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Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Go Jess... she is right! LOL .... Almost like "Guess Who's Coming to Dinner", but Sidney Poitier might have been more welcome than Edward...
When does she turn 18? Hope you update reqularly.. it is a good stoy!
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Calypsos
That was great, again! I love how Edward is out of character and, in my opinion, he's...brilliant like that. Wow! I love this story already. :D
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Song
Go Bella! I am happy that she is angry... Edward has a frequent flyer card with Charlie... oops! :-)
“I’m not sad,” I said aloud wonderingly, my face red-hot – and for the first time in my life, it wasn’t from embarrassment. “I’m angry.”
Reviewer: ostmx (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
yay! another three brilliant chapters :D :D :D your writing amaze me :)
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Prologue
oooh, this story is really interesting and has me hooked already. great job. :D
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Prelude IV
Love it... Can't wait for Bella to rebel!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Calypsos
This is a funny story... I can just see Edward licking her hand. Renee as a bible thumper is funny! I see alot of thoes in the golden buclke of the bible belt i live in.
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Song
I really like your story. Its really good and different. The sad thing is I know people who are actually like Renee. I live DEEP in the Bible Belt.
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
like it like it!!!
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
i love this story SOOO much !!!!
you HAVE to update !
and SOON !!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MathGoddess (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Whoa.
THIS takes "naughty school girl" fantasy to a whole new level!
Totally LOVE bad boy Edward.
Update.
I DEMAND YOU!
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Oh the horror of Jessica being right!
Great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: CaraMia (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Im so in love with this story!! I started reading yesterday and it was hilarious!! Bella is slowly stepping to the other side.....the darker side that is. Cant wait until you update!!
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Poor Bella with her crazy mom. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Loved it all can't wait to see the stories behind the arrests.
Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Oooh, bad boy Cullen.
He can violate me any time.
I like your characterisation of Charlie and how he's the polar opposite of Renee; particularly because in the books he was like that too.
And hot damn, God abiding girl uses the shower for something other than washing - for shame! :)
Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Song
'What the snickerdoodle are you trying to pull, Bella Swan?' Bahahaha. For reals the best use of an edible product in a fic :). Im glad that Bella stood up for herself against Lauren, even if they did get their own back. Nice to see her getting a bit of a back bone. ;o)
Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Prelude IV
Ah, Renee, Renee, Renee. Probably one of the characters most in need of a slap, and I mean that in the nicest way possible :). Love it.
Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Calypsos
I'm really enjoying it so far, funny to see Bella as a prim and proper church go-er. :)
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Love it!
Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Prologue
I've just read this first chapter and I have to say it looks really promising :) Can't wait to see where it goes.
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Song
Lauren must die!:) And I'm so happy you update really fast. The story's fantastic
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Sounds like Edward has quite the colorful past. I wonder when we'll find out about it from him? And perhaps Bella will have her very own real-life experience with him in the Volvo at some point, lol!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Decoherence (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Wow. I don't have anything constructive to say. Just: Wow.
Seriously, you pull me in with your characters and plot.
Reviewer: Decoherence (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Killing the Love
Wow. I don't have anything constructive to say. Just: Wow.
Seriously, you pull me in with your characters and plot.
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