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Reviewer: ABC345 (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
oh noooo!!!!!
he's in jail?! I can't wait to see what Edward has done to do such a thing...
I also think Bella needs to stop acting like a child. I mean come on, okay Edward made a mistake, but he is trying here... and then Bella just has to buy that condo without Edward knowing. It is her baby and all but it's his too, Edward is going to want to be a part of its life.
I'm just frustrated with them both :p
I love your story and the way you write :D
can't wait for the next update , please update soon ! (this is me begging :p)
xxx
Reviewer: edella (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
BREATHTAKINGLY WRITTEN!!!
SPEECHLESS HERE .............:D :D
UPDATE PLEASE.....PLEASE...........
Reviewer: Ryley Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I love this story. cant wait for more. hopefully it wont be long? :)
Reviewer: 3eDe3e (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
THETS NOT FAIR!!! You cant just finish it like that! :'(
Reviewer: LeeLeeLee (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Im in love with this stort its great ooooh i wonder why he is in jail lol cant wait to find out post soon xx
Ur New Loyal Fan Leonie Is Waiting Haha lol =]
Reviewer: jh1266 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Just started reading your story and really love it! Can't wait to read your next chapter!
Reviewer: pdxamy (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I love this story so much. Not a very detailed review, but it's the truth. Oh Edward. Alice needs to back off. Seriously
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I'm guessing that Edward beat the crap out of either Newton or whoever put Newton up to his doings. I freaking love your story! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
huh???! WHAT??
he beat up newton didn't he?
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
aaarrghhhh!!! WTH??
Reviewer: twilightobssessedmom (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I just read your whole story last night and today. I totally neglected my kids and the laundry, but it was worth it!!! Great story!! Can't wait to find a new update!!!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Argg! is right
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Again, I am the only one that feels bad for Bella! Oh well, I am quite confident in the fact that things will work out eventually for these two. I hope Edward didn't hurt Newton too badly but I could also see his trouble coming at the hands of Aro. He is shady and I assume will create problems. Thanks for updating quickly and please do it again!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Oh flip! What did Edward do!
Reviewer: Carinanellie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Only leave us wanting more and more. I loved it.......Of course, Bella, she'd be so stubborn and make things more difficult. Empty condo next to her.....maybe Edward would move in next door? If, I had to do that it'd be interesting.
Edward being arrested.......way out of left field, nice cliff to teetering on. Always enjoy your chapters on this one and thanks for being my first fan fic I got hooked on :).
Carina
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Whoo, Whoo! Did E serve Newton with a beat down?! Good chapter!
Reviewer: anne2097 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I just got all caught up on this story. Clearly Carlisle has asked for Newton to do the shady stuff.
AND ... I think Bella is really over reacting!
Waiting for more ... :)
Author's Response: Tons think that Carlisle is all over this. We'll see soon.
Thanks so very much!
Jen
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
Holy shit Edwards In Jail!! NO FUCKING WAY!! I LOVE IT.. please please please update as soon as possible.. I want to know why Edward's been arrested please..
Excellent chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so very much!
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
ah man.....what a way to end a chapter....please update soon:)
Author's Response: I'm gonna try my best to write quickly!
Thanks,
Jen
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 17 I Want This
Finally! So good to see there is lots of hope!
Author's Response: So glad you are reading! Thanks so much for reviewing as well!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: navy_wife (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
MORRRRRRREEEE!!!!!!!! <3 this!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
I really hope these two can get it together!
Author's Response: They will. I'll make sure of it!
As always, thank you,
Jen
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
:( Please update soon!!!!!!!!!! ;)
Author's Response: I'm gonna write as quickly as possible!
Reviewer: NewAtThis (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
That was fast!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
Jen
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 23 Breathe In, Breathe Out
i finally caught up with you now i wait but its worth the wait
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you think so!
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