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Reviewer: amylynn1313 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
Please keep writing this story....love it so far!
Author's Response: Hi Amylynn
Oh I kept writing it, it's up to chapter 17 over on FF if you want to go nuts! I'm having so much fun with these characters, and it's so god to see it gretting a good response.
Thanks for stopping by, lovely to hear from you.
Cheers
Sandy
Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 5
great chapter!
poor Angela... Her lust is cruel...
Author's Response: Hello, lovely to hear from you!
Oh I just love Angela, she's great fun. If you're interested in reading more of the story, I'm up to chapter 17 on FF, and the story is nearly finished. I'm having a blast with it all, so will have to try and think of another storyline to play with after this one.
Thanks for reviewing!
Cheers
Sandy
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 5
haha Angela's reaction to Edward bringing the ice cream was great! Ben either being oblivious or just natural with Edward was a nice move, and now for what happens in the evening with B&E on the couch? :)
Author's Response: I think Angela spoke for all of us with that ice-cream delivery ... *sigh*
Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it all so far! If you're interested in reading more, I'm up to chapter 17 over on FF.
Cheers
Sandy
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
I hope rhe couch morphs into a bed cause they both need some luckon foven
Reviewer: lilywhiteLynn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am so glad I found this story. Its very refreshing.
Author's Response: Hi Lily
I'm very pleased to hear that you're enjoying the story - I have to say I'm having enormous fun with my sassy characters. If you're interested in reading more, I'm up to chapter 17 over on FF. Stop on by and say hello!
Cheers
Sandy
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
Just waiting for the ride to continue...
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 5
Just started reading your story and I love it. Can't wait to read more. Great work.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
liking it so far...please continue
Reviewer: twijen6 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great chapter, and cant wait to see what crazy moments in the next ones to come. :D
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
oh angela! usually its emmett that makes me laugh the most but angela is a hoot! LOVE the story! keep it up!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 5
This is a very fun story! I'm just loving how everything is meshing together. Looking forward to more!
Kat M.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 5
this is great so far!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 5
FRICKING LOVE THIS!!!!!
Reviewer: guinevere (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh man, I love your story! The witty lines and comebacks... it felt like watching a feel-good romantic movie. And I'm a sucker for romance!
I love their phone conversation, very witty, very refreshing. So hope to read more like that from you!
Kudos!
Reviewer: canarydude (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 5
Aaw, and again, that was really sweet! I love how cute and comfortable they are around each other, it's very endearing. I hope they go on a 'proper' date soon, 'cause they are pretty perfect for each other, Thank you- I really enjoyed it!
Reviewer: ArcCleo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 5
You ve got to be kidding me...
I would like this improptu rendezvous as well!
:) Great Chapter :D
We are silly sometimes...
Reviewer: ArcCleo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hahahaha...That was so Fun!!!!
Reviewer: ArcCleo (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
I missed the new updates so I am going to comment to each of them!
Great Chapter so lively !
Loved it Sandy!
Author's Response: Hey Cleo! Glad you're liking it m'dear!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 5
XD Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
I am really liking this story, it's different. Pls keep writing
Reviewer: Daisysus (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
So I really liked that chapter. I liked the interaction between Edward and Rosalie and Emmett. And I loved that Ben had no idea who Edward was. The only part of this chapter that I didn't like was the last sentence. The Bella in this story doesn't seem like the kind of person who would think that. At least, not too seriously. She seems more sure of herself and way more confident than the little girl in the books who thought that often. I really hope your Bella isn't going to suddenly turn into a big insecure mess who thinks she's not worthy of anyone.
Reviewer: Thank God For Deliverance (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
It really is amazing!!! As soon as I get home I'm going on FF and reading it there. This is so great! YAY!!!
Reviewer: EmmaLynn (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 4
aww! that was probably the cutest chapter everr!! nervous Edward is a HEART-THROB! i loved the part where Bella almost hung up on him cause she thought he was an insurance company, hahaha poor Edward, trying to be all suave, I love his nervousness, it makes him 10x cuter =P update soon i can't wait for more!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
OH! Can't wait for more. XD Whole Foods.. great store.. wish i had one near by...
Author's Response: Hey darl!
I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! If you really want to gorge yourself on the story, it's up to chapter 16 on FF ... I'm working on chapter 17 at the moment, so you've got some catching up to do!
Thanks so much for your review(s) - it's lovely to hear from you.
Cheers
Sandy
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more. Lol, Rose and Em.. XD
Author's Response: Hiya, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far,I had enormous fun writing this one!
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