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Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
loove where it is heading, yes i hope there will be some lemony goodness in the next chapter. i am sad that he didnt end up staying with her, even if they didnt have sex. please let them find their way soon.
Author's Response: Hey-
I'm so glad you're liking it! Thanks so much! Lemony goodness is coming, I think! I thought it was a little to soon for him to stay with her, but that may change very soon!
***hugs***
Jen
Reviewer: twilightbrunette23 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
This has become one of my most favorite stories. You have done a great job with character development and I can't wait for the next chapter. My only complaint is I hate waiting for the next chapter you don't post often enough!!!
Author's Response: I know! I'm so sorry about my crazy posting schedule, or lack thereof! I fail frequently! I have been trying to do better, and the wait on this one wasn't terrible. The next chapter is in the works, so I will hopefully be able to finish it up soon, and get it out to you!
Much love and appreciation for you kindness,
Jen
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Aw, Edward finally got his head out of his ass and now we can see that pretty face of his!!
Author's Response: And I just love his pretty face, don't you?
Reviewer: hotedward (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
wow i just love ur update ,,i wish u coud update again sooner..and cant wait or them to be intimate again :d wahehhe.. 2 days more andits new moon :d:d patiently waiting for the next update :d
Author's Response: Oh, girl! I know. I can't wait for the New Moon premiere. I actually got to see Kristen Stewart and Taylor Lautner last night. They were in Knoxville, Tn for a charity premiere and I live about 40 minutes from there. Yea, I so did the fangirl thing!
Anyway, thanks for loving my story. I'll do my best to get the next one together soon!
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: MrsHannahCullen (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
:D OOOOOOH loved it!!
H x
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!
Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
I am so happy they are trying to work their marriage out. I would have loved a lemon in this chapter, but I understand why there wasn't. Great job as always!
Author's Response: There could very well be a lemon in next chapter. I'm thinking on it.
Thanks so so much babe!
Jen
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
This chapter went so much better than I thought it would, I was really worried... They are so cute, I love that they are so Hot for eachother... and the Kiss *sigh* Thank you for that...
I am loving the shit out of this fic...
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much and I'm lovin the shit out of these reviews! You all rock my world!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Lovely chapter. They were able to talk and reach some understanding. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
aww, im so glad Esme has met Bella ,she can see he sparks within Eward and Bella
Loving this story ,its the highlight of my week !
Winter in the UK is dull and rainy (we should have our own Forks )
Love to you
Keeep writing
Jan aka Cullenfever
Author's Response: Hey Jan-
Thanks so much for all the nice things you wrote. I really appreesh! Review day is the highlight of my week, so we can dance around together!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: becky 1963 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
So good and so sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
OMG...This chapter was excellent.
It's great that they are going to give the relationship a try.
Yay, he finally called her Bella and not Isabella.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. I can't wait to dive into the relationship between them!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: lola_pop (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
This chapter was so great! I love the brutal honesty between these two. Your dialogue is so well-written, too, which makes their conversations so much fun to read. Lemons? Yes, please!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I am really glad you found my story and started reading. Lemons up ahead!
Reviewer: lovebooks (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Yes these two emo kids need some fluff! I love this chapter of them getting some basics figured out and being open and honest with each other...
Author's Response: Yes, they did, but more importantly, WE needed some fluff! I was just about sick of them being so far away from one another!
Thank you so much,
Jen
Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
LOVE IT!!!
LOVE ESME!!:
"I rolled my eyes at her, which earned me a firm smack on the ass. "Don't be smart, Edward. You need to tread lightly here. Watch your attitude."
PERFECTION!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it, and thank you for sharing your favorite line. That's the best part about reading reviews. It makes me happy to hear what you all like.
I love Esme, too!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Yea for Edward and Bella and their future beautiful baby!!!! I am so glad that they were honest about their feelings. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
*SQUEEE* Ok, so I was having such a fangirl moment the entire last part of the chapter! In L.O.V.E. with this story! I'm so glad they're gonna give this a shot, can't wait to read more! You soooo rock my socks ;) Amazing job with this story!!
Author's Response: Wow! You rock MY socks, babe! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: dera (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
O M F G OMG THAT WAS AWESOME ok Jen you have to give us the next chapter very soon like today =D i can't fucking wait . i think tonight when i sleep i will dream that twitching cock Edward lol went to his hotel but couldn't sleep so he drove back to soaking wet Bella ;) at midnight and relived all their Vegas memories . And at lunch they revisited their memories at the mellow Thai 65's bathroom stall lol Jen u made me happy and horny please please please don't keep us waiting long please.
Author's Response: Hey beebee! Wow, what a great review! I'm working on the next chapter. I think you will likey! I'm thinking a little citrus may get squeezed on it!
Reviewer: nlw (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
I just finished catching up and reading the last chapter. I adore this story!! Bella and Edward are so sweet together. I'm glad she told him about the baby and he took her to the doctors appointment. I can't wait to see him try to contain Esme and Alice though! Lol.
Author's Response: So glad you like it! I'm not sure an army could contain Esme, but I'm gonna try to keep her at least respectful of Edward and Bella's wishes.
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
awww such an awesome chapter. the confrontation with Esme, the confession from Edward and Bella, the steamy kiss ... oh can this get any better :) YES it can ... come on lay it on us girl !!!
we need some lemons, Vegas was much too long ago ...
Author's Response: Oh I agree! Vegas was much to long ago! :taps head and sniles menecingly:
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
That was great. I'm glad that they talked. I would love to be a fly on the wall when Esme tells Carlisle that Bella's prego.
Author's Response: I think Carlisle is gonna lose it!! Not sure yet, he may take it very well. I'm turning into a spontaneous writer...
Reviewer: twilly (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
I like fluffy (for a while) And lemons. Thanks for the update; Vegas, Baby is one of my favs.
Author's Response: Thank you. Fluffy will be here for a minute. Lemons coming soon. Thank you for reviewing!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
I really love this story. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Dang it, I missed being the 1000th! I'm not ready for another lemon yet, because I don't think B & E are.
I squee and do the happy dance when I get an update. I had a great reason to do the happy dance with this chapter. It was awesome!
Author's Response: Yeah, that 1000th came quick. I was already close. Sorry :(
I don't think they are ready for it either, but I'm not sure either one of them can stop it either. That connection is just too strong. We'll see.
So glad you liked the chapter.
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: SallyThePumkinQueen (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
<3
Author's Response: Teehee! <3 back! Hard!
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: November 18, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
Yay!!!! Finally! I was so giddy reading this chapter! I can't even describe it! LOL.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks babe!
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