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Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 13 Mirror, Mirror
They're idiots...AGAIN
Let period? hahahaha
Good, serves the idiots right...I was trying to remember if the mirror was when Edward remembered not using a condom. By his reaction I think it was...
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
No no no no no! Please give him a chance to sort it out! Don't him leave Seattle without this being resolved!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Next chap is coming soon!
Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
gotta go with bella on this one- eddies actions where dickish- his shark of a lawyer is going to be trouble and he should have told her earloer when they went all honest and no kies policy- the man can keep a list he should have checked this off
that being said she needs to let him explain and not get sick in the rain- they belong together no use fighting it....
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
Yes yes yes!!!!
Okay they are not idiots anymore...they are lost and confused and need guidance.
Give them some guidance...
Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Oh plz make it better i want them to work out Rebecca is a stupid bitch u think you can have here get hit by a bus in the next chapter that would be so cool
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
Ugh...why didn't she go? Damn it!
They are still both idiots.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 10 Communication
Wow!!!
I loved the interaction between the two. I decided that Edward is not as much of an ass as I initially thought.
However, now I do think he's an idiot and so is Bella.
Okay...moving onto the next chapter.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
OMG!!! They need to talk Bella needs to hear himout! I am so going to kill Mike!! What an ass and if Carlisle had anything to do with this going so horribly wrong I'll add him to the chopping black as well!!! Look forward to the next chapter! Post again soon!!
Author's Response: Look out, Mike Newton! You get him girl! I'm steering clear of you and your chopping block!
Next chapter is with beta now, teaser on thread.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings
All of the above. I specifically remember Leah being in Vegas. Did I read that incorrectly? I will go back and check but I know I'm right. That's the surprise.
Happy because Jake has his shit together and they are friends again.
Sad because she is still pushing for the annulment.
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Oh Bella, how could you believe that you had so badly misinterpreted Edward's feelings? Yes, you're hormonal and emotional, but you have to hear him out before you can condemn him, manufacturing all these negatives ideas and casting him as an evil manipulator without first allowing yourself to have all the information. And Edward - how could you be so stupid as to forget about calling off your rottweiler lawyer once you had accepted your feelings for Bella and the child she's carrying. So, is she going to leave him out there to catch pneumonia? Will that satisfy her childish and immature psyche? I think not. Let him in, both physically and emotionally. Test him, if you must, be hear him out.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia
Okay...I know it wasn't him in Seattle. So it must have been one of the sisters or Charlie.
Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
open the damn door bella and talk it out... at least vocalize your fear of him taking your kid away- that would snap him into understanding how much he hurt you. boys are such dumb asses sometimes.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 7 Visiting the Past
OMG!!!
What was it?
Who was it?
I guess one of the sisters. It couldn't be Edward.
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers
He's still an ass...
Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
hahahahahahaha! OMG! that was hilarious, way to f*** up everyone! Atleast its out of the water huh? if they could just open their eyes and see that they're meant for eachother but i guess that it'll all come in time. carlisle you manipulator you.. hahahahaha... and eeeewww! i hope angela doesn't make another unwanted appearance. (back to screaming to her pillow)... on with the next chapter
Reviewer: SallyThePumkinQueen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
<3
Author's Response: <3 u too!
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
UPDATE NOW. (=
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 4 Pitbulls and Haircuts
He's such a dick.... I really hope everything is better in the end....
Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 11 Remembering
hi! i just started reading this story this morning and i gotta say i am hooked! the lemons are H.O.T enough to burn sheets! i think that they just have to clear up the alcohol induced fog to see how perfect they are for each other! the story is really nice so far... on with my reading...
Author's Response: I'm so glad you started reading. Thank you so much. I hope you'll continue to let me know what you think. I love getting feedback!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Oh Edward...haven't you ballsed this one up! Hope that you can find a way to make Bella understand your part in this or she's going to flee.
Author's Response: Boy, didn't he! Next up is EPOV. He'll be going to work at figuring everything out. Stay tuned, and thanks for the review!
Xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: bmccall2068 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Ok I don't want you to take this the wrong way bc you are the author and I'm sure you have a vision for this...but to sit here and wait for this chapter and have Bella act like a 3 year old and not even let him explain is just ridiculous to me. Not even hormones is a good enough excuse for it. They have enough problems with the distance and whole having a baby with someone they barely know without adding in this childish shit. In my mind they should just be old enough to talk about this like rational adults. Like I said...just my opinion...don't want you to think I'm bashing you or anything...still love you and the story...I just thought that they were gonna be stronger and more realistic than this.
Author's Response: No worries, babe. You aren't the only one who's upset over our little bump in the road. I would never consider it bashing.
As far as the way that bella is acting, I know it's childish, you know it's childish, edward knows, and bella knows. She's just not equipped to deal with everything that's happened, and I think that's because of all the other issues they are dealing with. I personally HATE "running Bella" and I can assure you, I'm working that out. Unfortunately, right now she is irrational and confused. Again, the baby, the distance, the newness, and the fact that she knows how she fell into herself after she and jake broke up. Just give her a minute to process. Edward is up next chapter. Lots of findings coming soon.
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
wow ,Rebeca is such a bitch !
I can see her angle on things ,money to help with caring for Billy ,but look who shes hurting at the same time.
And god bless JAKE ! He's there to pick up the pieces ,gave Bella her 'out'
Oh and Crazy Charlie ,so funny !
Well Mr Cullen has a lot of explaining to do ,does'nt he !! He needs to stay at that door and talk all night to convince Bella that his feelings toward her have changed dramatically ,i mean ,he was only covering himself ,right ?
uPDATE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE !
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you are enjoying it, and I will go ahead and tell you- the next chapter is nearly complete, so it shouldn't be very long.
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
great chap ... i really hope she lets him inside
Author's Response: Thank you! Epov is up next, so we'll see.
Reviewer: daryl_k (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
I just started reading your story. OMG! It's amazing! I spent a whole day reading your story.
Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Wow- thank you so much for choosing to read it. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
The next chapter is nearly finished and shouldn't be too long.
I hope you'll continue to let me know what you think.
Xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
In the beginning Edward wanted the annulment actually both of them wanted it. Then the news of the baby got both of them thinking especially Edward. His periodic visits to see Bella and talk about things have brought them closer. Yes Edward did see the lawyer and he was suspicious, but had no idea why he was there in Forks. The fact that he tried to hide himself when Edward saw him should prove the attorney was doing something against what he thought Edward would approve. Jenks is bribing people to state lies to achieve a legal end. Why? Originally they both were going to sign the papers without a hitch. Edward was going to try and make things work between Bella and himself and the baby. He wanted to be together as a family. He wanted to take care of her and the child. He will make sure she's in a more comfortable and safer place especially since he still has his business on the east coast. They have a lot of bugs to work out in their situation and they will take time. Bella was being irrational, ridiculous, and childish. She knew it and he knew it. Talking was the answer they both knew was the right one. Yes Bella was overly emotional on the subject, she was tired and exhausted over Rachel and her lies, Edward's attorney bribing people to lie, and Edward not telling her Jenks was his attorney. But in defense of Edward he didn't know why Jenks was there, whether it involved him or not. He suspected, but not sure. The reason they were there was to talk with Rachel and have her explain the outrageous call to Edward (we know how she got his cell number from Jenks)making accusations about his being the father of Bella's baby. Knowing it wasn't Jake's because they had been broken up way before she became pregnant. Lying that Bella and Jake were still together. Money to help with the care of Jake and hers father, Billy. If she was in court it would be perjury, right? Would it be a form of falsifying testimony in a legal matter? Fraudelent information? Who pushed Jenks to this limit to achieve divorce/annulment of Edward and Bella. Definitely not Edward he was shocked. Could it be Carlisle? I thought he mellowed out once he talked with Esme. Jasper and Emmett wouldn't do it they are crazy about Bella and Edward. Rose and Emmett both saw the love between Bella and Edward and helped them get married in the beginning. Mystery. Has anyone actually told Jenks Edward isn't interested in annulment any more. Jenks' assistant Angela was all over Edward earlier, could she have been so vile after the rejection to lie to her boss over Edward's stipulation of what he wanted in regards to Bella and his marriage to her? Bella's concerns are that Edward is more financially able to raise their baby better than she can. Afraid he will take the baby away from her. I don't recall any of those ideas crossing his mind. He is thinking of raising the child together with Bella. He is willing to give their marriage a try. He watched the wedding video, he saw his reaction to Bella. He remembers their honeymoon in the suite and so does she remember. Bella is just insecure, she doesn't know Edward completely yet. Edward has a reputation of loving and leaving women. Not the committing type. But things have changed in his mind. He never thought about being a father, now he's looking forward to it. He never thought about being a husband either, but now he wants to give it a try. He wants to keep them together. The more he learns about Bella the more he wants to know. Bella wants him also and deep down she knows she needs to give him a chance to explain. If she didn't want him at the house, she would have slammed the door, locked it, and then walked away to her room. It would have muffled the sound of his expletives, his angry requests, soft and tender requests, and loud knocking to be let into the house to explain. She didn't move because she wanted to be close to him. She doesn't want to believe what her insecurity is telling her. She wants the dream of Edward in her life with their child as a family. The longer she leaves the man out in the rain, the more danger of catching cold, lightening hitting him. Bella may be stubborn, but so is Edward he's not leaving until they talk. He'll get in there somehow either by Bella unlocking the door or when Alice and Rose come home with Jasper and Emmett. Bella is going to have to talk to him some time in the near future. I think they'll work it out. If I was Edward I would be calling Jenks and asking what in the hell he thought he was doing in Forks and offering bribe money for lies and doubts about Bella. Who authorized him to do those things? Why was he trying to hide when he recognized Edward? A lot of questions Jenks has to acknowledge and answer to Edward. Who put him up to it?
Looking forward to next chapter and EPOV.
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