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Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 10:38 AM · On: 6: Legends
I really like how Bella can read minds too, gives Eddie a little less of an edge and removed the one siddedness a little. Loved the families instant love of her and the whole Mike is an evil villain strait out of perv land. I cant wait for the next chapter, I hope it will be as entertaining as the rest, but with Bella hearing everyone's most innermost thoughts that's a definite yes. Please don't add much of the dog, I REALLY don't like Jake, he takes away from the Edwardness. Yummy, he's bringing her a deer. how romantic, their technically sharing diner. PLEASE update soon!!
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 05:52 PM · On: 6: Legends
Oh no! I caught up! This is a great story ... I'm loving it :-)
One question though: Can Bella see Alice's visions? She doesn't seem to, but I wasn't sure!
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 04:04 PM · On: 2: Lapse
I'm still catching up, but I wanted to pop in and say: I'm *loving* that Bella can read minds too! It's awesome :-)
Reviewer: samantha-cullen0302 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:51 PM · On: 6: Legends
write more is awesome!!!
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 07:41 AM · On: 6: Legends
Very cool. I like this story a lot.
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:39 AM · On: 6: Legends
I know all good things come those who wait .... patiently i am waiting.. UPDATE SOON!!! thanx
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 10:08 PM · On: 6: Legends
this story just keeps getting better, I can't wait to see what happens next. I love Bella's mind reading. I am looking forward to more Cullen interaction :)
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 10:07 PM · On: 6: Legends
More more more! I'm seriously digging this story I really hope you update soon I like that bella can read minds and I really hope that the cullens don't find out for a while I think its cool that they don't know. I also like that rosalie is nice to bella sometimes the whole bitchy rosalie thing gets old! I can't wait to find out what happens next and how edward will react when he finds out bella already knows! Update soon!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:20 PM · On: 6: Legends
It's great! Thank you!!!!!!!
Reviewer: WriterMerrin (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:10 PM · On: 6: Legends
This is very cool. The twist about Bella being able to hear thoughts too really keeps it fresh, not like so many other retellings. I'm really looking forward to Edward figuring out her riddle.
Reviewer: Rau (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:01 PM · On: 6: Legends
wow this is a great story, I couldn't stop reading it. Please post more soon, its a unique take on their story line. You write their personalities to the T.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:22 PM · On: 2: Lapse
I like how you kept it so that Edward was a mind-reader, also. It makes more sense now that Bella can't read Edward's mind and Edward can't read Bella's. Stephenie Meyer never really explained that.
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:32 PM · On: 1: Gifted
Fucking great first chapter. Lovin' it.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:01 PM · On: 6: Legends
Man Mikes going to get hurt! His thoughts are soputrid that he can only ever hope for a broken leg instead of a full body cast! LMAO!
Reviewer: nanny (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:51 PM · On: 6: Legends
great story cant wait until she lets the cullens know she can read minds and knows they are vampires please update soon !!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilightlover051096 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:33 AM · On: 6: Legends
please right more soon! i come to this web just 4 this story!!!! please!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 09:23 AM · On: 6: Legends
gah how Bella didn't overload with all that negative thought around her!?
Hmm... wonder how the girls' night will go... and the trip to Port Angeles for that matter?
Reviewer: bellaislikeme (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 08:40 AM · On: 6: Legends
i like this nice idea for a story upate soon please
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:57 AM · On: 6: Legends
Listen, buddy.
I. Really. Love. Your story. I just adore it. It's absolutely fascinating, and funny, and romantic, and cool and.. well, the list could go on. Just hope you get the idea. I'm soooo anxiously waiting for more chapters. I'm TOTALLY addicted to this. <3 Love it. *hugz with vamp strength*
I really like the idea of Bella reading minds. It's really helpful, and cool, forst of all. XD Anyways, it's really good way to know where you gotta go to stay away from Mike. God, that boy is gross. He gives me creeps.. Yuck.
Aww. You're soooo cute by making Rosalie and Bella friends. YOU ROCK!! I've waited for a fic like that, and now my prays have been answered. *bows*
Can't wait for more, so please, hurry. *puppy eyes*
p.s. I hate Jacob. Don't make Bella fall into him.
~werucchi
Author's Response: LOL, you had me scared with the 'listen, buddy', I though I was in trouble. I'm so glad you and so many others are enjoying Rose's dramatic diffenence. And don't worry, I'm Team Edward all the way!!!
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 07:37 AM · On: 6: Legends
awww - uh oh! Mike and the bad port angeles husy - will she fall into the trap with her mind reading skills?!! Hope not! goo go go kaghanyou! this si good! Tne stars :)
NIAIS
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 06:08 AM · On: 6: Legends
Nice
Reviewer: RobertLover (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:44 AM · On: 6: Legends
I just love this story. It is amazing. I can't wait till Edward finds out that Bella reads minds too and that she has known that he and his family are vampires. I hope you have more intimate times with Bella and Edward in this story than SM did in Twilight. I just love reading Bella and Edward stories, I'm addicted and I can wait for next chapter.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:31 AM · On: 6: Legends
I can't wait to see how this story unfolds! Great Chapter.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 02:46 AM · On: 6: Legends
thanks for the update :))
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 12:02 AM · On: 6: Legends
i want more!!!!
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