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Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 03:48 PM · On: Trust (V)
I feel like Bella should be angrier at Edward for his outburst than Alice. lol. Although Alice definitely shouldn't get off easy.
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 03:39 PM · On: Flaws (V)
Thank you!! I'm glad Bella mentioned seeing other people because it seems like Edward needs it more than she does since he has the trust issues.
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 03:29 PM · On: Someday (V)
The last chapter made me think Bella should have never forgiven Edward, but now I guess they can be friends! I just don't see how they could ever move to a healthy relationship. :(
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2012 01:41 AM · On: Girls and Boys
OMG....Lauren's a lesbian??..haha...should have seen it coming!
Reviewer: toecoe01 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Flaws (V)
i hate bella right now. she's making things to big of a deal and being a bitch to edward and alice hmph.
Reviewer: displacement (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:48 AM · On: For the Future (V)
i love the ending. so sweet.
Reviewer: Sally-Anna (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 07:10 AM · On: For the Future (V)
Ive just spent the last two days reading your story and WOW, what a story. I just love the twist and turns it took, but most of all I loved Edward and Bellas journey. These two belong together, no matter what it takes to get there, and I loved your ending, going back to their childhood, it put a tear in my eye.
Thanks for a great story x
Reviewer: SUNSHINEDAYDREAM (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:55 PM · On: For the Future (V)
awww i loved it!!! i am a sap for rocky starts and happy endings!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Exposure (V)
You done good!!!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Girls and Boys
I called it! Sopmething about playdates with Jess just read swimming in the lady pond. Excellent!!!
Reviewer: msbeautifulpassion (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:10 AM · On: For the Future (V)
I really liked what you did with the secondary characters from the book. Aro was hilarious. I think when they're AU-Human, it's hard to decide how to incorporate them into the story. This one did a GREAT job of it. And of course it helped that I laughed so hard in one part that I nearly cried and stopped breathing.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:31 PM · On: For the Future (V)
Now I'm crying again (I cried at the Jalice bit first). That ending! It was so perfect and God knows why I didn't read this sooner. I kept forgetting, but now I've read it and boy what am amazing end to a story.
I loved how James finally got punished, yes, he was promoted, but promoted out of the office, so that's good. And Bella might be getting a better job within the company! Yes!
I'm so happy with this ending.. and the memory? That was perfect. Seriously, a perfect ending.
My Jalice heart was going crazy at this:
Alice was glowing. I never really understood what people meant when they said that before, about brides and new mothers, but looking at Alice, it was easy to see. It wasn’t about the ring, which sparkled tastefully on her left hand. It wasn’t about the clothes she was wearing or the way her hair was styled just so. It was all about the man that stood beaming next to her.
I started freaking crying! You know I'm Team Jalice all the way when I start crying over a Jalice scene in a E/B story. And then this bit:
“I have to get my fiancée home,” he said proudly. Then he laughed. “God, that sounds good.”
“Don’t get too used to it, bub,” Alice said with a grin. “Soon it’ll be wife.”
It makes me so happy to read that! :D
Aww, I wish this story wasn't over now. It reminds me how much I loved reading this.
Reviewer: SpiritWriter77 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Girls and Boys
lauren and jessica! i knew it all along.....
Reviewer: SpiritWriter77 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Dish It Out
lauren gives me the creeps
Reviewer: SpiritWriter77 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Do Not Pass Go
i cant wait for the meeting with Lauren!
Reviewer: SpiritWriter77 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 12:03 AM · On: Trick or Treat
really funny! love the rock costume!
Reviewer: SpiritWriter77 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Prologue and Dinner and a Show
really awesome so far! u caught my attention from the beginning of the chapter
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 04:30 PM · On: For the Future (V)
Great story I am very happy I decided to read it.
Reviewer: Ladyannita83 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 11:34 AM · On: For the Future (V)
So lovely!!!
I really enjoyed this ride! Excellent Job!!!
Reviewer: lyssalani (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 01:44 AM · On: For the Future (V)
I started your story two days ago, and everytime that I had to stop reading, I wasnt very happy.. lol... I think that you are a wonderful author, and I am most definetly adding you to my favorites. You are extremely talented, and I am excited to read more of your work. This story was amazing, I especially like the was you ended it in the same basic way that you started it :)
Reviewer: dogs_101 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:24 PM · On: For the Future (V)
Luvvvvved this fic!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sistermary (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:59 PM · On: For the Future (V)
That ending was the sweetest ever! Great story, all the way thru.
Reviewer: sistermary (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Two Steps Back
I love that he left her the ice cream...awwwww
Reviewer: sistermary (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Magnetic
"Then don't".....le sigh!!!
Reviewer: sistermary (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Girls and Boys
can't wait for the confrontation! this ought to be interesting....
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