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Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 4- Trapped

very intense, and i liked it :)

hope you update soon

Author's Response:

Chapter 8 is submitted! Hope you like it :)

Reviewer: SnowWhiteQueen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

he's leaving? if i was Bella i'd have burst into tears and hugged him tightly!!! if you ask me, Bella's got a hot man who's giving her sex and other things and she's completely unchanged it seems.

cmon though keep the chapters coming!!

Author's Response:

Ha ha, I know, so would I. Edward can keep me hostage any time ;)

Thanks for the review! The next chapter is submitted! :)

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Interesting!  I wonder - is the sex about proving Edward's dominance, or is he hoping for a child to come from it - either to unite the "families" or to gain another hostage?  Why is Joseph opposed?

Author's Response:

Well I can't very well answer your questions without giving the whole story away, now can I? I'm glad you find the story interesting! The next chapter is submitted, let me know what you think! :)

Reviewer: mar (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

good filler chapter I like how it shows E getting emotionally closer to B.

Author's Response:

I like a good filler every now and then, you know? It's like a good break. And in this case, necessary, if these two don't start building up some bonding they are never going to get crakin'! Thanks, Mar! :)

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

great chapter!!! i cant wait to see what the letter says!! update soon please! i love reading this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I love that you love my story! Thanks for always reviewing, makes my day and writting all the easier! :)

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Okay, since you prefer twilighted to ff, I have switched back over.  =)  Say it ain't so about Joseph! 

What is wrong with the title?  Gangs, turf wars, control, and power.  Love this story!  I am not a big fan of the forums here.  I just think it's too hard to read with everyone's signature/banner.  I'm sure the banner will look great!  Can't help you with uploading images though.  LOL.

Author's Response:

You know, I have the same issue with everyone's banners, signatures. I have to admit some are awesome, but whatever's written just gets lost in the maze! My problem with the title is the Gangland part... I don't know. Anyway, it's of no consequence in the end, you know.

Oh yeah, we'll see what you think of Joseph's actions... and Edward's! Jeez, preapare to hate him a bit all over again ;)

Thanks for reviewing here as well. But I've figured how to read the reviews at FF, so no worries. Still, very appreciated! :)

Reviewer: lmr14 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

I actually read this a couple of days ago, but didn't have time to leave a review.  I feel as weird as Bella for liking the sex between these two!  I mean I really want to hate Edward and be disgusted by him, but I just can't.  I loved that he let her have his horse and then agreed to deliver her letter to Charlie.  I'm so curious to find out what sort of letter it is.....maybe a "stop trying to find me 'cause nobody does me like Edward" letter.  :)  haha. 

And Joseph.....can't wait to see what he and Edward are arguing about. 


Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, I think I may steal your idea for the letter:

"Dear Charlie Dad,

So here's the thing, I was going to beg you to do whatever Edward asked for so that I'd be released from this prision. But the thing is, I've totally changed my mind after being thoroughly shagged by a very very talented Mr. Cullen. Seriously, your little girl is getting pounded like the New York Stck Exchange Market. So ta-dah, no worries, we'll be seeing you when we are done, which is unlikely to be any time soon.

With love, Bells

Ha ha, thanks for the inspiration! And the review, as always! :)

Reviewer: Gem-dawg (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

I love this story its so well writen cant help but live in the story..update soon please xxx

Author's Response:

I just love it when fics have that effect on me, I'm so happy I can provide that for you. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Edward and a poetry about Green :D nice :D

Oh and outdoor tryst! Yee-haw! lol
That shit was pretty hot and i Loved when he moved to get up and she wrapped her legs around him tighter! That's what they're for haha.
im surprised he actually gave in and collapsed onto her and even kissed her!

I'm dreading the impending doom in the next chaps :S
I still think Edward and Bella can fix eah other *fingers and toes crossed*
I guess we're gonna be seeing Charlie soon :S *groan*

and BTW I am Not delusional Lee! lol:P
as an incentive for joining the thread i will deliver some Robward goodness :D

That is all! LMAO!

Author's Response:

Heeeeey Lee, so yeah, I love the wrapping-her-legs-around-him-to-get-him-to-stay too, and not because I wrote it! LOL I think it's my on-going fantasy... Anyways, yeah, Edward is a sucker, he lets Bella get away with anything.

Yeah, for the impending doom, try not to hate Edward too much, or me! Ha ha, he knows he's in great danger with Bella, and he thinks he needs to take some radical measures. We'll see Charlie in chapter 9, I think. It's time for Bella to leave the calmness of her prision...

Thanks as always, I'm glad you enjoy my porn literature ;)

Reviewer: melonburst05 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Good Chapter.  I like that they are spending more time with eachother, but there are still so many unanswered questions.  I'm going crazy with anticipation.  Edward is definitely trying to resist any romantic feelings towards Bella, but I think she's breaking down his wall.  I'm trying to figure out his motivation for having sex with Bella.  He seems to have an agenda behind it, since it was planned from the beginning and he atleast tries to be distant.  I could understand having sex with her at first since he wanted to mark her as his, but since he's continually having sex with her my only guess is the pregnancy thing....I don't know.  And what was with the arguement with Joe?  Joe seemed to be angry at something Edward wanted to do possibly regarding Bella.  I feel like he intends to kill her or something...hmm...I really don't know.  I should probably stop thinking and just wait for your updates, lol. 

Author's Response:

Oh no, don't stop! I love hearing people's theories! I know there are too many unanswered questions, they'll be answered in time. But we do need some angst and action first, right? ;) I love that my story makes you think about it, that's what fanfic's all about, something to inspire even more day-dreaming about Edward! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Christine (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

i LOVE this story. it reminds me of beauty and the beast, which is my favorite disney movie =) thank you for being so talented and blessing us with this masterpiece lol!

Author's Response:

Hey, maybe that's where I got the idea from! I know I just loved that story when I was a kid, to the point of obbsession. Yep, I was chanelling my inner B&B! You flatter me too much, I honestly don't think I'm specially talented at all, but I'm so happy my writtings make others happy :)

Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

I had to study that poem for my AP Spanish Lit. class. I loved it as well. Can't wait to read more. I loved your story, like always. =)

Author's Response:

Thanks, as always, thanks! I know, that poem. :)

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Hmm, it makes me wonder what Joseph is upset about now. Since we all know what happened last time he was upset. Good chapter hun! Very well done!

Author's Response:

Yes, we do. But don't worry, Bella will not be the only victim this time around...

Hey, you never mentioned anything about my 'original' inspiration! Should I go hide under a rock now? ;)

Reviewer: Vampyre (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

That little horseback ride certainly turned into somthing . . . steamy  Grrrr.  Nice riding jacket Edward was wearing - lined with cashmere?  How sinful.  He certainly seems to enjoy his earthly pleasures.  And little Bella is just the icing and little cherry on the cake of his life.

I was hoping that there would be a library scene and an occasion of horseback riding.  Must say I like your interpretation better.

Great job.  And thanks~!

Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, you make Edward sound soooooo bad and sexy. And what can I say about the horseback riding and library scenes? I'm here to please. What was YOUR version of it? I'm very curious now!

Thanks so much for the on-going support! :)


Reviewer: didodado (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody


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Although this is only my second review that doesn't mean that I don't like the story because I love it. Only that I am not very god doing reviews as the others wonderful reviews that I read. I visit this site everyday only for checking if there is a new chapter in this story.

About this chapter I really liked. I can see that Edward everyday is more comfortable with Bella and little by little he's opening to her. But I think that if it is true that Bella is going to leave him. I think is good because we will able to see the reactions of the two of them being separated. Or not…..?

waiting the next chapter very anxious

Author's Response:

You do? I'm so very flattered! I'm so glad you like the story enough to look forawrd to updates, that's just wonderful!

Yeah, angst ahead, they'll have to face a lot of issues, together and appart. Sorry, I know I'm being cryptic, just like Edward.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review, it makes the writting process all the better! :)

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Great chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thanks for always reviewing!

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 6- Rapture

WOW! That was HOT!

Author's Response:

Ha ha, good! :)

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 5- Desire

I'm not the best reviewer but I am in love with this story.

Author's Response:

Oh, you have that wrong, you are the BEST reviewer! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Wonderful chapter - I can't help but wonder what Edward was arguing with Joe about. I wish we could get inside Edward's head, but his mystery does lend to his appeal. 

A little nervous about the upcoming drama, but enjoyed this "filler" chapter for the time being. Lovely images as they rode. :)

Author's Response:

I know he is annoyingly cryptic, it has to be that way for the story to work. But he is opening bity by bit, right? Yeah, drama is inevitable, in life as in fanfic ;)

Thanks so much for reading! :)

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 4- Trapped

I know she didnt want it but at least he wasnt brutal.  Great Chapter

Author's Response:

Thnaks! I'm glad you thought so, it's a relief people are responding so well :)

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Yeeeeey! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

Great chapter....cant wait for the storm you mentioned...update soon!!

Author's Response:

I'll try! Promise! :)

Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody

I have screwed my review on ff so again but in better shape...

I think edward agreed to give something because he whant to know what because she has nothing her.

About the letter, will we know what bella said in this letter ?

You said it was the calm before the storm so I'm very curious about the storm.... XD

Author's Response:

Ha ha, I read it over there as well, LitG, and I appreciate them both just as much!

I know, I guess the book is Bella's now. Will we see the letter? Hmm, maybe not all of it, but you'll get parts.

Yep, stroms ahead. Several storms ahead.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! You are so lovely! :)

Reviewer: Jaimee (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 7- Rhapsody


Author's Response:

So glad! :)

Reviewer: Mrs Patohead (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 4- Trapped

I cried through the whole thing!!! lol I'm a big baby.

Author's Response:

Awww, you are not a baby, it's a dark chapter... did you continue reading? Or throw the computer out the window?

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