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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Black and White and Read All Over
Ewww! I cannot believe that Edward is going out with Lauren. Even Tanya is better than her.
I'm proud of Bella for standing up to those guys. I agree with Seth, James is an asshat.
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Hustler
I had to stand in front of the mall and hold a sign that wrote I'm with stupid and there was an arrow pointing up at my face it was horrifying
Author's Response: Oh my goodness that SOUNDS horrifying. I hope you weren't standing there for too long!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
What's up edward's butt? He was perfectly civil and charming. Was he thinking about his gf? stalkers?
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Hustler
I'm not sure...I'll have to think on that one.
You made me wait freakin' FOREVER for an update...I was dying...checking everday...I panicked thinking...what if I never get another update, what will I do?
As always...I loved your update. It made me smile and giggle like a 14 year old girl. Goodness, how I love your version of Edward.
Please don't have me waiting so long for another update!
Author's Response: FOREVER?! Hehehe drama queen, it was a week. I'll try to keep regular, but school kicks into gear on Thursday, so I can't promise that I will be able to be quick. I promise I will not leave you high and dry for weeks on end, and I also promise to finish this story. Does that soothe your panic a little? ;)
Goodness, how I love hearing about your giggles. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Hustler
Loved this! He sure has a lot of secrets from his family, though. Interesting...
I'd like to thump on James. I've worked with people like that before. They suck!!
Glad I got to read this before bed!!
Author's Response: Yes, yes he does. Why is that, do you think? I know, I hate James too. If I actually worked with someone like this (to this degree of nasty) I would have called HR long ago. But then, Bella is annoyingly stubborn. Thanks for the review, bb! Sleep tight :)
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Hustler
the stakes for the bet were hilarious. At least bella's were. the whole composing thing was good, showing a deeper...connection. cant wait for your next update
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Hustler
Have never had an embarrasing end to a bet (I'm waaayyy to conservative to put myself out there like that).
Loving this story and find the unfolding of Bella's friendship with Bella a delight Wonder when Edward is going to collect his winnings? Bet he took a heavy sigh of relief when he figured out he wasn't going to lose...
Author's Response: It certainly would have been embarrassing for him had he lost, but I think he was fairly confident or he wouldn't have agreed to Bella's terms. I have Edward's favor all planned out, and I'm fairly certain you girls will approve :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sweek539 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Hustler
Hmm... I actually just bet money 'cause I'm a baby and hate being embarassed haha :) Great chapter! I especially love the darts... great memories lol :)
Author's Response: Nothing better than a good game of bar darts... although I really need a pitcher of beer and some fried mozzerlla sticks to make the night complete. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: SunKing (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Hustler
Another brilliant chapter. I do so love the Edward you've created, and it's nice to see Bella with a little backbone. Well done, my friend!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear you like Edward. For some reason, I have problems with him, so it's nice to hear you say that! I think that had Bella grown up, she would have gotten over some of the shyness and the awkward plain-Jane complex. I know I did. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: wickedhag (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
Okay, I totally tried to create Edward's Mii and failed miserably. I played bowling for four hours in a row though - now this story not only caresses my soul but helps me to get back in shape;) Nicely done, can't wait for the next one. Keep Wii-in' until then;)
Author's Response: ahahahaha that's awesome. I don't have a wii in my apartment, so I couldn't try to recreate the Edward mii. I attempted to do it with some random online tool, but it didn't work out so well. My brother-in-law and one of my brothers both have miis that are so accurate it really is creepy--so I thought it would be funny :) I'm so glad I can "caress your soul" (hehehe I hope that's a good thing?) Thanks, next update is coming up soon!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
Aw this was so good!
i loved it :]
Author's Response: Thank you- I'm glad you enjoyed it! Don't go away, the next update has been submitted :)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
I love the Cullen nights they have, they always make me smile!
The girls night in was hilarious, I love your version of Tanya, Irina and Kate.
She did the hair touch thing!! And it seemed to work, I wonder what will happen when they meet up 'tomorrow'.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pretty fond of them myself, so I'm glad you enjoy T, I, and K. The non-date should be posted soon! Thanks for the reviews :)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Moments
James is a right miserable git, isn't he!? At least Seth was there to stand by her, although I reckon he must like her!
I wonder what is on Edward's mind, I get the feeling that he wants to say something to Bella maybe?
oooh the girls night out sounds interesting..
Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
love this story. i so knew something was up with jessica and lauren early on. but i really love it! cant wait for an update!
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
Very fun chapter....can't wait for the non-date! :)
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:49 PM · On: K.O.
Question...you've mentioned ff in a couple a/n's...what is that? Is that another story you are writing?
I love the nickname "Belly"....especially when Emmett uses it...very cute.
Nice chapter. I'm getting close to finishing what you've already written...I don't know how people read one chapter at a time from the beginning...that would make me crazy. Thanks again...nice story so far.
Author's Response: ff = fanfiction.net It's another Web site you can go to to read fanfiction, they've got all kinds of genres, and thousands of Twifics. I publish here and on that site.
Thanks for your reviews! I love it when people review as they go, it makes me very happy. You've made my night! You've got good timing, the next update should be finished very soon (tonight?) and will go up as soon as I can get it validated.
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Out on the Town
I'm not sure what to think of Edward...what I mean is...if he was really in love with Lauren...it's going to take him a long time to recover enough to have a relationship with Bella. I guess I'll read on and find out! Thanks for an entertaining story.
Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Girls and Boys
OMGOSH!!! I am clueless....I didn't see it coming...well...I did, not just with Jessica.... Yikes...this kinda thing really messes people up...I hope Edward will be able to come out of it without too many deep scars.
Nice story...really cute that they crushed on each other as kids. My daughters best friend has an older brother that she has a little crush on...it's pretty cute.
Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
I read this fic because I found the title completely adorable. This is one of the few AH stories I've read where Alice isn't a complete nut job. Kudos! Seriously, nothing turns me off a fic than having an Alice that's hopped up on crystal meth 24/7. lol I loved how she purposefully sent Bella on all those horrible dates and that Bella didn't realize what she was doing. :)
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you like it. Alice my very favorite, and I get really nervous whenever I start her character in a fic because I want people to love her. And for the record, Alice wasn't exactly doing the horrible date thing on purpose. She tries, God bless her, but she really is a shit match-maker. You may have noticed both Rosalie and Edward telling Bella as much, and we know she's also attempted to set Edward up on multiple occasions. Her heart is in the right place, she just wants the people she loves to be happy, but she's kind of bad at it. Now that Bella has admitted her plan to woo Edward though, Alice can claim it was her plan all along! See how clever she is?
Reviewer: MegaMoster (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
The sun sets over the ocean in Washington... Very well written though I like your style.
Author's Response: Whoops! Thanks for catching that, I fixed it :)
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Pick ups and Spares
Loved it I can't wait to see what happens on their date.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
I love it! I was busy all day and couldn't wait to get home just to read this!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Pick ups and Spares
I love Bella's over analysis. It's so totally girl. This story is awesome. I'm really glad I found it! Someone had it rec'd in one of those blinky things in their signature. Brilliant. :) Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews! I love hearing what people think as they go along, it's so much fun :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Moments
Love the girls' night game plan plan.. This is gonna be awesome!
Reviewer: Tuesday Jane (Anonymous) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:57 PM · On: K.O.
Ooohh I love it when a plan comes together. :)
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