Very enjoyable.  It's amazing how the human mind works. Especially when it is trying to protect itself or hide from itself from the truth. Bella's mind taking the facts and mixing them while sleeping to mix up certain facts and live an entirely different life over the life of the story until she awakens into reality.  Adored the love story of Edward and Bella as it grew between them. All the pain and sorrow that Bella and Charlie had to bear in their lives with the loss of Renee. Bella with the loss of her closest friends through her own behaviors during her grieving period.  Personally I thought it was awfully severe on both Alice and Rosalie's part to not forgive her for those actions. Understanding came later upon her awakening that he mind distorted those facts to arrive at her reaching out more towards Jake. The depth of the love of Edward was amazing and beautiful.  Especially right after the accident when he thought of Bella's wishes about being on machines. Even knowing he was going to lose her telling his dad to take her off because against her wishes only to be told she was pregnant.Total shock for Edward didn't have a clue. The ultimate joy of both Edward and Charlie to have Bella back when she did wake up after having her gone for over 5 months.  Loved Charlie's POV even though I cried so hard it was difficult to read it. The phone call from Jake, he was just hanging on long enough to give Charlie the information needed. Just enough left to dial 911 before he was gone. So sad. Both fathers knew the weather was the cause of the accident not really either of them at fault.  It was miracle any of them survived it.  If it hadn't been for Jake making those calls none of them would have survived.  All four of them would have died on that road. Instead Jake saved them. So giving the baby Jake's name as a middle name was fitting to remember a friend, as well as the man who save them too. Bella making that trip to Port Angeles so quick after both the accident and the birth of her son was quite a feat. I remember trying to go back to work at 6 weeks after my daughter was born.  Even leaving her with my mom for care, I cried all the way to work.  My sister wanted me to see a movie with my husband and offered to watch her for us to have an evening out. The movie was too long, we couldn't wait to get back and take her home.  My sister expected us to see a movie, go to dinner, make an evening of it. Granted she never had children of her own, no couldn't wait to pick her up and go home, she was only a couple months old.  So when Jasper said you can call every hour if you want to check on him, I understood because that's how it feels when they are so young and small.  But having that alone time with spouse is so important especially in Edward and Bella's case with Bella being in a coma for over 5 months and then being in hospital for additional couple weeks for physical therapy to start walking again. Then back in for emergency C section with placenta detachment another couple weeks.  Bella must really be sick of hospitals now being in them over the last 6 months and all her prior time growing up.  Did enjoy Edward's embarrassment in front of his father when Bella asked about restarting their sex life.  Could just imagine his discomfort of it being his dad, his boss, and Bella's doctor all rolled up in one. 

Another great tale of love and lust and making it through monumental tragedy!!!  Please keep writing and sharing your amazing writing talents with us...your fans!!!  Thank you!!!  I LOVED this story too!!!

So random guess time.  Is Edward the driver of the car that killed Jake? And the girl in the hospital was his wife/fiancee/girlfriend/date that was in the car too?? I guess we shall see...

Another amazing story.  I kind of figured out that she was in a coma after about five chapters.  I started to realize the things people were saying could easily have been things people would say to a coma patient and the requests for her to "please wake up" were a good hint as well. Although a couple of times I still questioned myself as to whether or not I was right about the coma.  You have done an wonderful job writing her coma world so that you keep wondering, "is it real or a dream?".  I really admire anyone who can write, and you write so well.  Keep those stories coming.  They make my day.

All the best.

 

this story is so good, even the total switch as Bella recovered--realizing that everything was in her unconscience state and she was the one in the room, behind the curtain-----that was such a surprise, you are a great one for coming up with the mystery, I kept trying to figure who it was     I'm really enjoying, please continue.

Thank you Thank you Thank you for the great story.  You really have a gift for being creative!  I can't wait to read more of your twisted stories!  

See!  I knew it!  The ZINGER!  Damn woman, you're good!  

Hmmm, why is everyone commenting on how much Edward has missed Bella?  I'm very curious ... I think there's more to the story than what meets the eye!  And who's behind the curtain when Bella goes in for her check ups?  Guess I'll find out!  :)  Great read so far!

Wow. This is by far the most intriguing and talented pieces of FF I have ever read. Just..WOW. There are few that catch me by surprise anymore and this story went way beyond that!

I have never read anything like this. It rocked my world.

great story! Truly enjoyed reading it :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am beyond thrilled that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and for the review! I treasure them all! If you haven't already, please check out osme of my other stories! I'd be happy to hear what you think of them as well :)

xoxo,

AG1981

god what a twist

Author's Response:

This was probably one of my favourite twists to write! LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981