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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror

Did Edward tell Bella he loved her?  Is that the significance of the mirror scene?

And she's preggers isn't she?

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

wow, so much drama.  WTG Rose and Alice for sticking up for Bella.  I bet they get brownie points in Daddy C's books for that.  Loved Esme's reactions and my grin was wide as hell as Edwards' "mine" comment.  Excellent!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering

Oh man those guys are relentless.  I wonder how the dinner party is going to go.  Mind you, I am dissapointed that Bella isn't going to go, I was kinda hoping that somehow she would be persuaded to go.

Sorry too that the conversations between Edward and Bella seemed to have tapered away.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 10 Communication

LOL I love the wee "getting to know you" texts flitting back and forth.  And I wouldnt' put it past the pixie to drag Bella onthe plane and have her show up at the meal.

Still loving this...

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings

Surprised at how unfeeling Edward and Bella are trying tobe to each other.

Glad that jake is going to be ok and that all he wants to be is friends.  I hope he can stick to that one.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia

Very interesting, I bet he gives the bracelet to her himself.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past

UU OO I am so glad that I am behind everyone else because I'd hate you for that evil cliffie!

As it is though, I can just move on ...



Author's Response: Disclaimer: you are not allowed to hate me when you get to the end of chapter 20.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers

Well at least he still has the instinct to protect Bella.  I can't wait til they meet again.

 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 5 Best Friend Status

I wonder what Jake wants to say to Bella, and what he told his sisters to make them hate her?

Still loving this, I'm moving on ...

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 4 Pitbulls and Haircuts

Id definitely not be offended to spoilers in the reviews, but I'm so far behind right now anyway.  I will be spamming you for a wee while until I get all caught up.

Edward needs to be slapped upside the head.

Now I know why the guys were in Vegas.  What was the reason for the girls?  And was Rose and Emmett already a couple before the weekend?



Author's Response: I'm lovin reading your reviews! Thank you! The girls were just there for a girls weekend. And no- rose and em were not a couple before. I'm behind on replying so you prob know this by now ;)

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 3 Whored Up In Vegas

Damn he is egotistical isn't he?  I'm an edward gal but he is pushing my buttons!!

And poor Jake!  I hope he is ok.

Is this going to be a love triangle?



Author's Response: I've been very open with the fact that I HATE love triangles. I hope it doesn't ruin it for me to tell you, but you asked. No way is that in my plans;)

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Waking Up In Vegas Naked-part 2

LOl forgot to tell you in the first review, that I am loving this so far, love your style of writing.

Can't wait til Alice shows up and gives Edward a peice of her mind....



Author's Response: I'm so glad you're reading and enjoying it. I just love hearing your thoughts on it. Thank you so much, Jen

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?

UU oo, they got married?  And why did his smile go from hot to cold just like that?

Reviewer: maggiemay82 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

I found this story a couple of days ago and I haven't been able to put it down since! I don't know how I will be able to handle reading one chapter at a time now! LOL Keep up the great work I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you found it! Thank you so much for choosing to read it and for letting me know that you're enjoying it. I hope that you'll continue to do so. Oh, and thanks for not mentioning the cliffy! It's nice to reply with something besides an apology ;) Xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: CSmith (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

What the mothertruck!?!?! No, you can't...please...*lip quivering* I'll bake you cupcakes, just, please please pleeeaaaase give us more!

This was my favorite chapter so far, AWE-SOME! Loved it! Hahaha fuckin Charlie, I just knew he'd pull something like that haha! Til next time, mucho love xoxo



Author's Response:

Hey bb!

I know, I suck.  I do love me some cupcakes, though.  Had I known a horrible cliffy would get me food, I may have ended every chapter with one.  Hmmm, now there's a thought....

I'm really so glad you enjoyed it.  Charlie was my fave to write.  I just loved that bit.

I'm writing as fast as I can.

*hugs*

Jen

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

I have been trying to get caught up on this story for some time now! Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But now I need more :) Please update soon!



Author's Response: I know, it's a little tricky. It seems when you start this thing that the chapters will be short and manageable. Then, I go and get all wordy and stuff. I'm so glad you're all caught up. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing each chapter. I'm working on the next one now. xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

Holy shit! What the hell? That's quite a cliffie you've got there!

I loved the chapter, obviously can't wait for the next!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry about the cliffy, and I'm working as fast as possible on the next chap. xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

Dude!  WTF?!  You just LEAVE us there for god knows how long???  NOT FAIR!!!



Author's Response:

Eeek, I know!  I'm sorry.  I swear I'm trying to get the next one out. 

I love you!  Don't hate me!

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

what the fuck how can you end it there???????

tell me now!

lol

great chapter



Author's Response: I'm so sorry. Working on the next one. Thanks so much, Jen

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 19 Stupid Happy

nnnnnnnnnnnnnoooo shes gonna cause drama!

I love this story

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye

They are so fucking adorable together, you know when they arent going at. cause then they are just fucking hot. lol

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This

When you put sex in the chapter I  forget what happened. lol

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

Fucking sexy left right and center

great chapter

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?

drama drama drama

Reviewer: eclipstress (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror

oh my word. THE ANTICIPATION!

I think I like that she is avoiding Emmett and Jasper. Protecting herself while being childish is so Bella! Lol

Great Chapter

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