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Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 10:35 AM · On: 15: Interruptions
Great story again but still you need to find more revealing dresses for bella alice would never buy colthes that cover that much skin but anyways great story so far keep writing a great story
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:) love your writing girl (:
Reviewer: Drea85 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 06:56 AM · On: 10: Proof
okay, that was really cute and naive. lol. I like that he has no clue, although i would guess it would get old quickly.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 12:48 AM · On: 24: Stalemate
Acck spasing computer keeps kicking me off...
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:48 PM · On: 14: Torture
That was a great chapter thank you for continueing to write this AWESOME(!) story :)
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
Great story and I'm glad that Bella does not have the "pull" toward Jake that so many people give her - I think that she would never waffle like that - Edward would always be her one and only.
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:04 PM · On: 13: Reality
That depend what they are writing about. You did a great job in this chapter it was very good, it was quite interesting, and it was very creative i loved it.
Keep writting u rock
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:) "Love Your Writing Girl"(:
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
You did a terrific job on this fic.
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 10:28 PM · On: 12: Dream
Hey that was a good chapter not as good as the others but it was still really good but for the record u should have more or a victoria's secret "nighty" for bella that one covers too much i like it but be more precise when mentioning bella is dreaming cause that is kind of unclear
:) love your writing :)
Author's Response: It was meant to be confusing, dream or not? And Bella has to work her way up to the revealing clothing, normally she would wear sweat pants and a tank top.
Reviewer: Niques (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
WOW i can't wait to read full moon. Do not let Bella jump off that cliff. I love Daybreak and ur other stories.
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 07:00 PM · On: 11: Dazzle
That was a great chapter and thank you for the warning so that i could close the computer lid when my sis came by
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:41 PM · On: 10: Proof
Great chapter it was hilarious! :)
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:39 PM · On: 11: Dazzle
Each chapter is more hilarious than the one before!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
amazing that all i can can't wait for full moon but when you do write it please put on the summary box daybreak sequel please
amazing, it ended how it should have, i cant wait for full moon
i'm so sad it about to end in full moon it was an amazing story
and i will always remember
i loved it, it was amzingly perfect o my god did i love this story it had the perfect ending, perfect everything
wow you are an amazing author and this a very long story but totaly worth it you did everything how i wanted it, it was perfect
if i could i would give you a award or someting to show you how amazing this story was from the writing to the feeling to the detail all in all amazing
i don't know what more to say it was amazing i'm so so so glad i read this story
well until next time mbellaandedwardm good luck with your next story i'm postive it will be a sucess
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. And I'm absolutely saying that FM is the sequel, don't want any questiona about what happened where.
Reviewer: KiddyWiddy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
Wow, can't believe it's finished already *tears*
Can't wait for the next installment!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
Awesome ending! cant wait for the next story!!!!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 11:12 AM · On: 1: Gifted
i loved it,can't wait for full moon, i'd love to see how bella reacts to knowing edwards plans, her birthday is pivitol to the story, but i trust you're judgment!
Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
awesome story. i'll be looking foward to reading full moon.
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
I loved your story. Thank you for it!!! Alices dress is so cute and perfect for alice! I can't wait to read your next story.
Reviewer: Tunesgrl (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
The dress you chose for Bella is soooo much more beautiful than the one they used for the movie...It's absolutely gorgeous!!! Great job!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
greatest dresses ever, and why are the volturi not going to be in full moon? they are pretty much pivotal! they are the only reason edward is halfway willing to turn bella! but this has been a great story, thanks for the memories!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
All I can say is AWESOME! What a great talent you have of telling a story and letting me feel as though I am there on the sidelines. Keep this story going -- it's great. You should be proud of your talent.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
I think you did an amazing job & I've put you on my fave authors list already so when you start putting out the new story,
I've enjoyed every moment I've spent reading this & I'm glad that I found this and started reading when I did. I will admit though, I'm looking forward to when you put another chapter of Hidden out too. ;)
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:52 PM · On: 9: Trust
Hey good Chapter i enjoyed it keep writing it's great
Reviewer: platapusfemale (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:29 PM · On: 8: Killer
that was a great chapter thank you for being such a great writer
Reviewer: evrythingmusic1 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Epilogue: Destiny
Oooh I loved the dresses their awesome, great choice! Aww Edward leaves?! Just don't let Bella and Jacob get a mushy gushy lovey dovey becuase I'll throw up, I swear I will. lol can't wait for Full Moon! :D
Author's Response: I honestly don't think I could right a love between Bella and Jake, I'm too much Team Eward to do that to him.
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