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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Ready?
just as things were looking up.. they had to get angsty again... i really hope everything is ok!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for R&R!! The next chapter is with the Beta, so it should be up soon!
Reviewer: rpfan07 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Gone
Great story so far i can't wait to read more
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
Hi some of my banners are hitting the crapper so I am resending it to you this way with some instruction I found in the forum and the link to the banner, I recoded this one because the code was bad'
Once you get to the screen where you can edit your story (I think it's "manage stories"), find the place where you can edit your summary (like type it in.) You click in that box (usually make the banner the first thing) and then there is an icon that is green with a little tree on it. That's the "insert a photo" button. You click on it, and a box pops up asking you to paste in the URL or whatever it's called (the address for the banner.) Copy and paste the link i've sent you into the box that came up on Twilighted (in the story summary) when you clicked on the tree button. Then it should work.
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/9167/comingbacktolifebyangel.jpg
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
I cried.....I think that is every parent's fear.
You want to hold on to your baby, but can't when it is time to let them fly. I also can't imagine outliving my baby, but I also dread the day I lose my parents. It is neverending.
I really hope things get better for Bella, not worse.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
hi i'm resending the banner just in case
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9167/comingbacktolifebyangel.jpg
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
So good! So good! Love this story!
I hope all goes well with your baby! I hope your little one will sleep well and give you lots of writing time! :)
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Based on Actual Events
Holy Crap! Forget my questions form earlier!!!
SUPER AMAZING CHAPTER! I totally did not see that happening! I thought it was Tanya in the bed... So good!!! So good!!!!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Back to the Beginning
Say what!?!? AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!
Loved that you had Jake in it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had to honor him somehow! This was one of my favorite chapters to write! I am glad that you liked it so much!
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Happy Birthday
Great chapter! Very curious about the girl!!!
I really like this story! :)
So he is a doctor... I have a few, hopefully not annoying questions: when did he move to town and how did Bella not know he lived in town or did she and they never talked before?? A couple of chapters back when Bella raced after his car, was he parked in front of his house? Also did Bella work when she was married to Jake? Sorry I have so many questions.
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Going Back
I really like this story. Just started to day and I'm hooked! :)
Just curious... does Edward have a job? And if so when does he go to work? I have a theory that he was the doctor who worked on Jake, but not sure now, since he never mentions work...
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
I really liked seeing inside Charlie's head a little bit. Good luck with the baby!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
Hi sweetie I love the story and just sent you a email with your banner attached. I know the shocking truth. I do fuffill my promises even though they may be late. Sorry. Keep writing I'm so glad she woke up
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
oh great chapter! I love that it is from Charlie's POV!!! Nicely done! I am a new mother and his words about death and Bella's childhood memories brought me to tears!!!!!!! Nicely done!
Reviewer: laleangel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
AWWWWWWWWW I loved this chapter. Hearing it from Charlie's POV It would honestly bring a tear to a glass eye!! Beautifully written, just soooo Charlie. You wrote him so well.
Thanks for this chapter.
Lee Anne x
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
Awww! I really like Charlie's pov. He's such a sweet daddy. And I liked hearing about Bella going out with Edward for the first time from him, it was cute :]
Great chap! Looking forward to 19 :]
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
It was a good chapter!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
Yay!!!!!
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
Charlie's POV was fantastic. I was amazed that it was so heartfelt.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
For starters...good luck with the Baby!!!!!! We're all routing for you!
Great chapter...it was refreshing to really have a recap of all that's happened and to have it come from Charlie's POV really helped. It was emotional but it was still an "outsider" POV so we know what happened in the missing moments for Bella, Jake, and Edward. It was also great to actually "hear" about Jake calling Charlie for help.
Again, good luck and we'll wait as long as we need to. :)
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
that was a really nice/intense chapter.... haveing it from charlie's POV... i really liked it!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
he was facing every fathers worst fear of something happening to their child. you wrote that chapter better then anyone could. cannot wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
I am still confused as to why Bella dreamed of being married to Jacob...
Has that not really been revealed yet? Or am I just stupid, and missed it?
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
such a nice chapter. I loved seeing how much Charlie loves bella!
good luck hope u have a safe and easy delivery :)
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Daddy's Little Girl
its so good. need more.
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