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Reviewer: a_book_addict (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
WOW this is one good story but please tell me you're gonna finish this. i cant wait to read the rest. I'm HOOKED!!
keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
victoria is... i don't know i don't trust her... !!
and why is bella avoiding edward?!?!
Reviewer: Bones_Rocks (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Introductions
Will there be an update soon?
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
I just read through the story and am pins and needles for the next chapter
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
i have missed this story.
Reviewer: bethyloo87 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
Hi :) I really like your story! I just wanted to say that I'm really excited to see the direction you are taking things, and that I get that real life happens. Sometimes we just gotta take care of other things first :) write your story for you at your pace and I bet we'll all be happier in the long-run!
don't get me wrong, I am indeed eager to read what you will be putting Edward/Bella/Victoria (grr) through next! I love your Bella, so vital and an amazing agent! And Edward...*sigh* haha. Keep up the good work, because you're doing a great job so far!
Reviewer: patsyrobinson (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Introductions
so I should be studying for my physiology final right now... but couldn't help myself. I just had to see if you'd updated :) and yay! you did! I'm eager for your next update, and oh-so-happy to be your beta <3
oh, and I wasn't anything of the Twilight variety for H-ween...I was studying. but the weekend before we had our "boo bash" at some bar and my friends and I were babysnatchers! my friend Andrew wore a pink bunny-footed onesie and was a "snatched" baby girl. Funny, but not self-explanatory. Next year I'm either going to be Jem (she's outrageous!) or Carmen San Diego.
and now...physiology, here I come. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
Can't wait for more! Update soon?
Reviewer: traxie2001 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
Finally!! Looking forward to more EDWARD interactions, though!
Reviewer: Alienbabe95 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
um..the only review I want to give is..........WRITE THE FUCK FAST!!!!!Plzzzzzzzz
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
intereting... so glad that there was an update... haha
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
Yipeee! An update! Thanks sooooo much. This is such a great story, it's great to see you come back to it. And we get Jake to boot! Makes for a very happy Halloween!
Reviewer: TheDSP (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
I just read this through... and it's REALLY good!
I hope Edward isn't played out like a little bitch that needs protecting all the time, though. I hope he gets the chance to fight some of own his battles. I know Bella is an agent, but Edward isn't exactly a stranger to fire arms or self defence. He might not have the legal authority to do some of the things Bella can do, but he has just as much ability and will power to do them as she does. He isn't your average civillian. Ya know? If I had the amount of self defence and fire arms training that he does, I would get really pissed about having to stay back and hide all the time, like he had to a couple of chapter ago. He isn't patronizing Bella anymore, so hopefully she wont patronize him in the future. And I would be saying the exact same thing if it was Edward who was the FBI agent, I would want Bella to get to do as much for herself as possible too. No one likes to be patronized or held back, especially when they have the "know-how", male or female.
I can't wait to see where this is going!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
I was surprised that Bella was trusting Victoria with info regarding the case. I thought she would have questioned her more. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: lost my mind forever (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
Victoria is not to be trusted. No one would risk their career that fast.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
good chapter but more edward please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: KiddyWiddy (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Reunion
Yay, you didn't abandon the story. Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Introductions
so when is the next chapter coming out haha
Reviewer: 53baby (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Developments
Bella's instincts are INSANE, she is just too good ;)
Please continue!
baby xx
Reviewer: Carolinda (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Developments
I LOVE this story and can't wait for an update!!!
please update!!!! I'm begging you.....:'(
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I had a RL situation come up, and then school started!, but now I'm back to writing. I hope to update SOON. I will not leave you guys in the lurch! Thanks again for your review! :o)
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Developments
love this story love bellas character in this keep writing!
Reviewer: krazy___kate (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Developments
really well written and love the plot and pace of the story.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Developments
Can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: lomasi (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Developments
Wonderful! Hope more is coming very soon!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Developments
I've read all 7 chapters today and now I'm just itching for more! I don't have any suggestions, you're keeping us well hooked with the little views of Bella's past. Looking forward to chapter 8!
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