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Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 10: Truth in Love

She said it!!!!!! He said it!!!!!!!! ITS A LOVE FEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Update when possible, please

Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Truth in Love

Love this story!

Please update soon :)

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 10: Truth in Love

Lovely...well, except for Rosalie...but she was RIGHT...Bella did need to know...

Thanks for sharing!

Kathie

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

dont you sneak away like that that isnt very nice haha this was a wicked ending but i have faith that you will make it great  no doubt at all doll :D

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Reckoning

Im so sorry Bells. I wished you would've listened.

Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 7: Apologies

she apologizes waaaaaaay to much and for (sometimes) no apparent reason - stomach rumblings? seriously?  and it wouldn´t hurt to give her a backbone, i loved when she stood up to james and edward but then she blames herself for james disappearing and freaks out after the edward fiasco?

just, it´s such a good story and a good crossover but bella isn´t really constant in her actions, know what i mean?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  =)

Well, to be fair, the chapter is called "Apologies".  LOL.  As far as Bella being consistent, I know many people who get angry and say things they come to regret later.  In this case, she's a guest in a home, and she blew up at one of her "hosts" (so to speak). Also, think of girls who break it off with someone, and even though they felt they did the right thing, they hate hurting them.  It's the same thing.  As far as the stomach growling, well that's just silly embarassment.  =) 

Regret, having a tender heart, or feeling like you went too far isn't really inconsistency in my eyes.  It's human.  I respect your opinion and thank you for leaving it, I just don't necessarily agree.  =)

Reviewer: lovingstories (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

right you better sneak away because to have you leave me hanging like that is like asking for a a well I don't know what it's like but well I want to know what's going to happen. Gosh darn I"m not going to be able to sleep tonight I'll be thinking of what's going to happen. Please update soon?

PS you did a really good job on this chapter and all the others ones. I have to say this story is absolutely most likely my favorite one. You write very well. Keep up the good work.

 



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you so much for the great compliment.  =)  I hope you enjoy the coming chapters just as much!

Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Oh no you don't, no sneeeeeeeaking away!!!  Come back and update this!!  I want to know what was freaking Bella out in the meadow!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Well, you might not get to find that part out for a little while.  ;-)  You could make guesses though!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. You found the perfect cross over and I have to admit that I had thought about it before, of how perfectly curmudgeon Edward and opinionated Bella would transfer to "Beauty and the Beast", so I was delighted to stumble across this very story, and the icing on the cake is how well written it is.

Please keep the chapters coming, because I'm loving it!

Paula



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the thoughtful and kind review!  I have really grown to love the crossover, so I'm hoping that it continues to please!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

I'll be updating in the next day or two!  =)

Reviewer: Abii_Whitlock (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

LMAO! Awsome chapter.

Love the story. Very well written!

And I laughed outloud at the end notes lol



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the sweet review!

And yeah, I just couldn't think of anything else to say.  =)

Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  =)

Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Loving it!  Looking forward to the revealing!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  =)  Hope I can do it justice!

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

oh so sweet!!!!!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Look for the update in the next couple of days!  =)

Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

*grumbles* Yeah, you better run.... :P



Author's Response:

*giggles*

*scampers away*

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

At least he saved her...then he beat you for leaving us there!

;D

Kathie



Author's Response:

LOL.  No, no, no!  =)  Edward would never do such a thing.  Besides, he's got other things on his mind right now.  ;-)

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Hmmmm....was it James calling to her in the meadow or just her imagination?  Very good chapter.  I love that Jacob is the horse too.  So, I guess no wolves will be jumping out of the woodwork?  Anyway, loved it as always.  The way you mingle the two stories is so awesome!  Love it!  Thanks for sharing!  Can't wait for more.  Hope you are feeling okay!



Author's Response:

Hmmmmm... I wonder!  =)

Thank you for the nice review.  I'm doing much better now, thankfully!  No more baconic plague for me!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Great chapter, looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  More is on the way.  =)

Reviewer: the_bouquet (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Ooh! How did she get away from her pursuer? And how did Edward find her? I hope you update soon! :)



Author's Response:

How does Edward ALWAYS find Bella?  =)  And as far as how she got away.... well, that will have to be revealed later!

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

I liked it, even with the cliffy! Good job.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  =)

Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Okay, my computer crashed & ate my review.  To sum up, I love it, I want more, and I can't believe you left it there you evil thing you!



Author's Response:

Hahaha...  Sorry!  I've been pretty nice with tame cliffies.  I had to make one really good one!  ;-)

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 9: Crushing Cold

Great chapter!!!!!! But now I'm worried about what happend tp Jacob...

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  =)  And don't worry, we'll find out about Jacob next chapter. 

Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Books and Flowers

omg you will never believe what i did haha because i hadnt been on to check my mail and see that it was updated before the last update i commented on i just read that one and i was like o i dont remember her saying she was sick and then i also didnt remember what she said haha but then after i was done and could finally check my mail today i saw and i read and it all makes sense again haha that is such an evil little cliffie haha i love that they are getting along so well i hope he doesnt be the ass and mess it up haha you are brilliant doll :D

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Books and Flowers

More please? This is shaping up nicely, and it makes me wonder what path Bella will choose in the end.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Books and Flowers

Love this story!

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