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Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 12:36 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

wow what a very different kind of story really looking forward to reading the next chapter

Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Very exciting, please post again, soon.

Reviewer: vanilfrappe (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Please write soon! This is just the story I've been craving! Its perfect in its fine detail. My tongue craves to read the desert spices! I'm also insanely curious to see how Edward will approach Bella into his...harem. Do write soon!

Reviewer: foxytomato (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Gimme more, please!

Reviewer: Nicolina (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Interesting! Are you continuing this?

Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

I just found this story - I like it ...cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Prologue - ديباجة

oooooooooh, creepy edward, I like it!!!!!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Great chapter. Glad Bella's been introduced into the story. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: teya211087 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

This Fic Seems Interesting, Im Lookign foward To See How Bella Can Stall Him.. Im Also Guessing This Is Based On The Fairytale.. Arabian Nights.. ?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

So is Alice one of the vampires that Jasper is chasing through the city? Without years of resistance, how will Edward keep himself from just feeding on Bella? I can't wait to see how you weave this tale!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

that was scary, Edward freaked me out...Freakward, ;) can't wait for what happens next.

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:30 PM · On: One. Sate ~ واحد. ل

this is definitely a darkward..why is he choosing virgins?

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Prologue - ديباجة

Mybe Sheikward? A thousand and one nights is one of my fave books. Can't wait for what your planning with this story.

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Love this story, seems like a long time since the last chapter!

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

This is so interesting. Hope you update again soon.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Well done!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Oh, goodness, I didn't realize it was Alice. *wince* Oh boy, that was... wow.

Thanks for the update! I'm so fascinated with this timeframe. Not once have I ever thought of this but it paints some incredibly rich and beautiful pictures in my head.

Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Very nice! I'm so glad you're continuing on with this.

Reviewer: mei-lin (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Exciting!

Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

I'm sure I was one of many who nominated this story. It's just so original. I am impressed with the idea of the trade routes, a constant influx of new people to hunt, so well done. Good luck. I'm sure you know who I voted for, Sugar

Reviewer: angiepie02 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

To short! I really like it so far, can you do bigger chapters please? I love this already!

Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Two. Mirage ~ سراب and Three. Heat ~ حرارة

Thanks for the new chapter.

Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:43 AM · On: One. Sate ~ واحد. ل

Arabesqueward? *laughter*

Your writing style is languorous and rich and dreamy and I am seriously thinking of asking it out on a date with the distinct possibility of settling down into a long term relationship with it! It is dark and handsome and rich and almost oily (in a sexy, dancer fashion) in the way it rolls around the imagery.

I am crushing on your writing. How pathetic does that make me? How amazing does that make your skill?

What a wonderful hybrid, the core of Scheherazade's tale and the core elements of Twilight. Just an intriguing concept and one that excites me, given what you have shared so far of your story-telling style.

Anyway, if you do breakup with a part of your creative psyche and it does become available for 'outside' relationships, drop me a line ; )

Reviewer: platypusred (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:04 PM · On: One. Sate ~ واحد. ل

i just got to reading this now and i love it! please update this soon. i love this dark somewhat perverse edward and i cant wait for him to meet bella

Reviewer: CullenDreamer (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:26 PM · On: One. Sate ~ واحد. ل

Hmmm...I have to say I prefer the, what?, belief/mythology/idea that a vampire (especially a hot Edward Cullen looking vampire) stalking towards you, eyes all black with hunger/lust and then biting you on the neck is a rather orgasmic, if not fatal, experience. But what a way to go. Nothing SM ever wrote expressly discounted the possibility of that, so I don't know why everyone is so apt to go the other way: vampire bite = straight out pain/death with nothing in between. Weird.

Sorry, just kind of wondering outloud.

So, can I put in a vote for making Bella her actual age in this fic? As in, 17? Pretty please, with Edward on top?

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