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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Aww why is Edward always so sweet? Bella said ILY back! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: twizebra_09 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
OMG. i couldn't stop laughing about what Carlisle said! LOL;; AWW, Bells needs to give Edward a REAL date. &what is going on with Renne, seriously, is she doing the nasty nasty with Phil? huh? AWW, they love each other, does that mean they're gonna express it in her room. LOL;; &once again GREAT CHAPTER<3(:
P .S.
LOVED BELLA ON ViCADEN!
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
wow hehe im soooo happy they finally telling eachother haha yea they are young and all but i know that sometimes it just pisses you off not being able to say how you feel just because society thinks its too soon or you are too young not to get too serious haha sorry that kinda happened with me i was 17 at the time and knew that i loved him haha i was so happy to see not just one update waiting for me when i signed on but two :D you are amazing dear :D
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Uh oh keep Renee far from that house! such a lovely couple of chapters, with the proclamations.
Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
a little clif hanger there..... I like this story. A High provide by a Vicodin, that great. I just wish they existed during my childhood, I lived in the floor with my sprain ankle, coordination problems (the reason I still don't wear heels), and other stuff that keep me on the floor
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
I am so in love with this Edward! Update soon please!!!!!!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Great chapter as usual! This Bella reminds me somewhat of myself at her age.....not as naive of course, but innocent.
Don't think I haven't forgotten that there is a camera with some verrrrrrry racy pics on it hidden in a drawer at the school! Something tells me that someone is going to decide to finally clean out a few drawers! Ha!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
just picked up your story today and loved it I love your Edward. Bella is hillarious too,
Reviewer: Moonlightdarkness724 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Oh lordy...what's gonna happen now??
*gasp!!* What if in the middle of what they're doing, Renee gets back from where ever she is?!??!!?
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
i love their love
Reviewer: elizabethmn (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
I love this story! Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: MathGoddess (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
AAAAAH! DEVILISH SMIRK ALERT!
Jeez. This story is addictive, I swear! The first thing I look for when I turn on my computer is an update!
Great job! ^^
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Arrghh - talk about pre-coitus interuptus LOL! What a place to keep us hanging! And Edward .... what a hero, first saving Bella from that skank Lauren and her weedy fuck-buddy, then taking her to the hospital and getting her treated by no less than the God of Doctoring, Carlisle Cullen. I loved Bella's Vicodin-induced loss of filter, it was really funny - and undoubtedly a huge boost to Edward's ego!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Wow these two are just made for each other! Bella being so naive and Edward with his potty mouth, they truly do need each other forever.
I wish you would let us know what Renee is up to. Because this is killing me!
Great chapter, great story, keep em coming!
Reviewer: Sophia24 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
yay! I laughed so much at the bit with Carlisle. I find it so funny when characters like that get embarrassed...you know, ones that rarely get embarrassed. Bella is pretty funny when she's kinda high...And Edward was so adorable...but i think he is most of the time. So...they're going up to her bedroom, huh? ;) Will renee come home and catch them? or will she come home and not bother checking on Bella...Anyway, i cant wait for the next chapter! :D
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Great chapter! Bella on Vicodan was a hoot! Gee are we going to get a lemon next chapter?
Reviewer: so absurd (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what Bella's Mom is up to?
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Naughty Edward, love how sweet he was with her and the intro with Carlisle was interesting, more please soon.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Fantastic work!
This is one of my favorite chapters yet- it has a bit of Protectiveward from last chapter, it has Carlisle, it has a High Bella, and it's so freaking sweet and amazing that I'm going to die if I read it again! (Not really- i'm going to reread it after I submit this review again and again)
I love how you described Carlisle's reaction when he found out who Bella was, and when Edward was talking to Bella about her blush! Everything about their relationship is so sweet!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: LauraBeth (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 9 - The Abandoned Valley
ok, now I know you were raised in a Christian home... you busted out the Psalty... I could probably sing you every one of his songs,LOL... anywho, I'm loving this story and am really glad I found it and gave it a shot!!
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
Love this story!!
Bella acted a plumb-dee fool in this.....she was hilarious....my fav Bella of all time...
And Edward, I always love him!
Reviewer: lambinlove (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
hahaaaha edward was thinking kinky things of bella and her room, and planning on them!! ;)
hahaha great story i just cant stop laughing during it, there are too many funny situations that i love it!
Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
edward's so cute. bella's pretty cool without having to be bitchy.
for some reason i can visualize the events so much clearer than in most fics.
Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Sleep
When I read that last line, I heard my middle school classroom all go, "ooohhhh!" suggestively. (This is what happens when you teach middle schoolers too long, I guess).
I have a feeling mother just might come home when Bella and Edward are upstairs.
Still loving it. Can't wait for the update!
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