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Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
i just hope he can get it soughted ,they had come so far and now feels like there back to the beginning again
Reviewer: Gabi-b (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
OMG U're bach, yeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhh
What the Mike-bastard-Newton do???
Xo, G.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
I want to leave a thought provoking review but I really can't because I'M JUST TOO BUSY DISLIKING BELLA RIGHT NOW. I guess as a woman I should be more sympathetic to her craziness but somehow I just want to shake her, scream "GROW UP!" and lock her in a room with Edward so that she HAS to listen to his explanations. I guess I can't relate to her actions cause if it was me? You can be damned sure I'd be giving my man MORE than an earful and demanding immediate answers. And Rose was about as obnoxious as she could be! She needs an attitude adjustment as well. I would love to see your BPOV chapter be one where Bella comes to the realization that she's being unfair and needs to get the whole story...not just bits and pieces. PLEASE....no more ANGST!
Thanks. I feel a little better now. Not much...but a little.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
You're BACK :D
For some reason I've been thinking about this story a lot lately. I'm so glad that you've updated!
Update again soon!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
I have missed my updates. I'm glad you're back. I don't know how Aro fits into this, but I don't like it. I'm not sure how I feel about Bella. Maybe her POV will make me more sympathetic.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
Personally, I think Bella is being a bitch. She's not giving Edward the chance to explain his side of things and that is chidish. She says that it's because he lied about it; but, didn't he come forward with the info? It may not have been immediate, but it happened. She has never made poor choices before? Made a decision that didn't work out the way she wanted or thought it would? (and no, I'm not talking about marrying Edward! LOL) Edward is human and he's going to make mistakes. She needs to remember the wonderful times that she had with him and realize that that is the real Edward. She's just making me really angry right now. Maybe I'll have more sympathy for her after reading her POV, but maybe that's why she should have been more willing to talk to him so that HE knows why she's so pissed. He was willing to talk, so I think this is all on her. I also think that Rose should've backed off a little bit. She was WAY to protective. She should've let him come in so that they could've hashed it out immediately. Instead, her interferrance gave Bella the time to stew about things.
Kat
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
I am justy so sad, can't really think about the next chapter.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
He needs to rip Newton a new one. Even if he was doing as a misguided attempt to protect Edward (which I do not believe for one minute), he should have checked with Edward before contacting any of the Blacks. I am still wondering if Carlisle is behind this. I'm glad that Edward doesn't trust Aro. I hope that Bella will really think about things and give Edward a chance to tell her what he found out. Yes, he should have told her that was his lawyer but he was kind of blindsided there. I feel bad for Bella. Rebecca is a real bitch. Great chapter. Love it.
Reviewer: sochain is solas (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
thanks for the update! poor edward has put his foot in it yet again, yeah? eejit. dying to know what newton was up to- i can't help but wonder if maybe newton has more to do with someone else's agenda than edward's. aro's perhaps? anyhow, can't wait to see what happens next. i hope e & b work things out!
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
I love this story, but Bella is acting like a spoiled brat. I understand that this situation is seriously messed up, but she needs to grow-up and start acting like an adult. There is a child in this situation that needs both of its parents. I'm going to try to trust you with this.
I'm just hoping that she can suck it up and realize that this isn't JUST about her anymore. Not to mention, Rose and Alice aren't helping anyone if they allow her to act this way. Please update soon.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
ok, so i think that bella and rose are out of line. maybe because i know both sides to the story and bella doesn't. but Rose i really wanted to punch her. and i normally don't get like that when i read stories. i really watn bella and edward to talk it out. I get why she is upset, but i don't know i think she should have given him a chance to talk. but thank god for alice. hopefully everything will work out soon.
Reviewer: strokesfan84 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
So glad you updated! I'm anxious to see what Bella is thinking!
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 22 Nervous Determination
omg we waited such a long time and all we got was heartache. sadness. oh well. until next time! i'm looking forward to it!
Reviewer: bonnieb (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
I finished Chapter 21 on March 20th...here it is almost a month later. Please tell me you plan on finishing this story. It's soooo good!!
Reviewer: misspanda (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
oh! this story is great! i've just spent the whole day catching up with it!
looking forward to the next update
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: RobwardLover (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
oh geez! I just read from the beginning and finally caught up. I know pregnancy hormones can be crazy, but I think she's gone off the deep end now. I know they're both scared and uncertain, but could she pull her head out of her own ass for five minutes and just listen to him? He could have bailed a long time ago but he didn't. Doesn't that say something? And he really didn't have a whole lot of time to explain anything before the shit-storm that was Rebecca came pouring down.
Please say they resolve their shit and move on to more positive things????
xoxoxoxoxoxo :D
Author's Response: Hey babe-
Thanks for the review. The next chapter is going to beta today, so we'll see how things go.
Much love,
Jen
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
really good story thanks
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: whipdouble (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
my favorite story ever - i want it to be a movie
Author's Response: That's so flattering! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: whipdouble (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
somebody from Oklahoma loves you - this story just makes me smile
Reviewer: GermanECJBluver (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
BEST STORY EVA!!!!!!!!! I LUV IT!!!!! THIS IS SO...SO....BELLA-AND-EDWARDISH IF U NO WAT I MEAN? PLZ PLZ I WANT THE REST OF IT!!! yes yes 'i want never gets' but this is urgent!!
Author's Response: Haha! Sometimes I want does get. It's not always in a timely fashion, but it still comes. The next chapter is with my beta's now. Should be soon.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: LoveStoned4RPattz (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
I love your story....hope Bella grows up a little bit. Although pregnancy hormones can make a girl do strange things....:) Looking forward to the great make up sex...yippeeee
Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Next chapter is with beta now. Coming soon!
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Crap, crap, crap, crap I'm positive that his father is behind this who;e but Bella is the one being irational and letting her imagination run away with her she has to learn to talk things out and think before she reacts
Author's Response: I think they both have a lot of lessons to learn. Stay tuned! Next chap coming soon.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
I can't help thinking that Bella is suffering from pregnancy hormones...cz she is irrational. But that's just me.
Author's Response: I think you're right.
Reviewer: saturnine9 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 21 Rain and Tears
Is that some more to come cos i really having a hard time waiting!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder if bella 's going to forgive ed???
Author's Response: Next chapter is on second run beta. Shouldn't be too long!
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: saturnine9 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 12 Birthday Dinner From Hell
please give us a deserved rest by adding new chapter to ur amazing story^^
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