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Reviewer: Bjornsdotter (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:36 PM · On: 1: The New Girl
Nice start, well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:41 PM · On: 1: The New Girl
Updat sooN!
Reviewer: austoz (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:52 PM · On: 1: The New Girl
Looking good! Great first effort, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:50 PM · On: 1: The New Girl
I am so glad you picked Alice. She is so fun and engaging! And she gets to be with Jasper..hhmmm
Good luck with this and I can't wait to read more
Reviewer: Carlisles angels (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:27 PM · On: 1: The New Girl
loved it. I always wondered what Alice thought and saw when Edward was falling in love. I hope it shows a sweeter love sick side of Edward instead of the brooding hard ass. Id like to see that falling in love with Bella was somewhat happy for him.
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