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Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Blue Kitchens and Hot Kisses
"“You can take me anywhere and at any time you like.”
"You can do me." I LOVE how this girl thinks!!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Incoherency and Milk Are NOT My Friends
I just started reading your story today...
I love this: “I feel like I should try to gain the right to call you Isabella, Bella,”
This, too: "Do you want to come in me?" OMG!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilly (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
Oh my gosh, I'm so happy you're back! Poor edward, suffering all that time. I'm just goddy for what happens next.
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
wow! an update! yay! can't wait for next chapter! this one was heart wrenching - e is totally f'd up over b. she deserves the biggest ass kicking ever.
Reviewer: im your density (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
finally a new chapter!!! edward is totally going to see her in seatle!
Reviewer: obsessive_reader11 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
it seems like they are just digging themselves giant holes and honestly, im intrested to see how they get out of them.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:37 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: TwilightFan104 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
Poor devasted Edward. Love how he now understands how women feel when they are treated tat way.
You did a great job painting his relationship with Edward. i love seeing guys that have that deep of a friendship.
Can't wait to see what happens now.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
Glad you are back! I was dying at the end of the last chapter. I hate that Edward made so many instant assumptions that she never cared anything for him. I am sure in due time you will clear that up. One note of suggestion is to write in past tense, it just sounds more natural. I realize you are writing about the present time, but it reads a little awkward and most authors do not use it. I don't remember it from past chapters, so it seemed you might be trying something new. Feel free to take or leave my advice and if you wonder where I am referring to, pm me and I will share more. Love this story and it has tons of potential for where you can go from here.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
1. Yay! I've been waiting for you guys to come back =P
2. Bella's incrediblely selfish so whenever she's all "oh I'm so sad" I don't give a shit because she did it to herself.
3. I almost cried for Edward. Poor thing, he's the one who truly got the short end of the stick.
4. I love Jasper and Alice. Haha.
5. Can't wait for the next update! (Sorry, I started listing things, and now I can't stop =P)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
OMG 3 weeks or less!!! That was great its kind of nice to see the shoe on teh otehr foot Edward completly broken without her. I wonder how shes holding up and I can't wait for him to find ehr or something anything!!! Look forward to the next post!!!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Introducing Jalice and Irreversible Heartbreak (shabby my love)
OME! I giggled, yes giggled, when I saw the update alert for this story. I am so exceited to see what will happen. I'm a bit surprised Edward completely lost it with Jasper. Whoa! I hope he doesn't have time to become bitter before running into Bella again.. Thanks for the update!
Congrats, on the exam completion!
Reviewer: Aubreyella (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
Damn, damn, damn, damn, damn! Now I remember why I read completed stories. I hate this feeling of hanging in anticipation as to what will happen next. Hopefully it will have a HEA!
Author's Response: Well - you're in luck.... The next chapter is in the validation queue!! It won't be too long..!
Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
I love this story cant wait till they meet while they r home
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
I miss this story so much!! Not to be pushy - but are you still writing it??
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
Wow !
I've been reading Beautiful Stranger for the past few days and I am Hooked ! Please update soon, I need to know what happens when Bella gets back to Seattle...
Oh and by the way, I LOVE your smutt writting... It's been getting me all ... Well you know... My hubby thanks you...
Love your sense of humor.
Please update soon, I'M BEGGING you !
Your truly,
Isabelle
Reviewer: plaidpants17 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Swimming
omg pleasepleasepleeeaaasssseeee update. i love this story so much. i can't wait to see whats next for these 2.
Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
i love it. update soon please. preferably bella and edward meet up back home.
Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
i love it. update soon please. preferably bella and edward meet up back home.
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
Oh my gosh! I got a little teary eyed when Bella left last chapter! That was so sad! What is Edward going to do now??? I hope he goes and gets her. Thank you so much for sharing! I am pretty much addicted to this story and can't wait to find out what happens!...Oh and I'm super excited you picked Rome as the place they met. I've been and it's pretty much the most romantic place ever, well anywhere in Italy but still sooo cute and romantic! Please update soon!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Early Morning Rousing
OMG this is killing me!!!! What chicken shit that she did that!!!!!!!!!! There has to be something that happens!!! Something!!!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Early Morning Rousing
Oh, this is too heartbreaking- please update soon!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Beauty, Bolognese and Boarding
I can't wait to read the next chapter, I hope it is this one in Edward's POV!
This was so beautifully bittersweet, loved it- her trying to memorize his every feature, expression, gesture, move; feeling the pain of removing him from her; and his crumpled sleeping face and puppy dog moan- really lovely.
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