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Reviewer: saturnine9 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Is that some more to come cos i really having a hard time waiting!!!!!!!!!!!

I wonder if bella 's going to forgive ed???



Author's Response: Next chapter is on second run beta. Shouldn't be too long! Thanks so much, Jen

Reviewer: saturnine9 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

please give us a deserved rest by adding new chapter to ur amazing story^^

Reviewer: KaitBrady (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Loving this story!  Hope Bella let's him explain and Edward fires his stupid lawyer.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You're not the only one wanting Mike Newton in the unemployment line!

Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I'm dying here right now.I need to know about it.Poor Ed, what a mistake.

I hope you laugh about my last post.LOL

I'm in love w/you ffic.I can't wait it.



Author's Response:

I feel like I need to hook you up to a fanfic respirator or something.  Like VB life support.  Haha!  You're very funny and your reviews crack me up. 

Thanks for the love,

Jen

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Yowza!  Come on Bella, dont let the hormones get the best of you, listen to him, let him in, and have an awesome lemons with him......



Author's Response:

I hope Bella listens to you.  That's a great plan!

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: Krismarie94 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Angst. Angst. Angst.
AHhh.

Author's Response: Eeek, I know! So sorry... *hugs* Jen

Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I'm pissed off right now? How do you dare??? LOL It's too much for me. How can i survive without reading what is happening??? OMG!!!

I LOVE your story.FANfuckingTASTIC!!!
When the next chapter???Please!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so sorry you're upset!  I have so enjoyed reading your reviews along the way!  Thank you very much for choosing to read my little story.  Next chapter is in the works.  Coming soon!

Thanks again,

Jen

Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This

I'm loving this story too much.I love possessive Edward and serious/responsible/mature Bella.

Reviewer: trulyedwardly (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

ok stupid stupid girl!! omg i just want to freaking slap the bitch!



Author's Response:

LOL!  You're not the only one!

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Excellent chapter.

I think Carlisle is the one that put the lawyer up to contacting Rebecca.

Hope Bella will let Edward explain the situation, and they can work through this.

Please update when u get the chance.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Everybody is guessing Carlisle. We will probably see next chapter. If not, it'll be the next. Much love, Jen

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Damn that lawyer! They were doing so well!



Author's Response: Oh, I know. Things have taken a little turn. Soon, bb. Things are gonna happen!

Reviewer: Lisalou (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Well, I don't like how Bella is behaving at all.  I hope she will listen soon.  I'm sure his dad is behind this.  I hope he called Mike or Carlisle and got to the bottom of it while he was driving.  I'm glad the next chapter will be in EPOV.



Author's Response:

Yep, next up we will see what E is gonna do about this mess.  He's certainly got some work to do.

Thanks a ton,

Jen

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

 Hmm....well that's interesting. Not sure how this is going to work out. Can't wait to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I love that you always review!

Mwah,

Jen

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Great chapter as always. XXX Whit



Author's Response:

Aw thanks!  I really appreciate you always reviewing!

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: edbellafan (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Oh snap, B!  What the hell??  We are certainly wading into angsty waters here, I'd say. 

So I'm not sure who I feel worse for here:

1. You because you clearly (and rightfully) feel betrayed by E's not being truthful about Mike...

2.  E because you didn't give him the chance to explain (and you left his poor brooding ass out in the rain)...

3. Rebecca because I'm about to beat the ever loving crap out of her...

4. Mike Newton because I suspect once E gets ahold of him, he's going to be the ever loving crap out of him...

OR

5. Jen because she is smack dab in the middle of this insanity and I swear I don't know how she does it.

So...B...I do get your reaction. I personally am an avoider myself when it comes to this type of thing but I do hope cooler heads will prevail. He's sitting out in the rain...right there...outside your door!!! (sobs)  Takes some deep breaths, girl!  Here are some smooshy hugs if you need them...and a few for Jen too! 

Much love,   C

PS Could you tell Jen that we're out of Scooby Snacks?  Oh, and tell her thanks for the bday wishes...she is the shizzle!



Author's Response:

Dear C,

Oh, I just don't know what to do.  Do I listen to what he says with the hope that he is being honest?  I mean, how can I trust that he's not just once again telling (or not telling) me whatever paints him in the best light?  Should I walk away for good?  Maybe this whirlwind romance has been nothing more than that.  It takes more than sexual attraction to build a relationship.  Honesty is a huge thing.  As is communication, I know.  I realize that I'm getting berated for shutting him out.  Can't a girl take a minute to figure things out?  I just need a moment to breathe without the complication of this crazy connection that we have interferring. 

I don't want to push him away, or make a hasty decision, but I also don't want to make a decision that is solely based on what my heart is saying.

Locking him out in the rain was hard.  Then the thunder came.  I just wanted him to leave.  I needed some time.

Please feel free to beat the crap out of Rebecca.  I can understand her need to want the money to help with Billy.  I've witnessed first hand just how hard it is for them to do that with the current income they have, but it's so wrong on so many levels to do that at the expense of someone else.  I'm not surprised that it was an easy decision for her once she realized it would be me who was hurt.  Obviously, I'm not her favorite person.

Edward's lawyer was there for a reason.  I believe that with every fiber of my being.  I'm not sure who's instructions he was following, but I'm hoping it wasn't Edward.  I can't be sure though.  The worse part is that Edward couldn't even say for sure that it wasn't him. 

I don't know how Jen does it either, but I'm hoping she works it out soon.  This limbo is killing me.  I'll pass the message regarding the Scooby Snacks, and thanks for the hugs.  I hope you have a great birthday!

Love,

B

Reviewer: khills (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell

Girl you KNOW how to write.It's funny,intersting,lovely,romantica,sexy and so on.congrats

Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

noooo...i hate cliffhangers! come on that's not fair! 

stupid hormones... she should just let him explain. and damn he should calm the fuck down. 

update soon please! can't stand to wait any longer...! 



Author's Response: Next chapter is with beta now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

UGH!!!!  Why didn't he just tell Bella who Mike was before Rebecca spilled the beans????  Then Bella, I think anyway, would have listened to him....and let him explain....I am so furious that Mike would do that sort of thing though....Bella has all rights to be furious with Edward....



Author's Response: Hey hon, I agree that she has a right to be mad. Edward has some growing up to do, but in all fairness so does Bella. Next chapter is with beta now, so it should be coming soon! xoxo, Jen

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

UGH!!!!  Why didn't he just tell Bella who Mike was before Rebecca spilled the beans????  Then Bella, I think anyway, would have listened to him....and let him explain....I am so furious that Mike would do that sort of thing though....Bella has all rights to be furious with Edward....

Reviewer: maryjojp (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Oh she is just an irration stupid little bitch. She thinks she can be a mother when she behaves like a hurt little girl. Talk about wanting to Bitch Slap someone. Piss me off!



Author's Response: Sheeeshh! Note to self: Do NOT Piss Maryjojp off. Before you bitchslap her, give her a minute to find her center. Her world just got flipped and she is reacting. Her heart, passion, and anger are leading her now. Once her brain catches up, I think you'll be able to tolerate her. At least I hope so... I'm tempted to take her into hiding with me. LOL! Thanks for the review. I love the heated ones! Much love, Jen

Reviewer: raunbow1820 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

awwwwwwwwwwww. Bella should really let Edward explain. I think he deserves it now. He really wants to make things work with her. At the beginning he wasnt sure because he didnt know her but now things are different. I hope they get together soon.



Author's Response: I'm going to direct you to the thread. I posted a little spiel on what's going on in my head. I think it explains a lot. Thanks so much, Jen

Reviewer: CS3 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Keep up the great work! I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

Another great chapter...can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

I love you truly i need more i feel so bad about bella finding out that way damn rachael :( she really knows how to be a bitch but then again it was for her dad but still i cant wait for more dear my mum will be super happy this updated after i tell her haha :D brilliant :D



Author's Response:

Aww, I love you too!  And funny about your mum!

xoxo,

Jen

Reviewer: NuclearLove3640 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears

NOO, you can't leave it there! Update ASAP? I really really like this story! 



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm sorry!  The next chapter is nearly finished.  I hope to finish it this week and I'll get it to you all soon. 

So glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks,

Jen

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