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Reviews For daybreak
Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:30 AM · On: 13: Reality

You are a writing fiend!  I'm amazed at how much writing you've produced so quickly.  And, I love every bit of it!

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:25 AM · On: 13: Reality

Great Chapter !

Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:12 AM · On: 1: Gifted

I'm totally engrossed in your fluffy story.  This is the kind of stories I love reading about.  I don't want the angst, more of the fluff.  You are so there with how 'we your readers' would have envisioned our life with Edward.  Oh, okay, I'll speak for myself :-)  Nonetheless...I'm so caught up in your Edward and Bella's life.  I love the twist of how their minds can connect, so sweet.  You are so thoughtful with their "kissing' time very touching, wouldn't want it any other way.  I'm so waiting on your next and next and next chapters.  Thank you for your wonderful version.  I'm so enjoying your story. (sighs in contentment>

Reviewer: dramaqueen0024 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:54 PM · On: 13: Reality

i love you and this story OMGG

Reviewer: jahnicia (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: 13: Reality

Please uplaod every chapter after it gets approved its to great for the wait.

Author's Response:

Wish that was how it worked, but it doesn't. I can only submit one chapter at a time to my Betareader, then they have to approve it. So I upload and wait for the approval, then I add another one and wait for approval....

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:47 PM · On: 13: Reality

OMG OMG OMG!!  Man if kissing has you reading eachothers thoughts imagine what more intimacy will bring muah hahahaha  Post again I am so totally swooning!!!  This story knocks my socks off and its still so sweet about it!

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:16 PM · On: 13: Reality

Another great chapter!  I wondered if something would connect between them if they were intimate.

Author's Response:

well obviously something would connect when intimate. But I never thought about the mental aspect of it. Hmmmm....

Reviewer: lomasi (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:38 PM · On: 13: Reality

Very creative idea! 

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:33 PM · On: 13: Reality

I knew they could read each others thoughts during kissing - fun, fun, fun

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:15 PM · On: 13: Reality

I'm going to add this story to my favorites. :)

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:10 PM · On: 13: Reality

That was great. I am excited to see what comes next!!!

Reviewer: Vilandra (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:05 PM · On: 13: Reality

Awesome story.  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:59 PM · On: 13: Reality

BEST CHAPTER EVER, YET ;) It is soooo cool that they can read each others thoughts when they kiss, genious! Hope you update soon. xoxo

Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:29 PM · On: 13: Reality


Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:12 PM · On: 13: Reality

What a wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: srp (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:08 PM · On: 13: Reality

if your on the verge of tears when writing it doesn't make you great or crappy it makes you passionate :)

love daybreak can't wait for more updates

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:02 PM · On: 13: Reality

Eeeeee!!!! The kiss was real! Silly Bella thinking it was just a dream. Great chapter!!

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:58 PM · On: 13: Reality

Interesting take....looking forward to the next post.

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:49 PM · On: 12: Dream

Forgot the stars!!


Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:49 PM · On: 12: Dream

AWWWWWWWWWW sweetness =] Loved it =] This is just as good as twilight 0 maybe better becuase Rosalie isn't evil etc etc blah blah blah! Ten Stars!


Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:20 AM · On: 12: Dream

Haha... was it actually a dream?? If not, I think it's a really interesting twist that they can hear each other when kissing!  If it is a dream, I think it would be a really interesting twist if they could hear each other when kissing! *grin*

Nice chapter :-D  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 06:01 AM · On: 12: Dream

love this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:21 AM · On: 12: Dream

haha, great chapter. Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:47 AM · On: 12: Dream

I totally love that Bella doesb't give Jacob the time of day in your story...maybe it's because she can hear his childish mind.....

I am SO SAD that the kiss is just a dream!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:47 AM · On: 12: Dream

Can Edward see her dreams while she sleeps? Because that would be fabulous ;D

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