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Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I think Edward was too wrapped up in his happiness at this new place they were in and just forgot that his lawyer was working to get this marriage anulled. I feel bad for him but understand Bella's right to be hurt. He knew that was his lawyer nand just kept that bit of info. to himself... BAD MOVE. I hope you update soon and I hope Bella forgives him.  I ALWAYS look forward to seeing your updates.



Author's Response: Ah- someone who understands both sides. Thank you!

Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I am having a hard time with her not giving him a chance to explain.  Enjoyed it.



Author's Response: I posted some thoughts on the thread that might explain where I was coming from on this one. Go check it out, babe. xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I know Bella had a right to be upset with Edward, but even I think she went a little overboard.  I know her harmones are raging. bir comeon Bella, talk to him!



Author's Response: Just give her a minute- she's processing. We'll get there, I promise! As always, Jen

Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Yikes! I feel so bad for Bella.. the feel of desperation at the unknown.. being pregnant and all. I felt so bad for her. And, what the heck! Edward could have said something as soon as he saw the attorney... what a dumb ass.



Author's Response: Next up is EPOV. I think it'll offer a little insight into his thought process on the whole thing. It's almost finished, so it shouldn't take too long! Thanks, Jen

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

OMG!!! No...don't do this.

I feel like Edward now...I knew the angst was coming but I am not ready for it.

Please let her listen to him.  Let them be angry just a little but don't break them up just as they got together...

I beg you...



Author's Response: Dear Browns----- I made Jslack allow me to respond to your review. I'm completely with you on this! I was totally unprepared for what just happened. I would like to extend an invitation to you to come and sit with me and brood. Maybe if we pout enough, Jslack will fix this mess. I do hope that she takes your plea (and mine) for Bella to let me explain. I understand that I'll get my say next chapter, so hopefully I will be able to get things back on the right track. Much love, Edward

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 20 Soured Lemons

Carlisle...I just know it...it had got to be him.

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 19 Stupid Happy

What the hell?  Why is that bitch calling him?  Ugh...I wanna kick some ass now.

Great chapter BTW

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

wow overeact much. She needs to give him a chance to explain.



Author's Response: Yeah- I think once she gains her bearings and gets a grip on the hormones, the reality of the situation, and the fact that she can't avoid everything she'll realize that they should probably talk. Don't worry, I'll try not to drag that out very long. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

great chapter! update soon!



Author's Response:

Next chap is with beta now.  Update coming soon.  Teaser on thread.

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: melaniemarks (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Gah! Cliffy! I love the story, please update soon!



Author's Response: Thank you! Next chap is with beta now. Teaser on thread. xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye

Oh happy day...

I can't believe I spent ALL day reading this story.  Anyway totally excellent and worth my 2nd day of Spring.

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This

Happy Belated B'Day, December is my birth month too.

So I loved this chapter...I am wondering who was on the phone.

I get the feeling some angst will come forward over this exclusivity thing on Edward's part.

Onto the next chapter...

Reviewer: Nite_Owl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I absolutely love this story ! It is very well written and captivating. I was hooked right away .  There are only certain stories that make you feel like this one does. You just don't want it to end !!  Can't wait for the update !!



Author's Response: Wow- Thank you! I truly appreciate all of your kind words. I hope you'll continue to let me know what you think. xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 16 Honest

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!

Okay overboard I know...but "that was totally wicked."

It was everything it should have been.  I...there are no more words...

I m growing sad though because I know there are like 5 more chapters for me to read.  I certainly don't mind if they are all fluff...they deserve it.

Damn reformed fools...

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Oh come on Bella open the door. these two are putting their relationship to the test. And you know if it is going to work Bella needs to lighted up and listen to him. I think in her heart she knows he will be right.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Apologies for not replying sooner.  Next chap is with beta; teaser on thread.

Much Love,

Jen

Reviewer: amylizhawkins (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Please update soon!!!  Love this chapter and I can't wait for the next.



Author's Response: Thanks bb! Next chap is with beta. Teaser on thread. xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 15 Reveal

Okay...they're not complete idiots.  I weary of reclassifying them just yet.  Last time I rushed my judgment.

This time...I will say, I liked the chapter and I like that they are now both TRYING!

Excellent chapter!!!

Reviewer: chele the original (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

should Edward have said he knew the driver yes. Then he would have been able to possibly rectify the situation. Is rebbeccah an ass Yes. because she would hurt someone to get money .I know that she wants to help her father. Apply for state assistance. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, babe!  Next chapter is with beta, and there's a teaser on the thread.

Much love,

Jen

Reviewer: Mera Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Well, I'll start with saying thanks for updating. i saw this morning that you'd updated and immediently clicked on the story. Secondly, ... Oh my god! I loved it! Except, Bella is slightly overeacting. (Says insanely crazed Edward fan) LOL. Update soon please!



Author's Response: Dear insanely crazed Edward fan, You have my <3. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Next chapter is with beta now. There's a teaser on the thread if you're interested. Much love, Jen

Reviewer: melissa19 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Love your story but I am hoping they will make up they are so amazing together!!! Great story really



Author's Response: Amazing is in the works! Thanks a ton!

Reviewer: blovesvampires (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I really didn't see that coming.
I can't believe Bella wouldn't let Edward explain, it really wasn't his fault, he didn't send his lawyer.
He didn't, right ?
But I understand where Bella is coming from, being angry at him and stuff. I would react exactly the same way.

I still hate Rebecca and I'm not fond of Jacob.
Edward, you better make it up to Bella and explain yourself !

It was definitely worth the incredibly long, tortuous wait for this chapter.
But this next one better not be as long ! I've missed this story so much.

Love it :) xxxxxxxx



Author's Response:

Dear blovesvampires,

I didn't see that shit coming either.  What the hell?  I am with you on the Rebecca hate.  How do you feel about forming a lynch mob to take her down?  I think there are enough of you out there who would join.  With any luck, we could get Bella on board and I could actually get her to listen to me.  You guys would help me convince her, right?

I hear that Jen has submitted the next chapter/my fate to her beta.  Crossing my fingers that she has this trainwreck under control!

Love,

Edward

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?

Yay!!!

They're really idiots now...

The only smart one in this whole ordeal is Esme.  I <3 her!!!

Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Bella is doing what she always does, which doesn't really surprise me because she's pretty weak.  I just hope Edward can get through her thick skull and make her see reason.  I also hope Edward goes home and rips Carlisle a new one for making him look like an ass.



Author's Response:

Just so you're not completely disgusted by the way Bella is acting, I want you to know that I DETEST weak Bella.  Give her just a minute to think things through, and I will give you a much stronger girl.  She's gonna have to pull it together if she's gonna be a mama!

I have some plans for Carlisle.  No worries.

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I'm sad at the heartfail. I have my suspicions as to who is behind the whole ordeal, but that doesn't matter right now. Bella is devastated, Edward is upset, they aren't "together" in any way. He will probably miss out on her pregnancy and God only knows if he will prove her right and go after custody of the baby. Sigh.



Author's Response: I'm sorry, bb! Next up is EPOV and he is going to do his best to figure out what happened. I don't think you'll be surprised at how he goes about it, but you might be a little shaken at the results of it. Regardless, he's gonna do his best to fix it, and we're all just gonna have to hold our breath and pray for the best. I posted my thoughts on what's in my head right now on the thread if you wanna check it out. Thanks so much for your participation and loyalty to this story. I truly appreciate it! xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Yea!! You updated!! I am so happy to see a new chapter I have missed this story : )

Poor Edward he knew he should have said something but he was just to scared. Bella and her pregnancy hormones are crazy! I think we have all been there though : ) irrational, enraged, and absolutley no control over any of it.  I hope they work it out soon though; it makes me happy to see them happy.  He should just start talking through the door. My poor sweet husband has had to do that before bless his heart. She will eventually listen.

Great chapter. Hope to hear from you again soon.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you were excited for the update. The next one is with beta now, so it should be up soon. There's a teaser on the thread if you're interested. xoxo, Jen

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