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Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 02:25 PM · On: 15: Interruptions
Great chapter. Nice to see a horny Edward instead up uptight Edward.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:35 PM · On: 15: Interruptions
Wow, great chapter.
Reviewer: Rhyadawn (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:19 PM · On: 15: Interruptions
Great chapter.
what was the interuption at the end of the last chapter??
Author's Response: Her stomach, I know it wasn't real serious but for a human it is.
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:12 PM · On: 15: Interruptions
aww i love this story..
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:59 PM · On: 15: Interruptions
squee!!! I just love this story! When it updated I jumped into my seat and began reading! The phone has rang 3 times and I answered shortly before hanging up on whomever was onthe othe rline!! Sorry about your hand I pray for a speedy recovery so I can read the next chapter!!!! Swoon!
Reviewer: Natzxx (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:32 AM · On: 14: Torture
i love this story - please update soon!! Hopefully the words will come to you - but i am sure it will be great!!!
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:47 AM · On: 14: Torture
this is such a good story. please update soon. thanks
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:30 AM · On: 14: Torture
what interuption? oh no! tho i wondere, will they be making love before the wediing or not? nah i sound perverted but a girl can ask, right?anyway, i like ur story A LOT, bb. Amazing job!
Author's Response: I'm planning on them getting 'intimate' before the wedding, I don't think I could wait till the 4th book, that would be torture for everyone, exspecially Edward. It won't happen in this book though, maybe at the end of the next or in the third. I haven't totally planned it out yet. Be a pervert, I am!!!
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 01:24 AM · On: 14: Torture
I have Complete Confidence in the fact that YOU CAN come up with the Right WORDS for the next Chapter... Sooo PLEASE figure it out!! :o(
thanx
Reviewer: ostmx (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 11:45 AM · On: 14: Torture
gaaah what i cliffhanger :O
anyway, i really enjoyed reading this story, thank you for writing it!
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:51 AM · On: 14: Torture
Oh it's so good and sweet! GAWD WHAT A CLIFFY! Please update soon!
Reviewer: roze (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:18 AM · On: 14: Torture
Wow it was amazing i love it
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 12:04 AM · On: 14: Torture
Well, crap, what is the interruption??
Reviewer: blueeyedbella (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:25 PM · On: 14: Torture
This is amazing!! I LOVE this story! Keep it coming!! UpdateASAP!Please!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:13 PM · On: 14: Torture
Great chapter... I love how Edward is not hesitant of kissing her.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:08 PM · On: 14: Torture
I so love this story. Nice to see Edward relax and make out without stressing!@
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:40 PM · On: 14: Torture
I hate it when that happens. ( about your writers block I mean) Sometimes when I'm writing I skip ahead to the next scene and then go back. I don't know if that will help you or not; but you never know. .......Great chapter!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:03 PM · On: 14: Torture
loved write fast don't have much time
Reviewer: alexis52 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:44 PM · On: 14: Torture
i love this chapter
Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:33 PM · On: 1: Gifted
Hmmm...your story is exactly how Bella and Edward should be in my minds eye. There's so much openess & communication. Gotta love it! Your story brings a warm smile to my face and melts my heart. =) I would love to keep this story on an even keel, as it captivates us even more.
Thank you.
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:15 PM · On: 14: Torture
I think the interuption is her hungry stomach. lol I'm sure the next chapter will be great, don't get stressed. :)
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:20 PM · On: 14: Torture
HOW SWEET!
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:49 PM · On: 14: Torture
so sweet, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:36 PM · On: 13: Reality
MAKES HER AMAZING !!!!!!
Reviewer: Rainwatter (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:35 PM · On: 14: Torture
That was an incredibly sweet chapter! I love that they can hear each other while kissing. Good luck with finding the right words!
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