1) did you draw the picture?

2)its either her mum or other relitive or friend

3)ive been to an airport and you did good with that so dont worry. although the check in time was a bit short it normally takes HOURS

4)it cant be victoria or james since if its going to take edward 4 hours to get to her then it will take them longer since the reason they are flying is for time.

5)yes i found it boring in the book

6)is there a reason behind poison as a ringtone?

7)did jasper really bring her a whole roast beef? as in a whole cow?

8) 'these two are a fit pair.’ What did you mean by that? to me that would mean hot, or attractive but im guessing you didnt mean it like that

9)im trying to go for ten here to make it worthwhile.

10)thankyou for changing the location to a hall of mirrors. much better then the much used and abused ballet studio. only problem is thats what id picked for my story. hahaha

Author's Response:

No I didn't draw the pick,I edited it in Photoshop. Have you listenen to the words in Poison? They fit perfectly. Did I not mention it was a sandwich??? Fit pair as in they hope for the best. Thank you.

 Honey... Im loving this... its damn good, now off to read the next one. Hugs

I like your Cancun idea much better. Better than the whole Bella running from Edward to Phoenix storyline. Maybe it will make Charlie hate Edward a little less???

it was amazing dear i love it so very much :D you have done such a great job and i cant wait for the next story i swear i loves you i like that you hold your ground about whats going to happen :D

Loved this story.  I like how Bella's gift changes her relationship with Edward and the other Cullens.  I look forward to Full Moon.  Thank you.

Oh it will be interesting to see what happens in the next saga.  I think she will be less likely to fall into Jacob because she can hear thoughts of others.  It will be harder on her to go back to living if Edward leaves because of her reading minds thing.  Since they can read each other when kissing, how is he ever going to leave her???  I can't wait to see what you do with the next story!!!  Great job.

Definitely seeing a new side of Mike now that Bella can read his thoughts.  Well done.

The mutual mind reading makes the story really entertaining.  Can't wait to read the rest.

haha nice work :)

Looking forward to Full Moon. Though I'm not sure how you're going to end having Edward leave and return without using the bday or the Volturi; I guess in the latter case, we can't really have Bella's human abilities coming to their attention this soon - I doubt they would've let her leave Volterra after saving Edward if they knew she could read minds AND shield simply as a human (an extraordinary one, at that!)

 

Author's Response:

Well I've decided to keep the Volturi and I've worked out the details.

Good chapter keep writing your awesome story you rock

FM should have more mind reading, more Mike (he makes for great moments), and more Cullens!  We need to see more interaction with Bella and the others now that they consider themselves her siblings.  I definitely can't wait to see how Bella's power will change or amplify when she is finally turned.  Thanks for posting Daybreak.  I really enjoyed it!

hey great chapter so far but good luck writing the next chapter esecially since it is in a differnet setting

That was great by the way i have never been on a date either and that seemed really great in description and good luck wrting the next chapter.

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:) love your writing girl (: