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Reviewer: lr51 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Oh no!!!!! We need to find out what happened to Edward! Did he kill his lawyer??????
Author's Response: He's not going down for murder! I've gotten him in enough predicaments without adding THAT!
Thanks so much!
Jen
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I'd love to rack it up to hormones but she really needs to let him talk to her. All they have is miscommunications...Good chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's rough right now, but it'll get better.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I was so excited to see an update! Please post the next one soon! I'm really irratated at Bella so hopefully she will pull her head out of her butt now! ;-)
Author's Response: I love that you're excited!
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
OK, it's time for emo and I-don't-need-anyone-else Bella to give it a rest already!!! In the time span of a few minutes of a surprise passing by of his lawyer at La Push and he made an off the cuff momentary decision not to tell everything before they got to Jacob's and in front of Jacob - and she's doing ALL this and getting this upset???? Not even the courtesy of allowing an explanation? A little high and mighty, eh? Enough is enough. She should be on the next plane to NY and get her man!
Author's Response: She is quite stubborn. Maybe she will take off to NY and get her man. We shall see.
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I so hate cliffies. Why do you guys do this to us... Uugghhh! Great chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love you. I'm sorry.
Reviewer: Patsy (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Well, that is one way for Edward to get her attention..... I feel bad for Bella but also wonder how much of this is she doing to herself...
Author's Response: Haha! He's pulling out all the stops!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
JAIL??!! what did he do? did he beat up Aro...lol...looking forward to reading the next update
Author's Response: Next chapter will explain.
Thanks for reading, bb!
Jen
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Arrested ,omg he hit the lawyer ! Didn't he ??
As much as i love this story ,i really need happier events ..please ?
Bella needs to talk to Edward and soon !
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're loving it. I need happier events, too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Jen
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
You know I'm really starting to HATE the cliffies!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know. I'm sorry. I'll try to be speedy with the next chapter.
ILY,
Jen
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Oh God. What the heck did he do? I'm dying here....
Ima not gonna hate on Bella here..hormones and all, just like I said on the forum but damn....girl needs to take a step back. She's tied to this man whether she wants to be or not...and isn't she just as guilty for not telling her Mom the truth?
Dying for more....please update soon? It's gonna be a tough wait. I still love this story and can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I always love hearing what you think, both here and on the forum. Thanks so much.
I know it seems like she's being irrational, but she's just trying to figure things out. She's not going to push Edward out of the baby's life. (I'm pretty sure I'd be killed if I made that happen). And I think me taking so long between updates makes it seem like there's a lot more time passing in the story. It's only two days after they saw Newton.
Like Edward, I promise to fix this. Trust me.
Thanks so very much and you know I love ya!
Jen
Reviewer: MizJenn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 14 Are You Sure?
**squee**
Seriously, you rock!
Thanks for writing this...
Reviewer: SallyThePumkinQueen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
love <3
Author's Response: This always makes me smile. Thank you!
<3 hard,
Jen
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Okay...just so you know, love the story but I don't like Bella any better after this chapter. Just because she can go pick out a house to live in does not mean she's growing up....or putting her baby first. She's not redeemed in my eyes yet by a long shot. All I have to say is her ass better be on a plane to NY ASAP. If fixing things is important enough to Edward to go to JAIL for it, I think Miss High and Mighty could get off her ass and go see what's going on. Self-righteous Bella continues to be extremely unattractive. (I do have to say that the plot twist with jail was pretty cool, though!) Please let them get back to sweet messd up Edward and Bella falling in love with each other and their baby...please?
Author's Response: I LOVE HOW FIRED UP YOU ARE! All of my readers are so very passionate! It'll get better, I promise.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: 01dani (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
wow oooo i cant wait to find out what happens
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying!
Thanks,
Jen
Reviewer: padalf2510 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Bella, Bella, poor girl! Edward what are you doing?!!! So good!!!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! You also just so happen to be my 2000th reviewer! *SQUEEEEEEE* That just excites me. I never thought I'd see 100, much less 2000!
If you're interested I'd like to send you the next chapter in full when its finished. Just pm me your email address.
Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!
ILY,
Jen
Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I hope bella goes to NY to kick some ass...
Author's Response: I think Edward may have NY covered with the ass kicking!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: lineli (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 6 Birthday Beer and Burgers
hi I'm from Pinchbeck England.
and i'm Team Bella
Reviewer: TwilightLuver127b (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Holy shit love the story
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate you reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I LOVE YOU SERIOUSLY BUT THAT WAS MEAN :( i hate how upset bella is i wish i could give her a hug and omg im dying to see what happens next edward needs a hug too cant wait for more doll :D
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU, TOO! I apoligize for the cliffie. They do both need a hug.
Thanks so much,
Jen
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
WTF, arrested for what!? Holy crap, didn't see that one coming.
Author's Response: Big surprises. Revealing the reasons next chapter.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: jlugo (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
What?! Arrested?! Oh cannot wait until the next update!
Author's Response: I'll try to be quick. Next chapter will reveal what happened.
ILY,
Jen
Reviewer: Tinuviel (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Uhhh, he's been arrested??!! What the fuck??!! That cliffie really, really sucks!! You're kiling me!!!
Ohhh I can not wait to find out what has happened!!
Thanks for updating and I hope the next update is going to come soon?? PLEASEEEE!! :-)
Sarah!
Author's Response: Hey Sarah-
I'm really not trying to kill you, I promise.
You're welcome for the update, I love hearing all of your thoughts. Keep em coming!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
man i kinda think she's being an ass about this! great chapter.
Author's Response: She is certainly giving him a hard time, but to her it's all justified. So glad you enjoyed the chapter.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Ok dude!!! Did he kill mike lol oh darn!!! U better update soon I can't wait to c what happened! Lol. Epov next chappy? I want a baby g btw lol. Update sooon love the drama.
Author's Response: NO WAY WOULD I SEND HIM DOWN FOR MURDER! However much we all wish for Newton to be dead, he won't be. EPOV is next. A baby girl, huh? Maybe so. I'll try to be speedy with the next update.
Thanks so much,
Jen
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