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Reviewer: aearlso (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Out on the Town
Loved it!!! Felt reallybad for bella when edward was flirting with that girl. and love the texts at the end! So sweet! Cant wait to see where this goes!! Love this story! keep it up!! xx
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Out on the Town
aw i loved this! :]
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Out on the Town
They're getting there, slowly but surely, which in my opinion is the best way!
Reviewer: KiddyWiddy (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Out on the Town
Ah! You ended it there! Anyways, great chapter and please update soon!
Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Out on the Town
Holy crow didn't expect the sleep over. Go Charlie
Author's Response: haha thanks for cheering him on. So far, not a lot of hurrahs for poor Charlie. I think it's probably been a heck of a dry spell...
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Out on the Town
I think, I think I'm really enjoying this story! I knew Jacob would have to pop his head in :)
I liked Terriotorial!Edward. It made me tingly :)
Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Out on the Town
cant wait to see what is next. Great Job!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Out on the Town
Aww, the sweet torture. Update soon please!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Out on the Town
Oooh, look at jealous Edward showing up. Great chapter!
Reviewer: spunkransom30 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Out on the Town
Love the story! Can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Out on the Town
haha Ok Edward needs to find his balls and admit he wants Bella
Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Out on the Town
loved it
Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Out on the Town
Poor Bella! Watching somone you want flirt with someone else is tough stuff! Edward has feelings for her and he just needs a little kick to acknowledge it. I think they need to hang out a bit more and I think things will fall into place! Loved it and just left wanting more!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Out on the Town
too too cute
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Out on the Town
so good. when are these two gonna quit pussyfootin around each other?
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Out on the Town
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Ceceilia (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Out on the Town
I can not read this story covertly while pretending to work on my course project; my giggles give me away every.single.time.
Another great chapter!
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment! My favorite stories are the ones I physically cannot read in the library because I'm laughing :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Out on the Town
I am really loving this story - can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Out on the Town
These are the hard chapters for me to read. I want them to be together so bad. I liked Jacobs character. He seemed fun and not an arrogant ass like most other stories portray him as. But I guess there is still many chapters for him to become one. Anyways, I am rambling now. Great chapter.
Author's Response: This is more of a Jacob cameo. Remember, he lives in Seattle :)
Reviewer: lea2009 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Out on the Town
I loved it! and am so happy you updated!
Protective Edward is always a turn on!!
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Out on the Town
Edward flirty with another girl just makes me want to cry! I hate when that happens to Bella! Great chapter, hopefully Alice can be devious and put the two of them together and get Emmett off his "only way to get over a girl is to get another girl under you" kick for Edward! Please, please, please update soon! :)
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Out on the Town
Awww, JealousWard! Love that one!
Great chapter. Are the two of them going to see a little action soon? Please?
Reviewer: wickedhag (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Out on the Town
I lit'rally groand when JB made an appearance. Really hoped he'd stay away. Just be sure to give us some Eddilove in the end please?:)
Author's Response: It's a cameo, remember Jacob lives in Seattle :)
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Out on the Town
Wow! Loved it!
Please update quickly!
Reviewer: chickarocka (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Out on the Town
the unoffical reunion at the bar, been there.
oh, more e & b, not coming clean with each other about what they want, :( i know it will happen eventually.
yay for updates!!!
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