Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)
aww i cant wait for them to meet again ,, they will wont they ? ,, loved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!
Reviewer: cocoajunkie (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)
So sad. I hope they meet again soon.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)
Squee! An Update what a day what a day!
This was a great chapter we truly understood how torn up Bella was in this. I am so dieing for the next and hopefully not as long a wait as before sniffle. Great Story!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)
I've loved this fic from the beginning.
I do a little dance whenever there's and update.
The angst was fine. It was good to see Bella feeling something after she just up and left like she did.
Thank you for making my day better with an update from an old friend.
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Cocktails with Jalice (shabbyapple)
Oh goodness - This should be good. I can't wait to read about the encounter.
Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
so love this story can't wait for an update :)
Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 04:16 PM · On: The Life of a Sex God and his Oh-So-Willing Whore
I love the games they are playing. When bella woke and saw his naked bum, I thought I would love to bite that ass, then she did, lucky girl! yum:)
Reviewer: bella224 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
great chapter!
Reviewer: cygnet715 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:52 AM · On: 6. Do You Know What I'm Thinking?
lol fave line of the chap: "This was a good sign, right? If she touches me she likes me, right?"
so true. no likey, no touchy.
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Beauty, Bolognese and Boarding
Such beautiful, emotional writing!
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Doggy Style (S)
Aww... I love EPOV!
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?
Best love scene yet!
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:59 PM · On: From AM to PM...
Some typos...but otherwise good!
Reviewer: girls_got_bite (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
Gosh, I thought you weren't gonna finish this story, but I am SO glad you are. I love this Edward, and can't wait to see how it unfolds. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Incoherency and Milk Are NOT My Friends
Good chapter
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Spying Is Not Perving
Haha, that's cute how they meet.
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Swimming
Good first chapter!
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:46 PM · On: The Life of a Sex God and his Oh-So-Willing Whore
A cliffhanger I have never encountered before...
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Alleyways have Consensual Fucking, too!
I love Bella's internal talking.
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:17 PM · On: A Surprising Sliver Of Swimsuit
I love a good adorable Edward!
Reviewer: clumsyjuliet27 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Spying Is Not Perving
Good Edward POV. Very in-character!
Reviewer: vicki030186 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
omfg i can't believe she just left him like that, there is no way i could do that poor edward :(
I remember when i use to have the inspiration to write stuff like this, absolutly brilliant !!!!
Reviewer: leftonthealtar (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
This was so incredibly fabulous! I re-read it a second time just to make sure that I hadn't missed a word or a concept that would help me to understand it completely. I'm so happy that you both are BACK! This is one of my all-time favorite stories ever and I'm hoping for their HEA! I'm so happy you're back!!!!!!
Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
I love this story, I really do. But Bella's cowardice bordered on the self-centered and cruelly neurotic. Jeez, you're an adult, leave a note or your bikini with your phone number next to it! Frustrating and annoying. Hope it gets back to world-class lemony goodness without too long a slog through emo land. Thanks for a great story. Vacations indeed.
Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Early Morning Rousing
Shit. This is total Bummersville. Two grown people couldn't have taken a chance after all that world class smexing and said how they feel? Love the story, love the quality of the writing, look forward to following a great story.
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