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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:54 PM · On: 18: Prey
Damn that was short!!!
Please please post again soon!
I loved the chapter it was intense quick.
I like your Bella like my Bella shes not just going to be a bistander!!
My story should be updating soon I would love love love if you gave me your opinion on A Test of fate!
Reviewer: smiles (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:41 PM · On: 18: Prey
I like that she didn't tell charlie she hated him basically. I like the trip idea much better. No need to hurt the poor gus feelings unnecessarily.
Reviewer: shysky (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:19 PM · On: 18: Prey
I liked it. A Bit of variation as well as leaving charlie with peace of mind instead of in a frantic way thinking all is lost with bella
Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:03 PM · On: 18: Prey
Good chapter I can't wait to see where you go with this. I really like how this story is playing out. Thanks, Jennifer
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Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:48 PM · On: 18: Prey
Trip to Cancun is a much better ruse than Phoenix.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 05:24 PM · On: 17: Complications
it was unbelieveable omg amazing
me either i'm not one for sports
please write fast
until next time
Reviewer: leahswings (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:05 AM · On: 17: Complications
I like this baseball scene. Pretty descriptive.
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 08:28 AM · On: 17: Complications
i love this story you are amazing doll i love the idea and you are executing it brilliantly :D cant wait to read more :D
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 11:20 PM · On: 17: Complications
i love this! i cant wait to see how bellas power alters the rest of the story.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:53 PM · On: 17: Complications
Can't wait for the next chapter! This story is great!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:32 PM · On: 17: Complications
hahahaha Bella distracting Edward was great!!!
And now for the nomads.... hmmm not sure how anxious I should be to find out what you have planned for the happy couple yet :)
Reviewer: Lespin01 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:18 PM · On: 17: Complications
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Edward is so easily distracted by Bella. THe purring only makes it funnier. Update soon!
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:35 PM · On: 17: Complications
great chapter!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:22 PM · On: 17: Complications
another great chapter
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 03:15 PM · On: 17: Complications
Damn Bella fights dirty...poor Edward doesn't stand a chance with her distracting him like that...LOL
I can't wait for the meeting with the nomads....with Bella being able to hear everything this is gonna be so exciting.....*bouncing around deliriously happy*
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:14 PM · On: 17: Complications
Wow! I hate this to happen. Charlie would hate Edward again. Darn James!
Author's Response: Just a small note, Bella leaves on good terms with Charlie.
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:01 PM · On: 17: Complications
Oh so good. I love it!
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 01:30 PM · On: 17: Complications
I love this story!!! Hope you update soon.
Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:49 AM · On: 17: Complications
but there will be a baby right?
Author's Response: Yes there will be a baby in the 4th story....but there is a twist there as well.....
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:56 AM · On: 7: Three
I have one question....How does Bella know that Edward is 104?
Author's Response: Well I did fix that, I ment to put 100+, but Bella hears a thought about edward being a 17 yo times 6, so she did the math.
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:53 AM · On: 17: Complications
"...what could go wrong.’ k so now i don't think any of the swans know never to say/think that... Murphey's law "Anything that can go wrong will go wrong." so besides that GREAT CHAPPIE:) CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:47 AM · On: 17: Complications
Oh No! I love this story! it is a lovely take! I hope to heavens that your next chapter is starkly diferent from the SM version!
Reviewer: maryrose (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:34 AM · On: 16: Plans
"... what could go wrong." doesn't bella know never never never never NEVER to say that. cuz when you do something WILL go wrong....
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 09:15 AM · On: 17: Complications
You know what I loved Bellas distraction!!!! That so would have been an original rock out!
I loved this chapter Look forward to the next!!!
Reviewer: WannabeRosalie (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:43 AM · On: 14: Torture
"You're weird, you know that?"
Dude. I get told that on a daily basis.
I am LOVIN' the long chappies!! Keep it up!
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