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Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:10 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
it was really cute(:
i was hoping that edward would mention something about the marriage thing but it was adorable nonetheless
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 11:03 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
I love this story.....it seems that Edward is starting to feel something...
Can;t wait to see what happens next....
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:46 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Read this on FF, love it. Snow and Edward mmmmmmmmmm! can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: chickarocka (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:41 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
i had a silly smile on my face the whole time i was reading, then BAM. ugh, edward!!!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:08 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
I think I want to go sledding with my hubby, even though it's August.
Great chapter! Please thank Bella for taking over.....
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 10:03 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Aw!
I loved this :]
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:58 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
I got the tight stomach clenching-I could just throw up feeling there at the end...and then Edward was a wuss...ok, ok, I know he's not ready yet. But I am!!! :) So many of my favorite stories have wrapped up this week, and this is one of the few still going...I think you may have moved up to the #1 spot! Although I did start reading 'land of milk and honey' today, have you read that? it's awesome! But I do love the angst in your story...
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel your pain. :) Land of Milk and Honey is a trip... I have no idea what the hell is going on in that thing, but it's trippy! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:58 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Loved it... I was hoping for more than a kiss on the forehead but I guess I can wait.
Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:47 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Good chapter. Seriously. Let Bella take over more often.:)
I appreciate the build up on Bella and Edwards relationship and I love love love the flashbacks to when they were kids. Adorable!
About my last review: It’s hilarious that Alice is that bad of a matchmaker. It’s endearing because she tried so hard.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the flashbacks, I have fun writing them :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:38 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
I loved this chapter, so fun and playful, and he is obviously starting to really feel something for her. Maybe her just standing there in her ratty sweats making him hot chocolate was just so hot and domestic for him, lol.
Reviewer: sol cullen (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:08 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Oh my god how sweet the day was..................... I really wish he would kiss Bella arrrrrrrrrr Well next time i can't wait to that happend . I start reading this history a couple of days before and now is one of my favorite:D Sorry for my inglish is not my lenguage but i am treating . Great chapter!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 09:01 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Wah! Why did he stop? Why is he so torn up about it? Kiss the damned girl! Gah!
Lovely chapter, all warm and tingly and fun, until he got all wiggy at the end. It was hard to read, though. I freaking hate the cold. I got uncomfortable just reading about all those frozen wet clothes!
Author's Response: Hahaha, you're cute. I'm a midwestern girl, I'm so used to the snow and wet and cold it's not even funny. Doesn't mean I love it, but I have been accused of having ice in my veins. RL confession though, I hate sledding. That whole falling down the hill for 10 minutes thing? That was the last time I ever went sledding. Except at the end, when I finally got to the top, one of my friends pushed me back down because he thought it would be "funny." I literally cried.
Reviewer: Calricjes82 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:58 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Thank you so much for the update! And everything was going so well. Please tell Edward that it's ok to have that reaction and those feelings (if that is what caused him to rush off). I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: Ironic Twist (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:48 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Bella's not the only one who is confused. Why the "dark and conflicted" look. They were having fun. Even if he suddenly remembered the cupcake incident from their childhood why the big moment of heartfail.
Criminy, Seth is looking better and better all the time.
Author's Response: Hahaha, the dark and conflicted look has nothing to do with cupcakes. Past or present. Very confused. :) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:47 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
can't wait for more
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:33 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
thanks for the update! he's getting there.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 08:31 PM · On: You'll Poke Your Eye Out
Okay, I'll start at the end-what a tease! Now, back to the beginning-Bella better figure out how to kick Jame's ass into gear or she'll be looking for work somewhere else! And the sledding was a brilliant idea on Bella's part. Close contact, fun, endorphin producing, mmmhmmm. But, what was it about those sweat pants? Tease!
Reviewer: Halo Jones (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Hustler
Okay, look at me not being ahole!lol Okay, caught up, loved it, love the pacing of this cuase i hate when everything happens at warped speed-slow sweet torture is where it's at! And I love how Edward is all over the place and I love female bonding sessions instead of catfights and I loved the mii part becaquse my hubby had a pink bowling ball too!lol Hup to it, I'm ready for more!lol
Author's Response: I would never accuse you of being an asshole bb. Never you fear :) I, obviously, am also a fan of slow sweet torture. Because every time I've dated a friend (they're pretty much the only guys I date, which may explain the fact that I have very few guy friends left... hmmmmm) the progression has always been slow and tingly, not fast and crazy. So I'm just going with my gut on this one, and I'm so glad that people seem to be diggin it. Look, I replied! Guess I'm not an asshole either, hehe.
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Hustler
Sounds to me like Edward knew he was going to win that bet and already has planned what he is going to make Bella do. Ooh, can't wait.
Author's Response: It does sound like that, doesn't it? Hmmmmm. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Hustler
Brilliant as usual. I still hate James, what a twat, doing something to her chair. But Seth is a sweety for trying to find out what was wrong before she came back.
Interesting about the bet..
Poor Bella, shes getting the little ocmments but having to stop herself from saying something she shouldnt.. must have been hard with Edward there.. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you :) I don't think you're ever going to stop hating James, he's just a nasty piece of work. Seth is fighting a losing battle there. Love your reviews, thanks for taking the time!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Hustler
I guess I must not be very competitive because I no embarrasing moments tied to losing bets.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews today! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I consider myself to be pretty competitive, but I have a phobia about making bets. I have bad luck, so I don't even attempt, because the outcome is sure to be bad!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Moments
Oooo can't wait to hear the advice the girls give her...and I hope it works.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 06:12 PM · On: K.O.
Their first kiss should not have taken place in the bathroom after a blooded nose. I'm glad Esme interrupted them before they gave in to the tension.
Love this story!
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Girls and Boys
I didn't see that coming!!! That was a shocker...I felt she was going to get caught but not with a women.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Ante Up
I can see it coming...Lauren is going to make him be all alone on Thanksgiving except for when she wants to use him for the social event. OR...Bella will have to convince him to go to Forks with the family and break plans with Lauren for once.
I guess I will have to find out next chapter! Love your story!
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