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Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
I'd like for him to get her a wedding ring, but it probably to soon for that. IDK maybe some jewelry. Like a charm for her bracelet that represents him and their child maybe.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
merry christmas and happy new year
good chapter, interesting things to come it seems
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
they are so happy right now yay!! i hope it keeps up!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
This was an awesome Christmas present...you can't get anything better than Lemons for Christmas....LOL!!! I loved when she told him that she cried at the tampon commercial and he told her she had a reason for that....Thank you so much for keeping Jerkward for those of us who love him....Even though he is changing he is still a jerk to Emmett and Jasper and I LOVE IT!!!! The person that called him with the number that he didn't recognize has me wondering...I was like Edward go ahead and call the number and let us know who it is is already....Zephyersky mentioned that she got to spend time with you and I know that you guys had an awesome time...I would have loved to been there...Both of you are amazing authors and I get so excited when I see that you guys have updated....I hope that you and your family had an awesome Christmas and I hope that you have a Happy New Year!!!
Reviewer: jpoopy (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
loved it....I hope carlisle doesn't do anything to screw them up
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
loved it.
Reviewer: sugaraddikt (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
it should be a combo gift, something for bella and something for the baby, or something that combines the two, like a spa trip for when she feels like a beached whale. i thoink she'll appreciate every sign from edward that shows his commitment to the situation, given they've only recently mended fences.
i'd also like to register my vote for marcus as bar manager, james is never a good thing, and aro is manipulative, and i don't trust carlisle not to have ulterior motives when pushing for aro to be hired.
merry christmas!
xx
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
Ooh he sounds a bit of an Arseward today!
Achilles
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
Excellent job! Nice Christmas Day treat!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: liz242009 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
I think he should get her a wedding ring :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
Like that one word summary thing, quite innovative. Looking forward to reading more.
Achilles
Reviewer: gte0121 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
Tiffany bracelet with a cupcake charm.
Reviewer: taynemmsmama (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
This was a great gift - an update of one of my favourite stories - I think Edward should bring Bella a beautiful journal - it's personal in a non threatening way.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
Great chapter! I was so glad to find out you had made an update! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
I am trying to remember: Did Edward ever get Bella a ring, other than the package deal with th wedding? Maybe he could give her one! Or he could give her an engraved silver cup for the baby. Let's see some real progress on the pregnancy! THe sooner the baby is born, the sooner they will be together all the time -- I have foreseen it!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Things will progress over the next few chapters. I've got to get through the meeting of the parents, and I want to spend just a little bit of time letting them get to know one another, but I'm so ready to get into the pregnancy stuff too! Gifts, dr's appts, and a few other things I have in my head. Can't wait for daddyward!
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
I got this a minute before Christmas was oficially over here, so I consider it my present. Great chapter, they are so damn cute together :)
Author's Response: Well, Merry Christmas! I'm really glad you liked it, and I've still got one and a half hours of Christmas, so I consider your review my gift!
Xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
I love that they are trying so hard. It's sweet. :0)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh..next chapter please! this is an excellent story!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
BEST CHAPTER YET!!! :) seriously, that was so good, I loved the Edward/Bella interaction. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
Happy birthday, a bit late. You gave ME the present!
I loved the cupcakes! I did not see that coming, but it was just perfect!! Edward is such a romantic sweetheart!
I liked the scene with jacob too. You will have to let him pop up every now and then, but not to create any relationship problems!
I can't wait to read how Bella deals with telling Charlie and Renee about the marriage and the baby!!! That will be priceless, especially with Charlie!
B & E are so perfect in this chapter together! I know they will have to have come issues come up for dramatic effect, but they are just too
wonderful!
PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!! THis is going directly into my FAVS!!!!! THANKS!!
Author's Response: No, thank you! I have really enjoyed reading all of your reviews! Made my day! I'm working on the next chapter now. Shouldn't be too much longer!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
I just love this story!! I have already recommended it to someone else! Keep up the good work and KEEP ON POSTING!!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Great!!! I just love this story! Are you going to be doing a sequel, I hope???
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
This was great! YES!! Upcoming B & E face time!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror
and now my mother is completely 'Team Edward and Bella.' ----> LOVE that! Good line!
YES!! It hits the fan now!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
Wifey calling---> CUTE!!! Didn't someone else call her that? I am loving this and want to know about the pregnancy! Of course it will be Bella!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
That was the first night that I dreamt of Edward Cullen. Great line!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love moments when I can fit something in from the movie and/or book!
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