I really loved the movie, and I am really enjoying your story. You are an excellent writer, very meticulous in your use of detail, and extremely adept at capturing the essence of SM's characters, particularly Edward. That you take care to use correct spelling and have an excellent command of proper grammar aren't lost on me either--these are "details" that have ruined many an otherwise good piece of fanfiction for me.  I'm looking forward with great anticipation to your next chapter.

I loved this chapter!!  And yes I loved the movie too.

How far are you planning on writing?  I would really love it if you went into the 2 or so chapters that follow Bella's transformation ... you understand Edward very well and I would be so interested to read it as you saw it.

Thanks for this story, I absolutely love it.  You have a talent!

This chapter was beautifully written! Hearing the baby's thoughts and Edward's feelings on it all were just amazing.  :) Thanks for sharing it with us!

 

i really like this story so far. its nice to see what might have been happening when jacob wasnt around.

the movie was friggin amazing! beautiful! chris weitz is a genius.

can't wait for next chapter, I had fiddled with the idea of writing the scene when Leah bite into Bella, and I am looking forward to reading your take  :)

=] "Leah is coming and she's not happy." I'm definately excited for that!

 

Thank you!  I have been waiting anxiously for this chapter and you did not disappoint!   I was not sure how you would handle Renesmee's thoughts, could not imagine, but you did a beautiful job and made  me cry.  Absolutely perfect!  This is everything I was missing terribly in BD, I feel like I want to print it out and set it next to my copy of BD to complete the series.  You are a beautiful writer and capture Edward so perfectly and apparently Renesmee too! 

Keep writing!

LOVED THE MOVIE!!!  Already feeling anxious for the next one!! 

Great chapter.  Yea Edward!  Falling in love with his baby!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you like it.

I hope Eclipse is a good movie - so much happens in that book.  It's going to be hard to watch the whole love triangle thing (it's hard to read about it), but I can't wait.

wow it seems as if you have really got inside edwards mind i love it

Author's Response:

Thanks!

WOW!!!  I've really been looking forward to this chapter, with Edward hearing the baby!  Just AWESOME!!  I can't wait to see what Leah has to say.  I love your story;}!!!

 

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

What a great chapter.  This was the one I have really been waiting for.  You did a terrific job and I love the discussion between Bella and Edward which I always felt was missing from Breaking Dawn.

And I did love the movie.  I thought it was so much better than Twilight.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks - I'm glad you liked it!

I loved the movie, too!

THANK YOU!!!!

I have been waiting for the part where Renesmee finally speaks. So beautifully written, like edwards version of imprinting with Renesmee, the way his world shatteres and is realigned with a single focus. thank you thank you thank you

xxx

Miss Winkles

P.S. i loved the movie, seen it twice already, and if i wasnt flying out of the country on sunday i would be seeing it more. I hold Thailand has a cinema....although im not sure my husband to be would be appreciative of me drooling all over our boys on our honeymoon :)

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I really wanted to show how everthing changed for Edward in that moment.  After I wrote it, I realized it was almost like the "imprinting", but I thought it was really important to show that Edward's connection to Renesmee was just as powerful as Jacob's.

I'm going to see the movie for the second time today!!