response:

Believe me when I say, Esme is gonna FLIP!  In a good way!  Of course, she saw the shirt, too, so more than likely she has a good idea.

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?

Oh boy! he is pissed!! All the guys are freaking out about the test that is kinna funny because we all know that one person should be freaking out about it right now and that is the one that wants to end a marriage that he might not be able to now.



Author's Response:

I love writing the banter between the boys!

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror

Well I guess now we all have the answer to the question that Edward was trying to get out of Bella....

Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Hooray!  I don't have to beat Edward with this chair after all?  THANK GOD!  (sets chair on floor, sits in it and leans back) Now....where to begin with my lenghty review??

*Ok, I'm gonna admit to something crazy here.  I kept the pregnancy tests from both of my kids...it's with all their baby stuff.  I guess that is gross but I am a sentimental slob....so I loved that Alice did that for Bella...although 4 may be a tiny bit over the top! But that is Alice!! lol *Loved the girls dancing to the music...that was fun! I got a case of the giggles when Bella slammed her phone into the wall as hard as she could and Alice got all pissy. I really love the interaction between the 3 girls. *LOVED Bella and Edward's confrontation.  He was a jerk at first...but once it swtiched to his POV, his actions made sense.  And I made a decision to allow him to live after all.  (lol)  *The dr appt was my fave part of the chapter, of course.  Edward was so cute and unsure of himself.  And I love how the nurse knew who to call back by what Bella said....heehee.  So sweet how he got all gooey over seeing "his spot" during the ultrasound. GAH!  *Their dinner afterwards was relaxed and easy.  They have a LOT to figure out. I'm glad he didn't tell Bella about the appt with Mike Newton.  I'm so wanting them to work things out.  Just stay married a little longer guys.... *Love how you ended the chapter with them getting ready to confront Esme.  That is going to be wild!  She is going to be ecstatic I'll bet! I loved Edward's line about if the car still smelled like Bella after she got out, that he would be buying it.  Too funny!!! You are so rockin my world with this story, Jengirl!  MWAH!!!   :o)

Author's Response:

Edward is quite relieved you put the chair down!  You're not the only crazy one.  I have mine too.  I bet I can even trump your crazy with the fact that I have the clamp that was on their umbilical cords.  Yeah, I'm sentimental, too.  We are of the same, sister!

Love love love everything in your review!  A lot of ppl liked the car smelling like Bella part.  I've heard that more than onced.  Thanks for taking the time to review, you know you didn't have to!

Much love chicka,

Jen

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

MORE PLEASE! LOL.



Author's Response:

I'm gonna try to send it to beta tonight.  Thanks for reading!

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