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Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Back to the Beginning
Oh.My.God! Um...WHAT?
Wow! Can I just say you're awesome! I NEVER in a million years would have guessed all of that was a "dream". And we're just now getting to the present. I can already tell you I'm going to have to read this a second time once it's finished.
But, now that it's sinking in a little it feels right. I mean, she keeps talking about the complete love she feels when she's with Edward and how she feels like she's home and even that she didn't feel this kind of connection with Jake. Plus, there's not a lot of events with the others. Charlie's gone to work a lot, and the girls are only there every once in a while. Which also makes sense because she's so in love with Edward that that would be what she would mainly be thinking about.
Hmmm...you are a sneaky one.
Author's Response: You know, I do try to be as sneaky as possible when trying to fool a ton of people! LOL!
Thanks so much for reviewing and rating! I love it! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as more unfolds!
XOXO
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Based on Actual Events
I loved the change! It was WONDERFUL!!!!!!! Great chapter! And thanks for keeping them coming so quickly!!! YAY YAY YAY YAY!
Author's Response: Well the next two chapters are done already, but after that I am done with the backlog of chapters and they may or may not take longer...it depends on how busy I get in every day life...but I am half done 17, so I may be able to keep them coming quickly!
Thanks for reviewing!
XOXO
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Based on Actual Events
Wow..that's all I can say. I loved it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved it! YAY!
Thanks for R & R!
XOXO
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Based on Actual Events
OMG. So everything through ch 12 was nothing but a dream during her coma?! Damn you're good.
Author's Response: The conversations were real...well except on her part, of course. And the memories (first time having sex, when Edward asked her out the first time before her mom died, the sex in the meadow, the sex in Edward's office, and then of course right before the accident).
But yes...other than that, all a dream!
Thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
I am blown away.
Author's Response: In a good way, i hope! ;P
thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
I'm so glad that she was never married to jake. Great twist to the story!!! Loved it!
Author's Response: LOL! You know, I have had a few people say they were glad she wasn't really married to him! LOL!
Glad you enjoyed the twist! Thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: Meikela (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
Dios mio - my head is spinning, but in a good way. But, you can't leave us in limbo for long - mommy needs answers!!!!
Author's Response: Well, the next chapter is up! Hopefully you enjoy it as well!!
Thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: lnb2107 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Bad Reception
Now knowing that Bella is the mystery patient, this chapter is really heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Yup, there were a few parts before we find out who the mystery patient is tht when you go back and read it, it's pretty heartbreaking.
This chapter for one, when Charlie pleads with her to "get up" in the beginning...and a few more.
Thanks for reviewing!
XOXO
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
Well, I have a bit more clear understanding of what's going on now...can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, I am glad things are a little more clear now! Hopefully they continue to unfog!
Thanks for t review!
XOXO
Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
i am soo confused and now feel the need to reread the entire story...you've done very well
Author's Response: Confusion is to be expected...more will be uncovered the further in we get! I promise!
Thanks for R & R!
XOXO
Reviewer: LoganOwens (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
OMG!!!
Soooo good!! What a rollercoaster. I can't wait to keep reading.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it!!
Thanks for R & R!!
XOXO
Reviewer: Christine Rose (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
Not at all what I expected. She's been in a coma this whole time? Wow!
Author's Response: Yup, the WHOLE time! crazy, huh?
Thanks for R & R!
XOXO
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
Wow. Talk about a mind-fuck lol. I totally didn't see that coming!
But why the hell would Bella imagine she was married to Jake when she could dream about Edward instead? Gross lol.
Author's Response: It will be answered in a later chapter...but guilt is what made her dream of a lifew with jake...
thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: Christine Rose (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Up to Interpretation
Loved this chapter! I'm looking forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: Christine Rose (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Surprise
Can't wait to hear more about her dream.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
ok... that was a twist that i was not expecting! i have a few questions... like what happened with the time before edward talked to her in the deream? how did that translate into the 'real' wolrd? also what exactly got bella to realize that this was a dream and that she was really married to edward and not jake?and lastly all the memories that she had with jake were really her memories with edward? you said if you did your job well we would have questions haha.... but this is a very good story and i really hope that bella and everyone is ok!
Author's Response: Hmm...okay, well
Question 1: it would have been her mourning Jake, and getting back to every day stuff...which I did write, just not a lot of because, lets face it, people want their Edward! LOL!
Question 2: She didn't realize it until after she "woke up". When she saw Jake in her dream after her "accident' (which was just her remembering the real accident that put her in the coma) and she saw her body laying there. When her eyes opened the reality all came flooding back.
Question 3: And yes, some of the memories she had of Jake were really Edward memories. But some will be revealed to be Jake memories...
Thanks so much for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
WOW!!!!!!!!!! That was a twist!! And secretly I feel sooo good that Jake was just a dream......
EDWARD 4 EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LMAO...I think a lot of people felt that way!
Thanks for R & R!
XOXO
Reviewer: Tyranny (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
I liked the twist. Very cool. Can't wait for the explanation.
Author's Response: It's coming...
Thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
Holy cow..I did not see that coming. I'm extremely shocked, but in a good way. I love when stories keep me guessing and take me by surprise. This one defintrly did that. Great job!
Author's Response: I am so glad that so many people didn't see it coming! That makes me feel good!
Thanks for R & R!
XOXO
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Up to Interpretation
I wish Edward would show up when I'm in the library. I'm still holding out hope that someday he might. A girl can dream.
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Surprise
Oh boy..horrible dreams are never a good sign.
Reviewer: lnb2107 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
I was definitely not expecting that! So did she ever really lose touch with the Cullens and Rose in high school?
Author's Response: She did, but not for as long as her dream allowed her to believe. She had reconnected before they all went off to college. That will be explained later on though...
Thanks for the review!
XOXO
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
=O whhhhhhhhat!!
Ok, this has officially become the best story EVER!! lol - i was not expecting that AT ALL!
Gah, I looooooooooove that twist!! SO well written. wow.
Looking forward to the nex chapter! x
Author's Response: LOL! I am getting a lot of that! I am so glad it's being well received...
Thanks so much for R & R!
XOXO
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Back to the Beginning
HOLY FUCKING SHIT I AM ONG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't even
omg
I can't even fucking breath
I am sooooooooooo...GAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need more
i need more
I can't go on living without more! YOU NEED TO GIVE ME MORE!
I get it all now, but I still have sooooo many quesitons! Seriously, this story definitely just topped my list for "most beautifully spun webs ever"!!!!! Holy shit. I'm still going crazy. Still. It's been like, five minutes.
How dod you do this? All of this craziness. You amaze me, really.
Author's Response: LMAO! It took a LOOOOOOT of planning and plot outlines and proofreadings to make sure I didn't eff anything up...it was tough and probably the most intense and stressful story I have written! LOL!
Thanks so much for R & R!! LOVE IT!
XOXO
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Back to the Beginning
wow you totally caught me off guard
but i like this twist of fate
carry on!
Author's Response: lol! YAY! Then my job was done! WOO HOO!
Thanks for the review!
XOXO
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