Reviewer: twiluv140 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Oh snap (hehe) Edward got called on his bullshit - loved it! Gotta say though that I am torn - on the one hand I can't wait to read the lemon but on the other, I am really enjoying the sexual tension!
Still loving this story so much!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Great chapter!
I'm glad that Bella could stay with Edward. Go Alice....She's awesome.
I'm glad Charlie isn't going to tell her mother where she's at....Speaking of which, what is her mother up to?
Please, please update soon?
Reviewer: jenejes (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Abandoned Valley
Did you end up posting the playlist? I would love to hear those songs!! This story is good. I can't wait until Bella and Renee finally come to blows. It's going to ROCK!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Wow the Charlie issue was better than I thought! Plus he is bein an ass cause of who he is dating... Looking forward to the Lemon!
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
yummy, looking forward to the upcoming lemons!!!
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Real lemons? I honestly didn't think Bella would let her lust take over her idea of what is a "sin". It is so jarring to get her religious expletives along with Edward and his regular expletives-such a contrast. And I am actually more floored by what she says because it is so uncommon! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: cozyegg (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Oooh, lemony goodness in the next chapter, huh? Wonder what Renee's up to as well. Hmmm...you've got me thinking!
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
WOW! I loved it. Gosh, i love Charlie when he's angry at Edward...not sure why. I think its kind of funny. I can't wait for the next chapter...did i hear you mention lemons? haha. :D
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Yea! More!
Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
I love Charlie. A potrait of a happy family that doesn't exist sits on the wall for a show to satisfy the failed parents how wonderful they are.
Reviewer: wazzgud (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
well get on with it already!!!!! update. =]
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
yay!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 14 - How Can I Tell
Whew! That was close :) Thank goody gum drops for Alice. I love that Bella used her inappropriate child training on Edward. LMAO. I'm a little concerned about the lion's den though, I don't know that Bella quite knows what she's getting into here...making out in the stacks is one thing, following the sexpot into his room is quite another.
Reviewer: chamita (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
Noooooo....you can't leave us with that cliffie!
I'm enjoying this story so much! It's really different and I love how you use all the characters in interesting ways. That wasn't very nice with the end of the chapter! Also, I kind of hope you have Bella and Edward take it slow, not move things too fast for them.
I look forward to reading what you come up with next....can't wait to find out what Charlie's going to do!
Reviewer: blade24 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
ok I confess I honestly thought I would hate this story but figured I'd give it a go and I'm so glad I did because this is now going in my favourite stories pile - keep it up!
Reviewer: wazzgud (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
what the hell? cliff hanger really? update!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
Awesome!
Can't wait for the next chapter! I cringe whenever I think about feet now, because I have the worst sock tan ever!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: zoe3 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
Oh no! Charlie is at Edward's house? This cannot be good! Edward is so crude, but I just love this characterization of him. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Abii_Whitlock (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
Hahaha, Brilliant!!!
Reviewer: melliroos (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Prologue
Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
Oh yes! Go Charlie! Is Renee with Phil?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
I liked the E/B interaction in this fic. What's going on with Renee? What was Charlie doing at Edward's house? Should we be scared?
Ok I should stop asking questions. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
Now that could be a problem, can't wait for the confronatation with Charlie and to see what she thinks of his parents. Also I think Renee is sneaking out to see a man eitiher Charlie or Phil. More please soon.
Reviewer: twiluv140 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
OMG- that was fantastic! The foot thing in the car was hot! I was looking forward to what they could get up to in Edwards bedroom but oh to be cockblocked by Charlie - tragic! I eagerly await the next chapter!
Reviewer: kmln (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Variations on the Word "Sleep"
no way her dad was there????? Duh, duh, duh. Now I'm so eagerly waiting to find out what happens next.
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