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Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

 Good chapter! I like it when characters finally speak the truth to each other. 



Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: taynemmsmama (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

I have to say - I am totally in love with this Edward and Bella - awesome story - can't wait to see the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!

Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

He called her Bella :')
They really do belong together.
I hope you're not going to be really mean and put a big twist in because they HAVE to be together.

LEMONS NEXT CHAPTER !
and update soon ;) xxx

Author's Response: Yes, he called her bella! I'm so glad he's coming around! Thanks for reading and reviewing! There will be some drama coming up, but were gonna be okay for a bit. I need it! And lemon? Oh hell yes! Xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

amazing chapter. They always are! Update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Awwwww!  ~_~



Author's Response:

Fluff, much???

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Loving it! He called her Bella! I like the explanation of why he calls her Isabella. Makes sense. The fact that they both feel the same way is absolutely amazing. I mean they are meant to be. Now there's a baby in the mix and a reason to work things out. Like it pushed them together. Amazing! I am addicted and anxiously awaiting an update! Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I have really enjoyed reading all of your reviews!

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Wow. Still loving it! There's not much to go, what ever shall I do! Thank you so much for sharing. So awesome!

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?

Oh no! Poor Edward, mama Esme is off to Seattle! LOL Love it! I'm addicted!

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror

Mirrors mirrors and yikes! Love it!

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Wifey calling... LMAO. I love it. Short review sorry! I'm addicted and must keep reading. Thank you for sharing. I think they must have a connection as well.

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering

Loving her flashbacks! I was hoping for them, they truly are delicous together. Yummy! Thank for sharing. On to the next! Hope you dont' get tired of hearing from me... LOL. Love it!

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 10 Communication

Love the texts. They truly are very compatible. Now if they could just pull their heads out of their asses! Love it girl! Awesome!

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Yeah happiness with Jake. He wants to be friends, that is good too. As for Rebecca, I wanted to punch her. Grr. Is Bella having the same flashbacks and feelings that Edward is having? She hasn't really mentioned him. Maybe it's because of Jake, now that it's over maybe she will. I'm loving it.

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

Love the scotch bit! My drink of choice. Give me scotch on ice any day compare to a girly foo foo drink. Love it girl! It's awesome. So glad I decided to read it! Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past

The relationship between Jake and Bella sounds like it was intense. I admire Bella for being there for him when it's hard to do it. Good work. I started this the other night and now I'm back. LOl. Zephyersky rec'd this so I had to read it! Awesome!



Author's Response:

Hey I didn't reply to all of your reviews, but I wanted to reply to this one.  I just love Zephyersky!  She has helped me tremendously through this, and honestly, it wouldn't be half of what it is without her.  I'm really glad you liked it, but she deserves part of the glory!

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

LOVE this story....in my top 3 of favs EVER! :-)



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much!  I'm flattered!

Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

I friggin love this story!! I started reading it and cant stop!!! Please update soon!! You are awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for letting me know what you think about it.  Anything with the words love and awesome just make me wanna do cartwheels!  Really though, you are far to kind!

Much love,

Jen

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Oh wow, there's no way they are going to be able to keep their hands off each other if they keep seeing one another.  Thank God Edward was cool about the baby - I was worried you might let his "inner bastard" have free roam for a little longer, just to up the ante, but thankfully you didn't and the scene at the doctor's was really touching.  And thank God they've decided to be honest with one another.  Love these two and love your story - it's right up there in my top 5 favourites.  Please let them get down and dirty together soon!



Author's Response:

Hey bb!  "Inner bastard"- LOL!  He has gone away for a little bit.  I'm not sure how much of him we'll be seeing from here on out.  I just love the fluff!  However, I do have more drama planned, so definitly stay tuned!

Thank you so much,

Jen

Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Looove it.  Read the whole story. All 16 chapters. You're hilarious. One of my favorite parts is where he considers killing Emmett just to get out of dinner. Cracked me the eff up. I'm interested to see how the pregnancy and marriage go.... I'm pregnant so a pregnant Bella is fun for me to read lol. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

I do love pregnant Bella, too!  Thank you so much for reading it.  Especially in one sitting.  I have read several stories that interest me in that way.  Just can't put them down.  I'm thrilled when I hear that my story did that to you!  Good luck with your pregnancy, and keep me updated.  I'll send a shout out to your little sweetie!

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: lilg24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

GR8 STORY



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: blueausten (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Write!!!!!!write!!!write!!!! hurry, or it's gonna b the end of the world....okay, maybe not....but hurry or...you know what? HURRY UP AND WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

P.S.: i gave you a 10....



Author's Response:

Okay!!!!Okay!!!!Okay!!!!! I promise to hurry up!  Please Dear God, please don't let the world end!!

LOL!  You're crackin me up!

P.S.: thank you!

Reviewer: kimmysunshine (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

wow !!! he did it !!! congrats
that was a cute chap with esme
hurry up

huggs, kimmy xoxo



Author's Response:

I'm hurrying!  Thanks so much, Kimmy!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

I would definately like a lemon! So far I am very pleased with Edward's behavior. I don't like Carlisle that much in this story though. He is usually one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

I'm working on getting a lemon in there.  So glad you're liking Edward now.  He went through his Assward stage, so now let's all love him.  Oh, yes, Daddy Carlisle is kind of a dick.  Give me a little bit of time.  We just haven't gotten into him yet.

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Dear jslack0816,

 

Please make your story less addictive. Because I'm so hooked that I decided that I should reread the whole thing :D hehe. LOVE IT! You're doing an amazing job. I seriously fall all over myself to see this story updated!

 

-agiismsxx



Author's Response:

Dear agiismsxx,

I'm so sorry that my story has become your drug.  Actually, no, I'm not.  I kinda really love that!  Seriously, thank you so very much!!  I really appreciate all of the nice things you said about it!

Love you HARD,

Jen

Reviewer: tinkerbellss (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

loved the chapter!!!!!!!!

this is getting better and better.......... edward can be quite a charmer when he lets his guard down.......

and seriously, did you ask that?... did you really ask that?

why do you make questions which answers you already know?

i thought by now you would know that we ALL want LEMONSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!

keep writing girl, you are doing a great job!!!

ops, and btw..... UPDATE SOON!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I really appreciate the great review.  I'm so glad that you liked the chapter.  I think you might just LOVE the next one.  Especially if you are having a citrus craving!

Much love,

Jen

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