That is so cool! my family almost moved to Knoxville, but opted out because of the water pollution and stuff, so then we looked at Nashville, which was my choice but the Northwest won out in the end. Anyways I have been all over Tennesse traveling and stuff it's probably one of my favorite states :)

Author's Response: I'm about an hour from knoxville. And nashville is my favorite city! I actually went there to meet up with some of the fanfic girls in december. Very cool time.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

But I was wondering, is there any way to sign up for an alert so I'll get an email when this story gets updated? I have Story alert on FF.net, but since you said that you usually update here first, I was wondering if there was some kind of alert here.

Author's Response: You can click on "add to favorites" in the options box right above where you post a review at the end of the chapter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I do usually post here first just because I like the way reviews are listed here. Its much easier for me to keep up with the ones I've replied to. So glad your enjoying it, Jen

He was sweet, caring, protective, passionate, beautiful, the father of my child, and essentially a stranger.  - I loved how you bought this into the story. And the "Helo playful Edward." Loved that!

I wrote this really epic review last week, but I'd been logged out by the time I hit submit, and I'd been too tired to wirite it again. I'd said how your responses are the best from any author, that you have me coming back to read and review just as much as the interest of your story. :)

Oh, and if I remember correctly, I also loved the bit on the phone where Bella says that she's still figuring out his sounds when he type of growled. I really loved that and have thought of it since. xx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm sure I've told you how much I love your reviews, but let me say again- I LOVE THEM!!

I hate that you got logged out before you were able to submit your original review.  I hate when that happens.  I am so glad that you keep coming back to read.  It humbles me that you look forward to my writing.

I kinda want Edward to growl at me.  Just sayin.

xoxo,

Jen

My review is really late for this chapter, goshhh.

Anyway, I loved it, as usual.
Rebecca ? Calling Edward ? Oh
no, it doesn't sound good.
I loved the idea of the rattle, how adorable is that. :')

Next chapter soon, I have to find out about what Rebecca wants, and how she knew Edwards number ! :D

xxxx

Author's Response:

I'm doing a little rework on next chapter, but it shouldn't take too long.  Coming soon!  Thanks so very much!

 

xoxo,

Jen

WHAT !!!!! does becca want from edward ß!?!?!
sie is so low if she is going to badmouth bella !!!

huggs, kimmy

Author's Response: Oh, I know! Next chapter, babe! We'll see what's up then! Xoxo, Jen

Just recently started reading this...love it so far :)

Your Bella and Edward are realistic (as realistic as they can be for made up characters lol) and the mix of the characters all work well with each other.

I can't wait to read more about Rebecca and what she's going to do by contacting Edward :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you found it and are enjoying it.  Next chap is coming soon.

Im from Spokane Washington, originally Sarasota Forida! I wonder the same thing but dont want to come off creepy lol! Since you asked first ehre are you from?

Author's Response:

I'm from Tennessee.  I always want to know where people are from.  It's amazing to see where some of the readers are from.  All over the world.

Sorry it has taken me so long to reply to this review, I was fail on it for just a minute.  

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

Jen

Awesome, as always!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Okay, so why is Rose telling Bella to be careful if she was sober when she married a stranger? Love the story, btw.

Author's Response:

Good point.  Bella may need to call her out on that.

Thanks so much,

Jen

I LOVE stupid happy.  :)

Another amazing chapter... excellent job on all the dialog in that one!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I kinda love stupid happy too!

xoxo,

Jen

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

no no no no no no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............ what did i do to you to deserve this girl???????? you can't let the chapter end like this!!!!!!!!!................... YOU CAN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i've been smiling the whole chapter and............ and.................... noooooo!!!!!!!!................ it's so unfair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws a tamtrum screaming 'rebecca is a fucking bitch' and 'i hope she gets STD'!!!!!!!!!!!!*

i damn the man who invented the word cliff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............. because it had to be a man i'm sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thousand times damn him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breaths deeply*

ok, now i feel better *smiles sheepish*........... now i can say it was an amazinly great chapter and just so you know............... i'm falling even more for this story every time i read a new one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i hope................. HOPE.................. you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep writing that i'll keep reading!!!!!!!!!!!! (and reviewing) 

Author's Response:

BB!!!!!!!!!!!  How are you????  So excited over there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  You know I love your reviews!!!!!!!!!!!!!  All of the ............... and the !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  They just excite me to no end!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry for the cliffie, and I totally agree that it was a man who invented that!!!!!!!!!!!

Calm down, next chap is coming soon.  Working on it now, and I'm gonna try to get a teaser up soon.

I'll keep writing, you do your thang!!!

All my love, hugs, !!!!, and .....,

Jen

Dum dum DUUUUMMMMMM.

Author's Response:

Agreed!

what a great chapter!!!!! can't wait for more...darn you for the cliffie

Author's Response:

Sorry for the cliffie!  Next chap coming soon!