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Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 3 Whored Up In Vegas
Jacob and Bella more than friends?
Hes still an ass. Lol
Great chapter
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
What an evil cliffie! I wanna bitchslap Rebecca but maybe Edward or Jake will do that for me. I don't usually condone violence against women but she's gone too far. I hope you plan to update soon,'cause I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan(as long as you eventually fix it, of course! :)
Author's Response: No matter what happens, there will be an HEA!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and sorry about the cliffy...
Jen
Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2
WHAT AN ASS! 'plentiful' lol
haha, he must redeem himself!
I dont think this will be a Mills and Boons and if it is I hope it has strong female characters. Lol
I hate the same scene POV as well. Great thus far... now whos an ass? lol
Author's Response: I LOVE NEW READERS!!! And I love them even more when they review as they go! Thank you so very much for taking the time to do it. I won't reply to them all, but I did read them and you are a great reviewer! I love reviews that make me giggle!
Thank you,
Jen
Reviewer: disuez (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Noooooooooooooooooooooo! What happens!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter, and I'll try to do so quickly. Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Please hurry with the next chapter !!!! We can't wait for the shoe to drop!!! Will Bella forgive Edward for Jenks?
Author's Response: I'm working on it as fast as I can. It's a hard one to write!
Thanks so very much,
Jen
Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Dunt, dunt, duhhh. Oh shit son, it's about to go down.
Author's Response: LOL! I agree, and I do believe you'll be very happy with how Jake comes out in the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
noooo dont go not unless youre going to bring me and let me read everything else before hand :( i love this story sooooooo much and i cant wait at all :D seriously like you have to write it now so i dont go insane haha i love this story and you!! you my dear are absolutely brilliant :D
Author's Response: Brilliant is far to kind, but thank you so much! I'm working on the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
i love this boy if you saw what the stuff i write looked like if there werent backspace you would be soooo dissappointed haha you are brilliant im so glad they are getting along and bella is getting less sick and that edward is taking the effort to notice things like that im sure bella will be ok with getting to know esme just not like spas and stuff and as for gifts well i wont even go there and just go to the next chapter and see :D you are brilliant really :D
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
awww i wish i would have known the story back then to wish you a happy birthday but hey ill still do it because its only feb 3 almost two months late haha happy birthday *blows whistles and twists noise makers* hehe you are fantastic my dear and i loved this chapter veryyyy much i love that he is going to be there to confront charlie ;D everything about this story is wonderful :D
Author's Response: Thank you anyway! I love that you are reviewing as you go! It just excites me! And thanks for rec'ing to your mom! Tell her I expect to hear her thoughts!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
ima go find you and make sure you write the next chapter! i cant believe you left it this way!
Author's Response: I have changed my disguise and my location... LOL! I'm writing, I'm writing...
Sorry for the cliffy! Just give me a minute to get my bearings with this next chapter. I've been in happy mode for a bit. Next one is quite emotional.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest
i love you this is by far the most awesome story im reading :D my mom was sooo freakin into this story i told her about it when i called her at like5 yesterday and then she called at midnight to see if i had read further i told her i couldnt get to a computer and she humphed at me haha so i expect her to read it as soon as she has some time haha she told me to call and tell her what was happening no matter what time i called haha i loved this chapter it was soooo sweet :D
Reviewer: tinkerbellss (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i thought you liked me!!!!!!!!!!! i really thought you liked me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................... why do you do this to me girl?????? my reviews????? is that?????? don't you like my reviews????!!!!!............
*starts crying* it can't be happening!!!!!!!!! fucking Rebecca!!!!!!................ and fucking Newton!!!!!!!!!!................. what the hell was that asshole doing in La Push????????!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's so not fair!!!!!!!!.................. i told you last time that a cliffie is a very evil thing!!!!!!!!!! don't you listen to me??????!!!!!!!!!!!! buaaaaaaaaa *stops crying*
*sniff* okay, though i'm a mess right now, just know that every chapter i read, i fall in love even more with this story.......................... but quit doing this girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my heart is not that strong *starts crying again*
i really, really, really hope you update soon.................... if not, well, i have a friend who has a friend who has a friend who has a friend whose cousin works for the CIA..................... he can find you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS..........WHAT ARE YOU STILL DOING HERE READING MY REVIEW GIRL??????!!!!!!!!!! GO AND WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm just gonna quickly say--you're review is so pretty with all of the ?????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...............
Not gonna answer your questions, you know that. I love you, thank you for reading and reviewing, and I'm going to write.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Nice cliffy. Edward is in soooooooo much trouble. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey justafan-
Edward, here. Jen let me take the reins on replying to your review. There were just too many o's on that so for me to pass it by.
Exactly how much trouble do you think I'll be in? Hell, I have no idea what the fuck is going on. I mean, yeah, I told Mike to do his thing and take care of the situation, but I didn't mean for him to do THIS! And now that things have changed...well, I mean, I meant to call him and...she's gonna be mad, huh?
Dammit! Okay, we need a plan. You with me? I'll work on a list of things that I'll need to cover in my explanation of this mess, and you be ready to back me up. I think we can handle this. You do have my back, right?
Pray to any and all higher powers that this goes well, and I'll try to coax Jen into writing faster.
Love,
E
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Gah!!!!
Author's Response: I know, right.
Reviewer: prncskymmie (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
WTF!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!? OMGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is one of my favorite stories and I practily jump out of my chair for joy when I see an update. UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your lucky you have that storm shelter, lol. I sooo can't wait or the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for loving it! I love your excitement; thank you for sharing it with me.
The storm shelter has been abandoned. Anti-cliffy peeps were catching onto my location. I also have a very clever disguise. LOL!
I'm working on the next chapter. It's a hard one to write, but I try to move quickly.
hugs and kisses,
Jen
Reviewer: Lou B Jones (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
"Okay. Why the blush?" I asked as I touched her face with the pad of my thumb. Oh! I melted at that! Serious goo. loved it.
Also loved: Congrats grandpa. lolololololol. She's so casual with her dad, they really come off as real people.
I need a beer (the great one liners just kept coming.)
Are you driving? - Not anymore. (laughed. Out. Loud!!!)
"Please don't keep stuff like that from me. That's kind of serious, Bella. For my sanity?" - He is sooooooo sweet. I could eat him with a spoon.
'technically' a Cullen. - "Mindreader" oh, this chapter was the best, and then to cap it off... "The stuff dreams are made of" OH!
A great lemon too. I liked it much more than the last one. Jeez, can I swap lives with your Bella? Please? I promise I'll never send you another PM? Pleeeeeeease?
Author's Response: I love you! Thank you! That was like the goldmine motherload review of what I love to hear.
And yes, you can certainly swap lives with my Bella, but might I recommend waiting that out for a few chapters? Just sayin...
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
OH NO! She has to see past this compared to how he is acting.
Author's Response: I sure hope she's that reasonable about it. We'll see.
Thanks so much!
Jen
Reviewer: raina31 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
That chapter was exceptional, but honestly Jen, everything you churn out is top-notch. I've been following this story for a while but this is my first twilighted review. I loved the Charlie-Edward interaction. Two peas in a pod, in a twisted kind of way. Starting to feel just a little antsy about what's going on with Rebecca but oh well, there is always one psycho to every story. Looking forward to where these two are headed since they definitely not conventional. Of course, as a true romantic, I would love to see them together TOGETHER through the pregnancy, but as usually, I am at the mercy of the author. ;)
Author's Response: You have no idea how much I appreciate your review.
Things are taking a little turn, but that's what makes a story interesting.
Thank you for reading, sharing your thoughts, and mostly for trusting me!
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: pinkpumpkin9 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Loving protective Edward (as always)......Can't wait to find out what Rebecca's up to!! I'm wondering if Carlisle contacted Mike to get dirt on Bella to get his precious son out of the situation and Mike isn't supposed to let Edward know, so he's nervous when Edward sees him there......
Please update again soon! Good story, good chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are among the many who have guessed that Carlisle is behind this. You just never know. We shall see...
I'm working on the next chapter, and I'll try to do so quickly.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Ashapea (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
You cant stop there! Your an awesome writer! BUt I am new on this site and I dont know how to tell if someone updated their story so could you send me an email at ashley.viellieux@hotmail.com when you do please?
Author's Response: Hey bb,
Thank you so much for the kind words. I really appreciate them.
I would be more than happy to send you an email when it goes up. Just promise that you will forgive me if I forget. I kinda have a swiss cheese brain and things slip through occassionally. I'll do my best to remember though.
If you pull my story up and scroll through the banners, there is a red link beside the story details (word count, rating) that says add story to favorites. If you click on that you will get an alert when I update. My story is also on the fanfiction site if you prefer that.
I'll do my best to remember, thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Feel free to send me a message if I can help anymore.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
oh thats mean!!! post again soon
Author's Response: I'm sorry. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll try my best to be speedy.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: gilda (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
Heya again!
Thanks for replying to one of my earlier comments. I read all 20 chapters in a row last night. The end of this one did have me puzzled...I guess I'm not sure why Mike was in La Push...what reason could Rachel have that is a powerful enough motivator to lure a lawyer all the way from NY? I am just musing here...(in the spirit of Edward, I shall list..)
a) Rachel will try to tell Mike about the baby either to prevent the annulment, or to try and show it is not Edward's baby (which isn't going so well for her) b) she's trying to tell Mike that Bella is a gold-digger, c) she was going to tell Mike that Bella is already married to Jake - as was claimed at the hospital, d) greasy haired Snape/Aro is somehow related to La Push and is conspiring against all of them, e) an entirely different scenario I have not imagined.
In any of those situations though, I'm having trouble imagining it is severe enough. ? I eagerly look forward to your explanation.
he he he, a prize huh? Maybe a preview of the next chapter?? *grin*
Author's Response: Great thoughts! And as far as a prize- I can do better than a preview. Everybody can get a preview, I post teasers on the thread. I think you deserve something better! Keen eye plus great reviews equals excellent prize. Pm me your email and I'll hook you up;)
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons
What? What?? What! Surely it's not a skeleton in the cupboard. Bella had wanted the annullment at first too, so surely she'll understand if it's just that Edward forgot to tell Mike to stop the proceedings. But Mike was acting very odd..., the suspense is awful! What is gong on? ;)
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter. I know how horrible it is to have to wait for it.
I hope Bella turns out to be understanding, too, but I can't say for sure that it'll happen that way. We'll see.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
hi dont mean to be smart or anything but do you think you have too many banners
Author's Response: My plan is to resize them and make them smaller. I just haven't had the time. I'm very proud of the work that others have done for my story, and I think they deserve to be displayed. That's just my take on it.
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