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Reviewer: djcarnation (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 03:17 PM · On: Chapter Six: Dinner All Around

dang i hoped u wouldnt go in that direction.if she was going to have a kid it should be with jake only

Reviewer: djcarnation (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2018 02:18 PM · On: Chapter Four:Distractions

not wanting edward and bella together.she will always belong with jacob.thank god she didnt get pregnant from her night with edward

Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Time to Check on the Bread

In real life cheating is a deal breaker.  I can not for the life of me understand someone who would cheat, it doesn't "just happen" that's bull shit.  However, we are talking twi fan fic where we know Bella and Edward belong together.  I love Jacob and he is the wronged character in this story.  I have a tendency to let an author just tell their story and I am along for the ride.  I hope its not too bumpy.  As I've noted before, you are a talented writer and I'm enjoying your story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 04:40 PM · On: Chapter Six: Dinner All Around

So I am fully aware that this story was written a while ago... : ) But I love Jake too and definitely want to see him have his hea. 

Reviewer: cathe (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 04:30 PM · On: Chapter Five: Breaking Through

It's been a while since I've read any twi fan fic so your story came up in my tbr... Love it so far!  I like your writing style and can't wait to see what happens to my favorite characters!

Reviewer: vvmarquez (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

Great story, please update soon

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

I am so happy to see this story back I could cry .

Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2011 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

mi piace tanto questa storia spero presto tu aggiorni 

 

non vedo l'ora di veder cosa succedera adesso

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

Poor Edward.  Things are so complicated!  

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: Altered

I feel so badly that I am relieved...

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 15: Walking Away

Ah!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Giving In

Well, I'm not happy with Edward being with anybody else, but what choice does he have?  He needs to move on with his life...

Reviewer: publix (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

Riveting! Sorry I didn't review sooner. I started this today and ignored everyone. I read on my cell and the review process causes a major delay in page loading. (eager to get to the next chapter much). I'm a little pissed at Rose. She was the one who I feel kinda egged Bella on and then to become judgmental was not cool! (her removing  Bellas ring, winking (encouraging Edward, leaving her, and when she gave Edward her address, she should have also told him she was married). Extremely well written and POV's very realistic. (even Ro's, that's why I'm so mad at her!) Thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 04:35 AM · On: Chapter Five: Breaking Through

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella went to see Jasper and they talked about why she doesn't want children. Will she be able to work through her issues and have children one day with Jacob? Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: meemo34 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

This Bella is beyond selfish.  I have not one ounce of pity for her - she doesn't deserve either of them but she does deserve the attitude she is getting from some of them.   This is a great story - keep up the good work!

Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

good story please update thanks :)

Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter One: Riff

Intriguing first chapter! I'm liking it a lot already. It looks like there will be a fun ride between E/B.

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

Oh God! I'm desperate to know about the baby...Is worst than when Maury makes a Pause, you know, before saying if it is or not the father..."You...............Are............................................................................................................NOT THE FATHER!!!! LOL I cant wait for that, and to see what will happend with Bella and Rose. Thank yoy for the time you invest in this and sharing it :)

Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

wow this all messed up.. i feel bad for edward and jacob what a horribel thing bella did... she needs a good kick in her ass lol i'm with rose in all  this...

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

I understand Edward's conflicted feelings about Bella. She was selfish thinking of her own needs, yet she can possibly be the mother of his child. I am glad Edward was able to be professional and update her on Jacob's condition. I honestly hope Jacob does not die. Bella should have to find her way out of this maze that she caused with both guys alive and well. 

I am glad she reached to him and offered to get a DNA test to determine the paternity of the baby. It was good that she was honest about not trying to find him and her plans to raise the child as her husband's baby whether or not it was really his. I am glad Edward decided that he had to know one way or the other.

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

it has to be Edwards dammit!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 17: Decisions

I am glad your continuing to continue (is that poor sentence structure? lol) this story.  I am a nurse, I don't look to find fault or mistakes that people make in their writing when it comes to stuff like that, it's a story.  I do however think that shows like house and Grey's Anatomy are ridiculous sometimes with the shit they shovel, maybe cause I see it.  Maybe bc they pay medical people to help them get it right, and don't. Maybe bc it's utterly ridiculous to say save someone's life while your baby's aborting and your bleeding down your legs? IDK I just stopped watching.  Too sad sometimes I guess.  Well lets face it there is a tragedy every day and I see enough of it.  I like it when they saw dead people haha! Now Nurse Jackie is awesome!  Funny weird.  But anyway, you did a great job.  Even if I was looking to find fault you didn't have one.  And Jasper being unethical, well that happens all the time in RL, no harm no foul.  Great chapter.  You shouldn't worry about stuff like that.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I agree, so much of that stuff is just so out there. My biggest worry was that I would screw it all up, so I edited a lot of the medical parts I intended. It actually ended up better without those specific details anyway.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter Four:Distractions

Great chapter. Oh how they are all linked together. I'm hoping I don't get confused by who knows who. Will Edward and Bella ever meet because of all the connections between them? How will Edward's date go? Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 04:47 AM · On: Chapter Three: The Morning After

Ok so Bella still loves Jake, but does she love Edward too or is Rose reading too much into it? Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 04:34 AM · On: Chapter Two: Famous Last Words

Great chapter. What's going to happen now that Edward knows that Bella is married? Will they start seeing each other? Can't wait to read more.

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