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Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Ante Up
I really think she needs to tell Edward. Honestly, he deserves to understand how much of a bitch she is.
Reviewer: smb (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Ante Up
Another awesome update. I can't wait to read more. But I want Bella to hurry up and tell Edward the truth.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
And that's what makes it okay (the fact that Alice wasn't actually trying to be sketchy with the blind dates) because you could tell that she was just trying to set Bella up with a good guy.
Reviewer: blessthecharter (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Dish It Out
wow...wasn't expecting that but they do say the kicked dog barks loudest. I agree with Alice: She's having an affair. BUt, I'm going to take it one step farther: She's having an affair with Jessica. This story is great please update soon! <3
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Dish It Out
neither can the next chatper for this story baby !
hurry up and hop on it like a black mans 12inch is saying hi after a hot morning shower !
Reviewer: Tsuki9 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Dish It Out
Can't wait for another update! What a wench Lauren is, ugh!
Reviewer: djjajacool (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Dish It Out
that part about Lauren was funny
Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Dish It Out
hahahaha i love the twist on the cheating thing.
please say that there will be some movement on the lauren and edward breaking up front!! or just merciless teasing about the crushing as kids and neither of us realising ness.
reall good update though!
chellik x
Author's Response: things are going to start happening quickly... thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Dish It Out
I just knew she'd be a cold hearted bitch. What does Edward see in her I wonder...!
Reviewer: blue_onion (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Dish It Out
Hmmm... you know, I'm starting to suspect that Alice is purposely setting Bella up with complete losers to make Edward look even more enticing in comparison. And maybe to make Edward somewhat jealous as well.
Also, this is one of the most interesting depictions of Lauren I've encountered- so cold and calculating. Why is she so confident that Edward will always return to her at the end of the day? What on earth is he getting out of that relationship? And what the hell is it that really goes on during her girl nights with Jessica?
Please update soon! I am so hooked!
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Dish It Out
First, thanks for the response and forum tips. I'm in the loop now. Secondly, I did NOT see that coming. Love the bitchy banter and the coolness of Lauren's shocking delivery. Poor Edward. Is he really that clueless or does she know where the bodies are buried so-to-speak? And why does she think he'd never leave her? So many questions... ahhh.
Author's Response: So many GOOD questions :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Dish It Out
Let's just say, that I imagine that Jessica is quite happy that Lauren is not as distracted by less clingy Edward. Sooo, how is she going to tell Edward this? Or is she? Seems like someone needs to leave a hidden camera on in the apartment on Thursday night!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Dish It Out
Hated Her... (Think In Living Color)
Geat Chapter! Can't wait for game night...
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Dish It Out
ok ... wow ... just wow! I am utterly speechless! Now i am not a violent person at all, but if I were Bella (or any of the cullens for that matter) I would really like to punch Lauren ... so badly. I know now that Lauren is having an affair ... how can she not be ater what she said to Bella! omg I hate her so much and poor edward is being tricked into liking someone! (I dont know for sure about this but I think if your family doesnt like the person then youmost likely shouldnt be dating them ... unless they are just being prejudice) ...
leftover stew ... haha ... awesome stuff ... cant wait for the next update !
please update asap!
Author's Response: oh there is something going on... I can guaruntee that :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Dish It Out
I'm pretty sure I hate Lauren even more now.
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Dish It Out
WHAT A BITTTTCHHHH!!!!!!!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Dish It Out
I am so loving this story!!
Haha, Lauren is such a bitch.
*sigh* but nicer than I expected!
Keep up the amazing writing!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Dish It Out
edward needed to hear the commet that lauren said so that he can end their relationship
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Do Not Pass Go
I felt the slime off that date all the way over here! So, monopoly was cozy. Was Edward fishing as to Bella's type, or is he still just clueless? Hmmm.
Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Dish It Out
Lauren is a big meanie.
Author's Response: word.
Reviewer: Ceceilia (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
Just gotta say it again; I love your character development. I could so see Jasper and Emmett placing the bet and these blind dates ... I think I've dated a few of them!
Another great chapter. I hope to see a lightbulb moment for Edward soon.
Author's Response: Yeah a couple of readers have commented on having similar dating experiences. All I can say is I'm so sorry! Haha, glad you're liking the characters, I'm growing rather fond of them. Things are coming to a head with Edward and his "situation" so stay tuned :)
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Dish It Out
AHAHHAHAHAHA that was good, very good. Nice little insite into Lauren's head. I liked it.
Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Dish It Out
You want to know what I think? I think Lauren and Jessica are doing the bowchickawowwow. That's what I think. That's why she's ok with Edward having an affair...because she is.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Dish It Out
Well that was interesting, huh?
Lauren really is a bit strange, and saying that she thinks its alright for Bella to carrying on 'sleeping' with Edward is even more wierd! No wonder the others don't like her.
But LOL at Emmett and Jasper placing a bet ;D
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Dish It Out
OMG! Wow Lauren is really a peice of work She is having an affair and doesn't mind if Edward does either as long as he comes home to her? Unbelievable!
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