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Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Ha! Looks like Edward didn't stop at 3 beers. Did he go to see Newton while he was drunk and end up punching his lights out? Well, at least it's got Bella's attention. I wonder how she'll react. If she's still being a complete twonk, then I guess she'll just leave him to sort it out and get on with buying her condo, pretending he means nothing to her and she can do everything on her own. She says she's pissed off with him for lying (if only be omission) but he did explain that he panicked. Can't she find it in her heart to at least talk to the man, for crying out loud. Okay, she's hormonal, I get that, but she can't just ignore how she feels about him or the fact that he is the father of her baby and there's just no way of avoiding him in the future. Get a grip, Bella - you know he's the best thing that's ever happened to you, so stop being so self-righteous and give the guy a break - we know you will in the end! Ooh, I can't wait for EPOV.
Author's Response: I just want to say, I love the word twonk! That's a great word!
As always, thanks so much for all of your thoughts. EPOV is coming up next. We'll have to see what all of this jail business is about.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Crap looks like I missed being the 2000th reviewer...LOL!!! Loved the new chappie and the cliffie..UGH, hehehehe!!!! I am glad that she realizes that she was being childish and that she needed to grow up....Yes Edward would ask what about the baby...and I understand her POV about him bringing it up whenever they would have a disagreement but she has to see that he is worried not only about what goes on with them but also the baby...I am looking forward to seeing what he did to Mike, I am guessing that is the reason he is in jail.....Oh, btw, I went total fangirl the other day when I got the email that you were folllowing me on Twitter....
Author's Response: Thanks so much for loving it! You know I always love to read what you think about my chapters. I really appreciate your loyalty to this thing. With what I've done to these two, it means a lot to be trusted by my readers.
Of course I'm following you on twitter! You're one of my fave readers! And, geez, don't fangirl over me. That makes me sound waaayyy more important than I actually am. Plus, I suck at twitter, so you may unfollow me out of pure boredom with the random crap I say.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 18 The First Goodbye
I know your way ahead of me on this story but a baby book with lists of names he likes to put the babys first pitcure in would be something they would keep forever my kids loved their baby books
Reviewer: Lisalou (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I really don't like how Bella is being. She really should talk to him. I thought seeing her side would make me like her more, but it didn't. I can't wait to see why Edward is in jail. Please update soon.
Author's Response: You aren't the only one. EPOV is next and we'll find out what went down.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: adrie45 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Not the dreaded cliffie!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great chapter. Update soon
Author's Response: So sorry! Glad you enjoyed it, and I'll write quickly!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: ashsjc93 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
make bella and edward get back together!
Author's Response: Note to self: make edward and bella get back together.
Got it. I'll do my best.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Jen
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
great chapter! update soon!!! i cant wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
The manager did some something illegal and they are going to blame Edward! Aghhh!!!! More drama, angst! Ugh!
Author's Response: Eeeekkkkk! Sorry. We'll see with EPOV what happened. Coming soon.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
WHAT???? Edward in jail........... Ohhhhh I can't wait to hear about this!! I love this story!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! EPOV will reveal why he's in jail.
*hugs*
Jen
Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
wow- edward and jail- i wasnt thinking the thing with the lawyer would have gone that wrong
Author's Response: You just never know what is gonna happen. Stay tuned. EPOV coming soon!
Reviewer: Jaci (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Oh that Bella is always so darn stubborn and frustrating! Looking forward to the reunion! Jacilyn
Author's Response: Yes, she is.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
nice
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
gahhh your last two chapters have been soooo sad. i just want a happy ending! get us to the happy ending eventually! :)
Author's Response: I'll get you there!
Reviewer: jryanyurk (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
edward totally killed newton right?!? this fic owns me! can't wait for the next chapter...
Author's Response: Haha! I guess we'll see next chapter!
Your reviews own me!
Thanks a ton!
Jen
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
In jail? Hmmmm...did he bust up his lawyer? Ohhh plz be kind and update soon...hate long waits in-between...have to re-read prev chappies to re-acquaint (sp?) my "adhd" self with the storyline! I love this story...and the direction in which u are taking it to! (((hugsss)))
Author's Response: Sorry about the time between updates. I'm doing the best I can. And glad I'm not the only one who gets fic adhd.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
*hugs* back at ya,
Jen
Reviewer: Mera Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
'Argg!' is right. I shudder to know what Emoward did to wind up in jail. (If he even is) I glad Bella didn't throw out the rattle and journal, but come on! He has to explain a little bit. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: She'll let him explain. It's only been two days, so she's still a little hurt.
Thanks so much, babe!
Jen
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 8 Scotch and Memorabilia
Dang! I can't stop reading this! Edward is a Cad! I like him less and less! Loving Jazz and Em!
Reviewer: ColemanTwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 4 Pitbulls and Haircuts
Well, he really is a complete ass!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
that was kind of out of the blue...but i hope edward and bella patch things up soon.
Author's Response: I know! What the heck? It'll get better, just stick with me.
Thanks,
Jen
Reviewer: TheDSP (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
"Like I said, I'm fine. I have to think about this baby. Things are different now."
Really, really lol? Alienating the father of your child, just because you have person issues with him, is what's best for the baby?
This girl needs serious help. Can she not see that her shit stinks too? I mean... sure, Edward isn't perfect. But good god, neither is she. She is making bad decisions left and right. Selfish, irrational, hurtful decisions. The only difference is, no one is holding them against her and putting her through hell for them... like they do Edward. How is that fair?
She honestly reminds me of my 13 year old brother. Nothing is ever his fault. He doesn't know how to say the words "I'm sorry" or "I was wrong". And he punishes people for their mistakes as if he was some perfect angel.
I know he wont, but I really kind of wish Edward would move on to someone better. I would rather be with someone who messes up, but is willing to admit to and take responsibility for their mistakes (hell, Edward takes responsibility for BELLA'S mistakes somtimes too)... than someone who messes up, maybe less (though I don't think Bella's mistakes are less bad than Edward's, just different) and acts like they are always the victim.
I'm starting to think Edward is just going to be Bella's bitch for the rest of the story. Bella over reacts, Edward acts like he cheated on her and grovels like some pathetic dog. It's already happened like 3 or 4 times.
Author's Response: I think Bella is considering the immediate safety when she says this. She's thinking that she doesn't need to be upset all the time, because of the effects it will have on the baby. Alice keeps asking if she's okay, and that's in reference to her emotional and physical state.
It's only been two days since all of this went down. Other than the movie night, Bella hasn't been around Alice and Rose very much. Also, keep in mind that Rose spoke to Bella's doctor who told her that she needed to stay calm, eat, drink, and all of that. Rose wouldn't be inclined to jump on her after only two days for this reason. Bella is getting out of bed, going to work, being fairly normally (faking, and pulling it off). All in all, the safety of the baby is the most important thing. That essentially starts with Bella taking care of herself.
As far as Alice is concerned, she is just in shock. That'll wear off and she won't sit by without having her say. If there's even a need by that time for her to say anything.
Do you really wish Edward would find someone else? Surely not.
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me. I hope I explained a little of my thinking. It'll get better.
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: jejcjs (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Arggghh is right! What the heck?! Any thoughts to updating sooner than usual so we can not be driven nuts by this cliffy?
Author's Response: I'll do the best I can to update quickly.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: btomasko (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
yes... they do suck.
Author's Response: Sorry...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
*hugs*
Jen
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 Waking Up In Vegas-Naked?
Poor B! He can't be any nicer?!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 Endings and Beginnings
I dont know what to say yet but I am pretty sure that someone needs to get them in ths same room together maybe there phyical reaction to each other will spark some hidden memories my husband thinks you keep this up and you can be moved to best friend statis that part with the mirror damm.......
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