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Reviewer: chevy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

hmmmm...I think Aro hired him to kill her

Author's Response:

So do I. ;)


He has the ability to do anything he wants - and lie to those around him. 


Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pie101 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

I love Didyme there is not enough story's about her.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I think the Marcus/Didyme story is so interesting.  There could be so much to explore...hmmm...maybe some day. 



Reviewer: DFCA15 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

Such a sad fate for Marcus. I felt so terrible for him. You wote this story well and I felt the emotion in it, such a sad yet moving story...

Author's Response:

I have really started to appreciate Marcus.  Thank you for your review.  Sorry it took so long to respond.

Reviewer: fallinpetals (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

Great! I love that you had the guts enough to stand up to a challenge such as this one. And the way you described the pain that marcs felt was absolutely fantastic! Brava!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

I've grown to really love Sulpicia - and Marcus.  Demetri is my favorite...not like the movie Demetri at all.  ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed my little foray into the Volturi.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

I love how you wrote from Sulpicia's POV, she doesn't get  enough infomation.

Author's Response:


I really love Sulpicia.  She's important in my other story, Unexpected Changes.  I need to finish it.  :D

Reviewer: Sans (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

I really enjoyed reading this story from Sculpica's perspective. It certainly captured the moment and made me feel like I was there in the castle. Aro's deceit is clear and I can only wonder how Marcus might react in the future once he finds out about the deed. Your writing style is remarkable and flows very well - I can only hope to read many more of your stories. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm flattered!!

I really enjoyed writing Sulpicia's POV.  She is a very powerful woman.  And, Marcus - well, he just might surprise everyone at some point!! ;)  I'm really glad that SM left them so undefined.  It means I get to play with them.


I've started an E/B story - it's AH, something I never thought I would do.  It's called 'Running Home'.  I hope you'll watch for it to be posted.  I don't know how long it will take to be approved and posted after I submit, but I'm hoping not too long.  I already have a few chapters written.  I think it's better writing than my previous fanfics...but maybe you can be the judge of that.


Thanks again!!  You really made my day!

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

I liked how you kind of gave a hint that Aro was in own Didyme's murder, the writing was really good, very sad.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  This will play an important role in my larger fanfic later.  Hope you'll check it out!


Thanks again!

Reviewer: JayJayHale (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

Oooooo I liked it very much! Thankfully you kept it canon but still inserted some intrigue and mystery. I really do like Marcus the best! Poor poor Marcus.


Author's Response:

Thanks J.

The Volturi are a lot of fun, you can keep them canon while still being creative.  There's not a lot of canon to use.  I like to fill in the blanks. 

Marcus is great...but Demetri - well he's just yummy!!  lol


Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Twilight_Saga_Fan (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

they could have tried to put the fire out

Author's Response:

Vampires are supposed to be highly flammable - it's the venom.  At least that's what SM says.  So, I went with that.  It would be too late by the time they go there.


Hope you liked the story!



Reviewer: sosaidthemonkey (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

=O  I suspected Aro might have ordered him! Poor Marcus ='[

Nice one shot ^^

Author's Response:

So glad you read it and liked it!  Thanks!!

This will play into my story in the last few chapters.  Hope you'll keep reading!!

Reviewer: Potterfan123 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Attack

Wow that was cool, I loved it. It showed a different side of the Volturi! =D

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Happy that you liked it!

It's really a part of my bigger story - Unexpected Changes.  If you like the Volturi, you might like it!


Thanks again - for reading and reviewing!!

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