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Reviews For Beautiful Stranger
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 12:07 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

Guuhhh this whole fic has had me drooling and sighing. I'm sad that I'm caught up now and don't have more to read! You can fix that, right lovies? Hee!

Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 11:46 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

pft speed of light! with how amazing this story is and all the reviews you'll be getting its more like the speed of dark! *which I now make faster than light so get typing!*

Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Incoherency and Milk Are NOT My Friends

one word:  ROWR!

Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:14 AM · On: Spying Is Not Perving

heh heh heh .. Edward got sprung in more ways than one, and I had to laugh at that scene on the balcony!  Nicely done darl.

Reviewer: sandyk199 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 08:12 AM · On: Swimming

oh your descriptions here are wonderful - so evocative!  I'm off to read the rest now .. it's lovely!

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 04:08 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

So they are falling in love? 

Reviewer: mllesinistre (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:36 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

You mean they haven't tried their favorite sexual position yet? Poor Bells, I totally feel for her in the chapter. It's not just about sex anymore but she'll be leavng soon. Does she really have to leave? Can't they just run away together?

Edward going down on her Coliseum was HOT. Very hot. 

More, soon...Please? Do you guys want me to beg?

Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:34 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

I love your story! please please update quickly! I cant wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 02:22 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

I don't want Bella to leave. :(

 Unless Edward goes with her!

 LOVELOVELOVE this story!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 01:17 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

Awesome! Crazy crazy awesome. Man.. cold shower so nesscary.... XD Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: scarletpyrre (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 12:33 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

This is absolutely wonderful. Your Edward and Bella are fucking fantastic.

Reviewer: mrscullen17 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 09:27 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

please another chapter pretty please with naked edwards on top?

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 07:13 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

So she is in love with him? Does he also love her???

Reviewer: michelle62092 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 06:01 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

this chapter was H.O.T :D

 

and fucking god i wish i could have a hot ass horny Edward (and i would sooooo have him ALL THE TIME if i did :D )

 

please update soon!!:D

Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 02:37 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

hot chapter...loved it!

Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 12:45 PM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

wow. ungh. so hot. loved it. interesting. does Edward feel the same way? loved this chappi. can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 11:05 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

Hmm, Bella's messed up in the head.  Wasn't expecting that.  That means plot.  Didn't know we needed plot for this story.  lol  Other than Italy, vacation, lots of sex.

I don't think the question did for Edward quite what Bella intended.  Or at least, Edward was able to turn it around on her.  Damn him.  *giggle*

Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 10:48 AM · On: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

Huh, their penchant for public sex almost scares me. A little too much in this chapter, I think doing it in front of the pervy man on the balcony is enough, at the colosium too? And only hours apart.

Reviewer: michelle62092 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 03:19 PM · On: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

i loved this chapter :)

 

please update soon!:D

Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Swimming

Hot hot story!!!!! Love everything about it. Can't wait to read more. Update ASAP !!!!!!

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 03:02 PM · On: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

Way to go Edward, better late than never to start thinking with the upper head, LOL! Good thing the idea did not strike him uhm ... earlier, that would seriously have depressed little Eddie.

Ladies, you are amazing! You do realize you have spoiled us rotten with five consecutive chapters with HOTTER THAN HOT SEX? You will have to put on some extra coals to keep this up. Although it might be nice at some point to get a little insight into their backgrounds (Bella having bad feelings about an earlier relationship?).

Great story, keep up the hot writing!

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 02:34 PM · On: Once bitten....

And this is just the BEGINNING of a passionate affair?! OMG, my (admittedly pretty dirty) imagination is now at a loss as to what is yet to come...

Your´re awesome, keep it coming!

Reviewer: Shdwcat27 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

Oh well. If you're going to resort to blackmail AND inappropriate touching, I guess I'll have to review. hehe. Great chapter. I loved the "take it back" line.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 06:40 AM · On: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

*gives you both cake* Please, more?! *pouts* Pleasee......

Reviewer: xx_bella_xx_cullen_xx (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

Blackmail is too common for me. Roffle waffle.

Um... -backs away-

I loved the story but you're just -- okay, I guess I like it, but could you stop touching me?

xD

Luv ya.

<3 Bella Bebe

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