Hi! I just wanted to tell you this is one of the best all-human stories I have ever read! I know you said that the next chapter is with beta at the moment, but please update soon, I don't want to grow old and die waiting...

I really like your writing and I was wondering will you write what happened after the baby was born. That would be awesome...

Thanks again!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!  Please don't die on me!  I'm trying so hard to get this chapter up.  It's been so long. 

I will most likely write a little of after baby story.  I'm not really sure how much.  I don't want the story to go on endlessly, but I do love some Daddyward!

I really appreciate your interest!

xxxooo,

Jen

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN-

 

PLEASE WRITE MORE. MY DAYS HAVE GROWN COLD OF NOT READING VEGAS, BABY. IT MAKES ME SAD ALL DAY.

 

FOREVER YOURS,

MWEBBY1412

Author's Response: Dearest MWEBBY1412- I have finished the next chapter; it's in the beta process now. I also have a good start on the chapter after that one. Thanks for the inquiry. My readers just make me smile;) I truly appreciate all of you! I realize it's been a long time and hope to get back on track soon. Much Love- Jen

Are you going to finish the story??????? You can't leave us hanging like that! Your writing is awesome! I couldn't stop! Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Most definitely gonna finish it.  The next chapter is with beta now.  Should be soon.

Thanks so much!

Jen

keep writing its good

Author's Response:

Thanks!

OH.MY.GOD. What the hell is wrong with you?!?!?!? You can't just leave it at that!!!!! I'm eating my BRAINS out here trying to understand what the HELL was Mike Fucking Newton doing in La Freaking Push!!!!!!!

OK, I calmed down. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed before, but I found this story yesterday and simply couldn't stop reading to leave a review. Now that you have cut me off, I guess I can.

Seriously, you are a great writer. You totally should write your own novel. Or maybe a movie script? I could totally imagine this story in cinema (obviously you should adjust the characters to make them original, but the storyline is fantastic).

I was just in for some lemony fun, but now I'm totally hooked. I have an exam in less than a week and I couldn't bring myself to study because I HAD to read this. I'm holding you responsible for the result of said exam. Be warned.

Anyway, submitting to your request a couple chapters back, I'm from Montevideo, Uruguay. Talk about globalization, LOL.

OK, now that I'm finally done, I can go study without any more distractions. But you better post the next chapter up quickly!! I WILL find your storm shelter, trust.

Love,

Mariana

Author's Response: I LOVE YOUR REVIEW! Thank you so much for all the kind words. It absolutely made my day! No worries on not reviewing the earlier chapters. Wow, Uruguay. You have no idea how hard it is to wrap my brain around that. It's very humbling. Please don't fail your test! Study, bb! I'm working on the next chapter. I've taken entirely too long already. Love, Jen

arrrgggh  so glad I'm still behind else this would be an awful awful cliffie.  I guess I'm about to find out what Jake told his family to make them hate Bella?  I get the feeling he is going to tell them she aborted a baby? 

And how is edward going to react to that news?

Woop woop!!  Excellent lemon BTW but what I loved most about this?  It was more that just sex for sex's sake.  I love how you are keeping the plot going.

And I'm glad they had the "talk" about exclusivity.

 

Awww so glad they are getting along together.  Already they are acting like a team.

Can't wait for Bella to meet Esme.

Did Edward tell Bella he loved her?  Is that the significance of the mirror scene?

And she's preggers isn't she?

Oh man those guys are relentless.  I wonder how the dinner party is going to go.  Mind you, I am dissapointed that Bella isn't going to go, I was kinda hoping that somehow she would be persuaded to go.

Sorry too that the conversations between Edward and Bella seemed to have tapered away.

Surprised at how unfeeling Edward and Bella are trying tobe to each other.

Glad that jake is going to be ok and that all he wants to be is friends.  I hope he can stick to that one.

UU OO I am so glad that I am behind everyone else because I'd hate you for that evil cliffie!

As it is though, I can just move on ...

Author's Response: Disclaimer: you are not allowed to hate me when you get to the end of chapter 20.