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Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
great chapter.. edward is now on my good side again. but why do i have this weird feeling that edward really isn't on the other line. i have this werid feeling that its Lauren. can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: sjm (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
why do i have a suspicion that it's not Edward on the phone
Reviewer: pceluvdolphins (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
Ooo is it Lauren on his phone?
That'd be good and bad. ):
AMAZING story. Hope you update soon!
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
Loving the story so far. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
I THINK HE MUST STILL BE WITH LAUREN OUT OF GUILT OR SOME KIND OF HOLD SHE HAS ON HIM-ONE THAT IS NOT LOVE.......
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
Poor Edward attacked by a shopping cart. Is Bella out to get him? Love the chapter.
Author's Response: Nah, Bella just has really bad luck. I may have been projecting my own personal hatred of shopping carts with defective wheels here...
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
I'm sorry my review didn't ost yesterday... but I loved the chapter. The banner is a winner - I clicked on for that alone at first.
But this is setting up to be a really great read. I love the FATE concept. And I love the feeling of family. Some forget that the E/B love is just part of the appeal of the series, the FAMILY connection is so vital. Well done.
Thanks again! You are spoiling us with such a quick post!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the banner too, it makes me giggle every time I see it. :) I'm glad you like where I'm heading with this, and you're right, the family concept is huge in this story. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
Wow! What happened with Edward?
Reviewer: Serenity1347 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
I already hate Lauren, and Edward obviously likes Bella. Thanks for the fast update; the cremation story really sounds true, is it something you did as a kid? Please update soon,
x
Author's Response: Nope, never cremated a hamster, although it totally struck me as something a bunch of curious 6 year olds would do. My hamsters all got buried in shoeboxes, we went a more traditional route :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
Gah, I don't like Lauren and she's not even been properly introduced to teh story lol but i'm a firm believer that if you aren't in Emmetts good books, then there is obviously something wrong with you lol
Was a great add, can't wait for the next chapter x
Author's Response: Emmett is an excellent judge of character...
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
more and we need to get rid of Lauren LOL
Author's Response: poor Lauren, you hate her and you haven't even met her! hehe :) thanks for the review! glad you like it.
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
great start, can't wait to find out what Edward's issue is.
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
So far, I like your story. It is Original and interesting. Hopefully, Edward won't be so angsty throughout the rest, since that is hard to read for very long.
Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Well, Edward is having a tough time, and I can't promise sunshine and roses immediately, but he won't always be so down in the dumps ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
haha, absolutely :) although--i'm hoping there's WAY more to the lauren freak-out than just that...i'm not sure what...i just...ugh, lauren (shudder!).
ok, i love it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: oh there's more to lauren alright... hehehe.
Reviewer: riglerstudent (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
the story was really good. please contiue it.
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
love it! i can already feel the tremendous tension and angst! i love it! update soon !
Reviewer: wickedhag (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
I love little Bella:)
Reviewer: phips16 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
ooh i like i like i like. so want to read more.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
I'm liking it....Poor Edward....He needs fixing....Maybe Bella can "repair him!!!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
Oooh, you sooo have me hooked! I can't wait to see where you take it. :)
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
of COURSE i want to read more, silly! i'm so excited for your new story :)
Author's Response: yay! :)
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
i would like to read more.... please continue.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
Ahah, cute but interesting. Looks like a good story in the making.
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
love it! next chapter soon? please?
Reviewer: Earth Sorceress (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
Looks like this will be good. I'm looking firward to the next chapter.
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